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Postby mantlepiece » Wed Apr 24, 2013 4:05 am

ωєℓcσмє тσ νєησм ƒℓσωєя αяcнινєѕ,

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my frayed thread for story scraps and such.
I decided to recreate this thread into something more proper and personal... though i encourage nosiness i suppose. c:
Thank you for reading.

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.: νєησм ƒℓσωєя αяcнινєѕ :. [Jxgmut Hue]

Postby mantlepiece » Wed Apr 24, 2013 10:15 am

This is a few chips out of one of my earlier stories. If you noticed the strange title- it is in code. The title isn't bad or anything, it just spoils the story and i'd rather not risk someone stealing my favorite plot line. I hope you understand. c:
*Low gore alert*

"Why don't you want her to know? She might know how to fix it." Grace said, puzzled. Daniel relaxed a little, but ignored the what Grace said. He didn't want to be talked out of what he had decided.

She looked at Daniel with wild eyes. "Your- your..." but she started getting getting over excited again and couldn't finish. "For goodness sake! What's wrong with you?" Daniel demanded, annoyed. Grace calmed down than said two times her normal speed, "At the history and science museum I read something, at first i thought it was nonsense, but it can't be now that it's happening to you!" "What's happening to me?" Daniel asked anxiously.

The lion ran off, but quickly slowed down till he was standing still, then he shuddered and collapsed, falling onto his side. Daniel was about to go after it and finish it off when he heard Grace meekly call, "Daniel!" He snapped back to his senses and rushed over to her. She looked ready to faint. "Are you ok?" Daniel asked. "I feel sick." she whimpered. Daniel surveyed the area, blood was splattered here and there, most the leaves behind them were overturned, and plants were flattened or torn. Then Daniel looked at himself. On his left thigh there were three diagonal rips in his pants, a dark, sticky blotch covered it. His chest was thankfully untouched, he only had a couple of rips in his shirt. Daniel lifted his hands to his eyes, which were painted red from the lions blood.

"Your eyes didn't deceive you?" James queried the man on the other side of the phone. "No! It was all flippin' real! I wouldn't have believed it myself! But i saw it with my own two eyes!" The man shouted excitedly, causing James to move the receiver back a few inches from his ear as he thought for a moment. "Where was the picture taken?" He asked calmly. "I think it was the Grant's house, along Tui dr-" " Near where the lion carcass was found?" Dr. James interrupted. "Yes! Near there." The man replied. "Thank you for your help." "My pleasure!" James ended the call and handed the phone to the person that brought it in, who was politely standing by the white door. Dr. Harold sighed then muttered something to himself as he turned to resume his work, but James caught his arm. "May i investigate that house?" James said, trying to not sound like a child begging. Dr. Harold shook his head, "It's all fake. Get real James, your an anatomy professor, not some detective that researches hoaxes." James heart started to sink, but then flipped when he thought of something. "May I then look to ease my curiosity?" Harold stared at him for a while before sighing. "Fine. But be quick, and do it tomorrow." Slightly frustrated, he returned to his work. James composed himself and thanked him, then began back to his research room, his heart thumping as he silently hoped to get the truth.

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Re: .: Inspiration Nook :. [storage]

Postby Yoyo-boa » Sun May 05, 2013 10:45 am

That was really interesting and...out there:)
i wish i could write like that!!!
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.: Inspiration Nook :. [Sakra]

Postby mantlepiece » Sat May 11, 2013 11:10 am

Thank you sis!
Wow, i sounded really mysterious in the last post. Lol. I'm just a bit protective of my stories that i hope to publish, so... yeah. Hope you don't mind.
I was inspired by a game character (that i sorta created on those games where you customize your avatar and go on quests) to begin this story, I don't know if it will be finished, i will probably continue it as a hobby story and not publish it. So... this is a longer post and... yeah, lol. And no copying (including the name, i made it all up)! c:


