by The One & Only Vapor » Fri Aug 30, 2013 2:53 pm
YES YES YES OMG YES ALL OF THEM WOLF //shotdead
Now you get critique.
1.) Absolutely adorable! Would it be an ava? I love it <333
2.) IT. WAS. SO. FAN. TABULOUS. Give us those as gift lines, right now. <333
and oh dear god i know you won't but please could i just color Talasanje on them x.x
3.) That is probably my favorite one out of that entire art dump. I swear, Wolf, giveme those lines as a PSD and I will personally finish them. ;o;
4.) One of my favorite poses ever...cx It's a bit sketchy {no duh}, and the lines are a bit...out of proportion ^^, but it looks like it could come along nicely ovo
5.) No comment on that adorableness. Glad you kept it for yourself. x3
6.) Too fluffy in my personal opinion...too soft and round and fluffy eue But that's just mr, haaah. The paws look a bit odd, but nice work! ^^
7.) Dat avvie is cute but looks like one you did before ;3;
8.) Naaww. I feel sad just looking at them. So many feels -cuddles JMD used as reference in dem sketches-
9.) {And 10, 12, 13 and 14.} SO MUCH LYFA. xox No comment...Lyfa is scary e.o
11.) YOKIKO HAS SO MUCH LOCKS IN HER MAAANNEEE~
15.) Awww....Ayren...-snuggles poor baby tight- Dun worry, I lahffs chu. Same goes for 16, you're so adorbs when you're blushing <333
17.) I dunno, this one is the 1 I'm iffy on, the angle and mouth expression combined look odd omo
18.) That right/far hind leg needs...some enlarging...xD I like the pose, though.
19.) Amg Ceciiilllee ;u; You need to make those gift lines, I absolutely adore the paintbrush and pose c'x
20.) Uuhhhmmm...yes. Taken...things. xD
21.) OMG nu so scaarryyyyy -hides- Evilness nopenopenope ;3;
22.) Does look a little floppyish xP But clean it up some and it will look nice ^^ I dunno what's wrong really, it just looks...off somehow...
23.) Add some stars and a night sky, it would look precciiouusss cx
24.) Aww, no it's not bad, the anatomy proportion is a bit off but it's from your earlier days, don't be ashamed ^-^
25.) {And 26, 27} Again, a bit iffy, but they don't really need any critique, they're just early simple sketches and you've gotten a lot better owo
28.) Aww, poor Ayren
again
x3
He is so adorable though, like seriously <3333
And don't change yourself just to fit someone else Ayrem bby e3e
So.
WOLF.
OH DEAR ITALY PLEASE LET ME STEAL YOUR ART SKILLS.
Amg.
Even those older ones...
Incredible ;w; //cannotevendescribehowmuchtheclubcan'thandleyourightnow//
I mean...holy Rome.
That's good art right there.
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