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She-Cat
43 Moons
Wants to be Deputy
--
Mateless
Without Offspring
Sister to Beetlewhisker
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Goldenthroat has always
been successful,
striving to do the best
she can in anything. As an
apprentice, she took the
Warrior Code very seriously,
doing her best to follow
every law and every rule set
to guide the Clans. She
values loyalty above all.
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------While she is incredibly dependable, Goldenthroat does struggle with seeing things the way StarClan intended. Sometimes she neglects to form bonds with other cats, too enwarped in her duties and unable to see her own need for companionship. While she has never considered getting a mate, her brother often tells her it would be a good idea, but her ambition drives her to dismiss these possibilities and pursue the path that she believes the Clan of Stars has chosen for her. She is eager to see who the next deputy will be, and does desperately want the rank, though she would go to no appalling length to do so. She specializes in speed and is particularly good at hunting rabbits, but hates trees and prefers not to climb unless it is completely necessary.Ⴆҽҽƚʅҽɯԋιʂƙҽɾ
Tom
43 Moons
Warrior
--
Mateless
Without Offspring
Brother to Goldenthroat
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Beetlewhisker hasn't always
been what he's expected
to be, often much lazier
and much more laid
back than most other
Warriors. He always
manages to get things
done, but really isn't the best
example for most cats, and
therefore has never had
an apprentice.
----------------------------------------------------------While he is kind of a leech to the Clan society, Beetlewhisker often is more jovial than most cats. He loves to tell stories and chase leaves or snowflakes, and adores kits. He has a good sense of humor, and is quite the hunter, though he's a lazy. When he wants to get work done, he does things well, but it's too much to expect him to do everything. He's just, well, not exactly dependable. He values truth, and tries his best to avoid situations where he might get mixed up in things he doesn't want to be involved in. He longs for a mate.ŚŐŔŔĔĹРÁŴ
Tom
11 Moons
Apprentice
--
Mateless
Without Offspring
No Kin of Notice
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Sorrelpaw is quiet,
typically saying nothing and keeping
to himself. He hates company,
and really doesn't usually like
other cats much. He likes to
work alone and is know for
being particularly vicious in
fights.
------------------Any cat who knows Sorrelpaw knows to stay away. Even though he's quiet, and looks small due to hunching over, he's vicious, and somewhat of a bully. He was orphaned at a young age, his father, mother and two siblings disappearing in the forest one night during a hunt. They simply never came back. Rumors float around that is was none other than Sorrelpaw who killed them, but most cats know better. He's a small apprentice, after all. This fact aside, some cats are still wary of him, frightened by the prospect of his being to rough, to angry.
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