Sakra was led down the neat, but dark, stone hallway in chains. The last time he had been captured was when he was much younger, but even then he wasn't handcuffed, let alone chained. It seemed the guards thought of him as very dangerous and didn't want to take any chances. Two guards in full, steel armor with swords strapped to their waist assorted him, one on each side. A lesser guard with only a knife and leather armor held the chains that secured Sakra's hands behind his back. And yet another lesser guard walked a couple of paces in front of the group, leading them up from the dungeon to some other place in the castle. Talk about paranoid.
Sakra sighed, slightly irritated. It was only dumb luck they had caught him, the one night he was staying at an inn. 'Next time i'll be sure to stay away from inn's.' he thought sarcastically to himself. As he marched, Sakra gazed down at his shoes, well, more like black, strong cloth wrapped securely around his feet, holding the soft but strong bark of the jalla tree to the soles of his feet. He wore a sleeveless top, black pants, and a heavy duty, though light belt, which usually held his high quality knives, a couple of bombs, smoke screen bombs, a pouch, and a rope. Unfortunately, they had been confiscated by a grumpy guard. Sakra also wore sturdy gloves, which, without the guards knowing, had tiny, special hooks on them that he had created, that enabled him to climb walls, trees and rocks with ease. They also had small knives tucked in them still.
Sakra thought as he was escorted up a flight of stairs, his mind whirring as he tried to come up with an escape plan. But none came to him that didn't involve killing the soldiers, sending the alarm off or running around with his hand behind his back. His thoughts faded as they rounded a corner, revealing a room at the end of a hallway, with it's tall, golden doors swung open.
Sakra was shoved into the large throne room and the doors were heaved shut with a resounding bang. The throne room was brighter than the rest of the castle, with about four windows that allowed the morning sunlight to stream in and four, tall poles that held bright, dancing flames. In the center of the room, directly in front of Sakra, was a black throne that seemed empty. Littered around the room randomly were guards and soldiers, standing resolute.
Sakra was trying to figure out what the throne was made out of when a shadowy figure on the throne, that he hadn't noticed before, shifted. "Ah, Sakra. Welcome to my palace, i hope your stay wasn't too uncomfortable." The shadowy figure greeted without a hint of sarcasm or mirth, which puzzled Sakra. A dozen retorts crossed his mind, but he decided to keep silent. The king gestured to someone to the right of him and a sharp "Hey!" sounded as two ladies were pushed closer to Sakra, who raised his eyebrows, previously thinking they had been guards. The one closest to him was heavily armored in dull grey, steel armor, she wore no helmet, allowing her shoulder length, dark sandy hair to fall neatly across one of her green-brown eyes. Her harsh expression told him she was used to being caught and had seen many deaths. The other girl wore a plain blue dress with tight sleeves that almost reached her elbows and fingerless gloves. Her long, dark brown hair was tied in a ponytail behind her head, her pale blue eyes betrayed her intelligence. Both had their hands tied behind their back, the armored one had chains while the other had rope. They eyed him like he was an alien, but he shrugged it off, he was used to it.
The king spoke up. "You three have been causing a lot of trouble in my kingdom, stealing, killing, upsetting my citizens and creating messes..." Sakra noticed the girl in the blue dress blush. "... Such crimes deserve death, or at least a life time imprisonment." Sakra gulped. He hadn't killed anyone, but spending the rest of his life in prison sounded worse than death, one night was bad enough. The king continued. "Being criminals, you have hid in the forest most your life. And i suppose you, Sakra, also hide because of your family's reputation and your... appearance." Sakra winced as the king's noble voice cracked, revealing the slightest of disgust. It was true though. He was considered a freak, a devil. Instead of skin, his whole body was covered in short, sleek, blue fur, and his teeth were all pointed, similar to a wolves. He had blue eyes, which were slightly darker than his fur and his medium length, black-with-a-hint-of-blue, spiked hair always stuck up chaotically. Sakra's appearance was unheard of, causing people to think he was bad luck. Plus, to make matters worse, because almost every one knew his parents were part of a conspiracy that killed hundreds of people, they hated him. Often people came searching for him, the last member of the now extinct group, to put an end to the murder. But Sakra was against killing, unless it was absolutely necessary. You'd think they'd have realized i don't murder by now.
