*Shadowclan* accepting~

[Kaitlynizer]

{That didn't take you long xD She's way outside clan borders..}

(( oh, okay. I fixed the post now ;3 ))

[paintkid]

(recap?)(I have no idea whats going on this is crazy!!)

[watchdog.]

{Ok thanks.}

Flamespots stumbled out into the rain. She thought it was beginning to ease off. She started off in search of cobwebs.

[watchdog.]

{um...basically Flamespots is lost, Orangetail is searching for her, and Wolfcry left the clan.}

[Kaitlynizer]

(recap?)(I have no idea whats going on this is crazy!!)

((lol, I gtg,. bye.... ))

Orangetail was still searching

[Thatrandomdragon]

Wolfcry looked down fron the tree. There had been something wrong with Flamespots, he just couldn't put his tail on it. He looked over at his children. They were beautiful. Sleeping in the soft patters of rain. He sighed. If only he coyld have lived like this in the clan..

[watchdog.]

Flamespots neared the river. She could hear it roaring up ahead. She rubbed her ears. That river is really loud, she thought. Oops, mistake. She took her paw away from her ear. It was covered in blood. She walked faster, and soon found a dead log covered in cobwebs. She collected a pawful and stuck them too her ear.

[Kaitlynizer]

(( back ))

Orangetail sighed, and went outside the clan border to look for flamespots.

[paintkid]

Rosepaw got up and sniffed the air and thought to herself "all these scents are leading out of camp! I must follow them and find out what's going on!" she then grabbed some herbs and cobwebs "just in case" she thought, and she was about to leave when a starry cat padded up to her "hello, I am thunderstar one of the past leaders of this clan" he said, and Rosepaw did a double take "wha..?" she replied; completely swept off her feet. The starry cat then replied "one of your clan members is lost and hurt, and another has left.. you will find the lost one by big water, and the one who left must make a choice. Now, it is your turn to make a choice." and then the starry cat vanished. Rosepaw raced out of camp as fast as her legs would carry her. "what am I going to do? this is horrible!" she thought franticly

[paintkid]

(hey guys what did you think of that paragraph writing wise, just wondering if its book quality or is that out of the question?)