The king stood up, making the three prisoners focus on the king again. The light from the torches lit up his head, revealing a face that resembled a 30 year olds. He had a closely trimmed beard, his dark eyes sparkled with a strange kindness. A thin circlet of gold rested on his head, which held a white gem on the front, he wore a red robe over his shoulders, with small gold patterns covering it. Sakra snapped out of his day dreams when the king offered, "I would like to give you the opportunity to wipe your records clean. I will let you live in my kingdom unhindered and in peace, but only if you will do something for me." Sakra stared at him. "What did you want us to do?" The king glanced at him before replying in a matter-of-fact tone of voice. "Either swear you will do as i ask or be killed on the spot." Sakra's blood ran cold as the soldiers shifted eagerly, their armor rattling or rasping. Sakra watched the guards, there was no way he could avoid this many soldiers with his hands chained. The two girls seemed to be thinking the same things as their eyes searched the room. It was an obvious choice. "I swear i will do as you ask." Sakra spoke clearly, with a hint of sarcasm, just to annoy the king. The warrior girl eyed Sakra with distaste before speaking for the first time, her voice harsh and firm. "Fine, i swear." The other girl replied in the same way, grudgingly stating with a sweet accent. "I swear." The king nodded. "Of course, you could easily break that oath, so-" "Want me to swear on my mother's grave then?" Sakra joked in a silly tone of voice. A guard shoved him in the back with the butt of a sword. "Ow!" He grinned, amused. The warrior girl looked at him, her expression saying, 'What is your problem?!' While the other girl stifled a smile.
The king ingnored them and cleared his throat before continuing. "So you will have to swear by the sun." The room immediately returned to feeling like a death chamber.
Swearing by the sun was serious, if you broke your promise, the rumors said you instantly died, turning into dust, and your spirit would forever roam the sky. Sakra wasn't always sure what to make of the rumors, the sun had done very strange things in the past, so the rumors weren't impossible. Can't be worse than being run through. "Stand over here." The king commanded, gesturing to the windows to the right of him, the left of Sakra, who mentally shrugged and made his way over there before the guards could jab him again. The other two prisoners followed indecisively.
Sakra stared out the window in front of him. The bright day made him squint as his eyes adjusted to the light. Many houses, stalls and wooden buildings surrounded the castle, outlining the town was a tall, stone wall, cutting off the peasants, farms and forests.
When each prisoner was looking out of a separate window, the king declared, "Now, look at the sun and repeat after me..." Sakra squinted at the sun, making his eyes start watering. Hurry up! "... I swear by the sun..." The king began. "I swear by the sun..." They echoed in unison. "...that i will complete this quest for Aramon, king of Reshish and obey his commands." He finished and the three repeated after him. As soon as they had said what was required, they turned away, rubbing their eyes. Sakra tried to look at 'his majesty' again but could only see shifting shadows. He squeezed his sore eyes shut again then tried to refocus, but he still couldn't see well enough. A soldier shoved Sakra, almost knocking him over, but he managed to stumble forward to the middle of the room, still half blind.
"Right, i want you to find the white sword for me." The king, who apparently was named Aramon, said strait out. "But, sir, that sword is a myth!" The girl in the dark blue dress objected. A guard got ready to whack her over the head but backed away when the king glared at him. "The sword is not a myth, i assure you." Aramon argued. "Anyway, i want you to find it and bring it to me before the Night Festival. I will provide transportation and anything else you will need, i will also send a couple of guards to help you." The soldiers looked slightly disturbed at the sound of this, which made Sakra grin stupidly. "You will treat the guards kindly, and fairly, nobody in your group will be better than the other." He added, eyeing Sakra like a dangerous weapon. "Awww." Sakra played, causing the guards to shift uneasily. Aramon rolled his eyes. "Guards, you may release them, they are bound by their oath to not harm you or try escape their fate." The soldiers hesitantly unchained them and cut the other girl's rope, taking an extra long time with Sakra's chains.
When he was finally free, Sakra rubbed his arms, longing to run off into the blue. "Could i have my things back?" "You will get them on your way out." replied the king. "Remember, be good to my soldiers, be back with the white sword by the Night festival this year, and do not ever reveal to anyone your quest." The three nodded, hanging on to his words. "Jarame, Varin, you two will go on this mission." Two guards in the crowd stepped forward, not looking too pleased, each wearing full on armor. "You will find the things you need at the gate entrance, good luck. You are dismissed." Aramon finalized, sitting wearily back in his throne. Sakra quickly went to the back of the room, feeling the eyes of everyone in the room bore into his back. As he heaved a gold door open a crack, enough for him to get out, Sakra heard the footsteps of four other people behind him approaching. He slipped through the crack and waited for the others to exit. The girl in armor came out first, ignoring Sakra, then the other girl, who looked at him like an infection. When the two guards popped out, one of them, with light blond hair and kind eyes came up to Sakra and dipped his head, a sign of recognition. " My name is Jarame, i'll show you the entrance, this castle can be quite a maze." He smiled and led the group down the flight of stairs that Sakra had come up a while ago. The other guard, who must've been Varin, had longer, dark hair that almost reached his bitter, brown-green eyes.
It took a few minutes for the silent group to get through the castle, onto horses, through town and to the gate. By the time they dismounted the sun was midway on it's path through the sky.

The still, hot air caused sweat to bead on the group as Sakra gazed at the many rickety houses lined up beside the main road. The five mounted their new horses right in front of the gate, waiting for a messenger to bring their belongings and provisions. As Sakra mounted his dark brown horse, he turned to the girl in the blue dress, who sat on a speckled white and toffee mare. "Since we're stuck together, may i know your name?" She whipped her head around and stared at Sakra for a moment before stating, "Ethrir, i hope you know how to ride a horse." And she beckoned her mare to move forward, leaving him alone with his stallion. "Nice to meet you too." Sakra mumbled. Just then, the messenger galloped up to the group on a horse with a bunch of bags tied to the leather saddle. He slowed his horse and hopped off, then grabbed all the bags and marched toward them. "These are the food, one bag for each of you, it should be enough for 10 meals." He quickly explained, handing out a bag of food to each person. Sakra decided to find out what was in it later. "A pouch of money for each of you, use it sparingly." The messenger handed them each a jingling pouch before walking up to the armored girl. "Your sword, helmet, money, backpack, dagger, dagger and spare sword." He stated, handing the items to her as he said them. Then, going over to the other girl, in the same way handed her her things. "Here's your staff, knife, book, bag and pouch." Finally, the man came up to Sakra, hesitating slightly before handing him all his belongings in silence. Sakra nodded his thanks and worked at tying his belongings to the saddle.
Finally, when everyone was packed and ready to go, Sakra trotted his steed over infront of the group. "Ok, so your Jarame..." he over viewed, pointing to each person as he said their name. "Your Varin, your Ethrir, and your..." he paused at the armored girl, realizing he didn't know her name. "Sorry, i didn't catch your name." "Vri." She said without emotion. "Right, and Vri." He ended. Sakra backed his horse up slightly before looking over through the gate. But when he gazed over the fields, farms and the distant forest, he could not feel free or relieved, he still felt chained, tense, though a sense of thrill, like this was the beginning of something huge, lingered in his mind. He took a deep breath and pushed the emotions elsewhere before looking back at the others. "Shall we go?" Instead of an answer Vri pushed her white stallion foward with a sharp, "High-ya!" And a slap on it's rear. As she galloped out of the city, dust trailing behind her, the rest of them ordered their steed forward. "Come on, lets catch up!" Sakra whispered to his horse, who, with a some gentle kicks in it's side, rushed forward, galloping up to Vri. "Yeah!" he praised, grinning at the sensation of the wind rushing through his fur and and the earthy fragrance rising from the upset dirt.


Well, that's the first chapter of... haven't thought of a name yet. XD Hope you enjoyed it! (Please let me know if you did.) I forgot to say, you can comment or... ask questions or... you get the point, but i will reply through PM, so as to keep this storage fairly tidy. (: I appreciate you reading this. ;)
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.: νєησм ƒℓσωєя αяcнινєѕ :. [Archived Intro.]

Postby mantlepiece » Wed May 15, 2013 12:13 pm

This was an introduction to one of my stories, but i changed the story plot and it is no longer... it just doesn't work.
17/11/13

Earth is destroyed.
Most everyone is dead.
There isn't hope for humanity any more.
How did this happen?
The world forgot their mistakes of the past...and world war three happened. "A war to end all wars" they called it. But the war itself wasn't what killed everyone.
During the war everyone was scrambling to create more atomic bombs than their adversaries. Near the end of the war some of the scientists in Russia who were in the bomb making business met up with another group of scientists that specialized in... something other than bomb making. After some time, and with the permission of the Russian government, they stopped creating atom bombs and joined minds with the other group of scientists to try make a bigger, better bomb.
It didn't take long.
After about half a year they had a bomb that could potentially wipe out half the world's population. But there was one problem: It hadn't been tested.
Desperation overlooked this fact and they went out to drop the bomb on the opposite side of the world from Russia. Of course, something happened, though nobody is quite sure how.
Halfway to the destination the bomb was dropped... And it worked...
It disintegrated at least something of every continent, including Russia. Asia, Australia and New Zealand were left most untouched though, but it didn't matter.
The bomb also created a whole bunch of harmful gases, polluting the air that the survivors breathed.
Nobody was spared.
Everybody was effected.
Some died, most were "altered", the rest was mutated.
That leads us to the present, my story.
I am one of the mutants.
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.: νєησм ƒℓσωєя αяcнινєѕ :. [My Stories]

Postby mantlepiece » Thu Jun 06, 2013 3:08 pm

These are all the stories i've put on CS, in order of least recent to most recent:

Through and Feathers~ Adventure, action, sci-fi, fantasy; no longer posting on CS, paused; excuse the weird name.
Hybrid~ ?; will probably combine it with another story- plot wasn't good enough.
Safe~ Action, survival, apocalyptic; paused; zombie story.
The Way of a Warrior~ CS pet diary; action, adventure, fantasy; discontinued; i don't recommend reading this, it stinks.
Untitled~ Action, Adventure, Fantasy; may post more, in progress.
Wings~ Adventure, fantasy; paused; series of short stories.
FYI: That was Sarcasm~ CS pet story, sci-fi, adventure; considering discontinuing.
The End~ Sci-fi, adventure, apocalyptic; discontinued.

If you've read any of them, thank you so much!
If you have any critique i'd love to hear it. How can i improve if nobody points out my mistakes? c;
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Re: .: Inspiration Nook :. [Life in a White Coat?]

Postby mantlepiece » Sat Jun 29, 2013 10:57 am

Here is something random i came up with... Lemme know what you think!

My eyelids flicked open, revealing the white roof of my room. I sat up in bed and yawned. Another boring day. Pushing myself out of bed I wiped the sleep out of my eyes and headed for the bathroom.
After showering I dressed into my usual grey, uniform pants and black, long-sleeved shirt. Then i brushed my gold-brown, wavy hair and applied make-up before bouncing downstairs to the kitchen. "Hi mom." I greeted woman with wavy brown hair that shadowed her soft hazel eyes. "Morning Erin!" She sang. "Want me to make you some eggs and bacon?" I smiled at my mothers cheery tone. "Yes please, just one egg though." "Coming right up!"
I approached the corner of the kitchen and put some coffee on to roast.
"Be right back, I just need to get my things for work." I told my mother before climbing the stairs, not waiting for an answer.
I gazed at the papers strewn across my desk and sighed.
I worked at the secret division of the science university, something only a handful of people knew about. The work was mildly interesting, I mostly did research, which is rarely exciting. But every now and then I would help with the the more complicated tests. I stifled a smirk. I probably would be a full time doctor if the others weren't so proud. Their pride would be majorly shaken if an 18 year old got a highly sophisticated job in the division.
I shook my head to dismiss the thoughts and grabbed the papers I would need.
Snapping the briefcase closed, I hopped down the stairs again where a plate sizzling bacon and poached eggs waited. Mom was nowhere in sight, she must be doing jobs around the house. I poured my coffee and ate breakfast, glancing at the clock.
I jumped into 'my' car and sped off to work, arriving 5 minutes early.
I walked up to the enormous, modern building, breathing in the chilly morning air. "Aaah." I sighed happily.
I glanced around me, eyeing the people from teens to seniors heading for the main doors of the university. Trust nobody. I mentally commanded myself before letting my neat shoes clip across the campus toward the entry to the basement, every now and then discreetly checking to see if anyone was watching. As I came to an old, metal door, I slipped a little key from my jacket pocket and used it to unlock and open the door, before quickly sliding inside. I carefully locked the door behind me and ventured forward, down the dim, dank stairway.
When I got to the bottom a thick door with an ID scanner blocked the way. I slid my card into the ID scanner and entered through the door as soon as it beeped. I came to an even darker hallway that smelled of wet concrete and had an eerie feeling to it. As I walked I mulled over certain thoughts in my head and stared at the video cameras spying on the corridor.
Finally I got to another door with a security code, and punched in the numbers, 6-9-8-0.
The door clicked and I swung it open. I snatched a lab coat off a hook on the light grey walls and shoved it on. "Hey Erin, looking beautiful as ever." I rolled my eyes at the familiar voice. "Hi, Luke." I turned to see my semi-friend grinning at me like a winner of the lottery. I say semi-friend because he is a total flirt with every pretty girl within half a mile, which gets very annoying, as you can imagine.
"What will it be today?" He queried, his blue eyes sparkling with anticipation. "No! For the last time: let it go!" I snapped. He began walking off, his thick, brown hair bouncing with his gait. "Come on! Just one kiss." I sighed and followed, coming up beside him in silence. "You know I'm gonna keep asking till you say yes." He teased. "And I'll keep saying no." I replied in a similar tone of voice. "Whatever. What work do you have today?" "I just need to finish some research on one particular chemical which-" "Spare me the details." The 21 year old groaned. I punched him playfully in the arm. "Fine, I suppose your brain couldn't handle that much knowledge anyway." He returned a shove. "Oh, so your now super intelligent?" "I didn't say that! Oh, here's my stop, see you!" I ended the conversation and ducked into the research room.
It was a simple room with ceiling high cabinets around the walls filled with files; two large desks were in the middle, of which six people sat staring at paper or their computer screen. I sighed again. Boring old work... The other research room would've been ideal, but i wasn't qualified.
I picked my way over to the far side of the room and sat in the only seat left. Even though I didn't have much work to do, it was going to be a long day.

I finally finished my designated work not long after lunch break. I packed my results up and took them with me to the main office, where the manager worked.
I knocked on the door a couple of times but getting no reply I barged right in. Finding the manager was not there I just left the papers on his desk; most of the time he was out and about, overseeing things.
I exited, and wandered aimlessly down the pristine hallway, bored out of my skull with nothing to do. As I walked I spotted a door labeled:

Section 2a - Tests and specimens

Nobody had restricted this part of the laboratory, so curiosity pushed me through the door. I found myself in a short hallway with a steel door at the end and an ID scanner. I inserted my ID card into the slot and hoped for a beep. "Beep!" I smiled and went through the door.
A gasp escaped my lips.
All along I knew I had been helping scientists try create a super human through DNA mutation, and I knew they mostly used children and teens as test subjects. But i had never seen the results of our hands. As I walked down the corridor of clean cells, i felt as though I was walking through a dream. Creatures sat miserably behind bars, glaring or growling at me, some came up to the bars and reached out for me. Some humanoids had animal parts, some had alien parts, some looked normal, some looked like unimaginable monsters.
I shuddered inwardly. I helped make these? Pausing to look at a certain mutant huddle in a cage, I studied a girl with curious tattoos on her cheeks, down her neck to her arms and legs. She glanced up at me and scowled, not saying a word. I looked sorrowfully at her and pressed on painfully. I could've been one of these test subjects! I stifled a sob. Deep down in my mind something clicked. I had to help these kids! I would not be able to live with myself if I didn't.
Suddenly I came to a door, I opened it and saw another short corridor with another door at the end, but this time, it had a keypad. I decided to not try the usual number, it would probably be different anyway and I had a growing feeling I wasn't meant to be here. But instead of leaving I couldn't help but put my ear against the door and listen.
"We don't have any choice but to start kidnapping children." A voice growled in frustration. "We cannot do that; people would start getting suspicious." A voice that belonged to the manager replied calmly. "Ok, so do we just stop our work? There aren't enough children!" The other voice shook with anger. A silence followed. After about a minute the manager spoke up. "Perhaps we will have to shut down the division, and just make the best we can with the subjects we have." "But we're almost finished out research! Just one or two more tests and we might have our perfect man." "Who will you do the tests on?" More silence. "Let me think about it." The other voice dismissed. Footsteps came over to the door.
I didn't waste time, soon I was out into the main, grey hallway.

The black coffee was tasteless in my mouth as I sipped on it. The fancy wallpaper, the tables and everything else in the university café seemed unreal to me. Who am I?
I stared blankly ahead, indifferent to everything but the image of the depressed children.
"Erin." I blinked a few times at the sound of my name. Looking up I saw the manager gazing down at me. I shook away the awful thoughts and stood up, reality shoved itself back in my face.
"Sorry sir, I forgot to report to you." I stuttered. He smiled, but his brown eyes darkened almost to the tone of his short, black hair. "Don't worry, I'm not here to scold you, I have a new job for you."
I stared at him. Only an hour ago i would've jumped for joy, but now, i almost wished he would fire me. I forced a fake smile to grow on my face. He smiled back and turned to leave. "Come with me, and we shall discuss this elsewhere."

I trailed my manager down the grey hallway, silence shrouding us like a heavy blanket. Apart from us, the corridors were empty, since everyone was working, making the walk seem longer and more creepy than it should've been.
Soon we came to the door that held all the specimens inside and the manager stopped abruptly in front of it. My stomach flipped nervously as i gave him a questioning look. Would i be able to walk through there again without breaking into tears?
As he opened the door i took a deep breath and followed him in.
I walked down the isle of prison cells, trying not to look at the pitiful children as they cowered at the sight of the doctor.

Right, i will be adding more soon. Near the end i must remember to add a chimpanzee that carries a giant egg and talks about sunscreen. How's that for random! Maybe i should rename this storage from 'Inspiration Nook' to 'Random Stuff'...hmm.
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Romans 3:23-24


I've loved being on CS (a bit too much) but I have people in my life that I need to prioritize, plus, I have a life that I can live if I wasn't spending so much time on here. ☺ So, i'm gonna be tying up some loose ends then leaving. Over and out!

In memory of Toviel

Does your belief suit you or reality?

Why do you really believe what you believe?

There can only be one truth. But which is it?

There is hope in Christ.

"For God so loved the world, that he gave his only Son, that whoever believes in him should not perish but have eternal life."
John 3:16, English Standard Version Bible
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Re: .: Inspiration Nook :. [Her]

Postby mantlepiece » Sat Aug 10, 2013 3:39 pm

Something random i came up with while i was cooking sausages:

Dean patiently watched his boss pace the room like a goldfish swimming back and forth in a glass bowl. He was dealing with a complicated matter, and it required a lot of thought.
"If we don't act now, she'll find out..." The boss mumbled. "...Then we would loose her. But if we acted now, she would learn too much... and i don't fancy someone that important, dead." He huffed and plopped down in his comfy, office chair, resting his head on his folded hands for a moment before lifting his gaze to Dean. "What do you suggest?"
Dean gulped, he was rarely asked for an opinion. "I'm not sure, sir. It needs much time to process."
His boss huffed. "Yes, yes, i know. But we don't have time, it's either now or never!"
Dean averted his gaze from the irritated man to the grey ceiling in fake thought. And there was silence.
After what seemed like five minutes a loud bang sounded as the boss thumped his fist on the desk. Dean jumped in fright at the sudden noise but quickly recollected himself.
"That's it!" His boss stated with a gleam in his eyes and a fire in his voice. "Send word: shoot her with a strong tranquilizer and bring her here immediately, we'll run some test while keeping her under, then we can send her elsewhere, where she can't learn anything and study her further there."
Dean held back a grin and gave a slight nod. "Right away, sir."
He turned to leave, but just before he could reach the door he heard his boss add, "Oh, and bring me some coffee will you?"
Haha! That had nothing to do with sausages! :lol:
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.: νєησм ƒℓσωєя αяcнινєѕ :. [Story Trashcan]

Postby mantlepiece » Fri Sep 06, 2013 4:17 am

Sometimes i come up with so many story ideas i don't know what to do with them all. Here you will find some stories i've decided not to write out. You're welcome to get ideas from here and incorporate them into your story, but please: No stealing!

Forgetful is a story I had been hoping to write, but the plot is kinda boring and I've lost muse: So Aurora wakes up at this boarding school with a bunch of kids who have supernatural abilities (e.g. telepathy, strength, fire control...), like herself. All the students don't remember a thing about their past. Aurora and her friends soon notice something's up, so naturally, they investigate. They eventually find out who they really are: kidnapped teens who have been experimented on, mind-wiped and put in a school that's made to train them for the army or secret services. They're all government weapons. You can pretty much guess what happens next but I haven't thought that far, but eventually they escape.

The End was going to be about how a girl survives the end of the world (so to speak). One day she wakes up and she and her sister have turned into mutants because of something in the water. But most other people have turned into zombies or are dead. They have to survive in the new world, etc.

Some scientists kidnap kids, do an operation on them so they live longer, then put them on a spaceship and send them out to space. The scientist were trying to find the edge of space or something- explore the universe type stuff.
Many (like many many) years later, the sun burned out and earth is now a frozen rock polluted with ruins and stuff. The spaceship is on autopilot (so it's still going further into space) the kids should've died AGES ago but they look like their in their twenties. Well i don't know what happens next- maybe they find the edge of space and time, or crash on a populated planet or aliens take them hostage.

A guy finds himself in an alley way with no memory of himself or he wakes up in a house with fake parents. The point is he does these amazing (not supernatural) things like hack a computer or defeat a grown man in a fist fight (i dunno). He was a spy but then the organization that recruited him had wiped his memory and got rid of him. The enemy organization seeks him out in an attempt to recruit him, tries find answers (not knowing any of his past). Maybe his organization wiped his memory and dropped him because he learnt something he shouldn't have?
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.: Inspiration Nook :. [Eerily silent]

Postby mantlepiece » Thu Sep 12, 2013 2:54 pm

I often go browsing a few hundred pages back in the forum, Share and Discuss Your Writing. Often the things I click on are only one page long, and end abruptly and (to me) mysteriously. The feeling inspired me to describe it...

Empty and lonely, forgotten and neglected.
The floor boards creak under my gentle steps, dust jumps into the air, as though it is excited at the sound of a presence. Neat little windows allow faint beams of sunshine to cast a lonely light on the quaint room. Elegant couches with rich embroidery and plush pillows give the place a formal air, yet a simple coffee table in the center covered with entertaining magazines, interesting drawings and quirky coffee mugs add a flavor of homeliness and fun to the lovely abode.
As I finish gazing at the happy pictures on the wall, each telling a story of love, joy, good times and perhaps a tint of heartbreak too, I breathe in the the musty smell of aged wood and old cobwebs. A reminder that this place is deserted and left in the past.
I shudder. Why would anyone want to leave such a wonderful place? What happened?
I sigh sadly. Perhaps this will be a mystery unanswered for all eternity, left to collect dust on its own accord.
Hesitantly, I turn and push through the door with perfect carvings and engravings.
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