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by Brittle » Thu Aug 22, 2013 1:01 pm
I had a dream. A girl named Chicago Rose walked up too me and offered me a glass of green liquid, splashed of red here and there. Strange, I know. But when I drank it, my stomach almost turned upside down because of the poison in it. Of course I was dead, in my dream, within minutes. For some reason, Chicago Rose told me her name plain and simple just before I died in her arms. "My name is Chicago Rose," the name was so pretty I remember smiling in the dream- or at least my cheeks pushed out wards in the beginning of a smile. Then I remembered that this girl killed me, or was going too. But the look on her face was pure guilt and regret, no way was this her fault. She must've been put up too it, or something. Now Chicago must've been a lovely person, because she whispered, "I'm sorry," into my ears just before I 'died'. Now instead of a murderer I imagined her as an insecure girl, caring, selfless, every quality that makes a person good was in her. Of course she had just committed first degree manslaughter, but I couldn't hold her accountable for some reason.
So now, the girl who killed me, is my favorite character of all time. But the fact is, I cannot remember her face. So this thread is too post my possibly fruitless tries at capturing Chicago Rose's exact features. She's out there somewhere, I know it. My quest is too find her.
And as soon as possible.
[Please don't post!!]
copyrights;
images too all rightful owners.
the name chicago rose too me.
coding too me.
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◣xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx◢ ʟɪᴛᴛʟᴇ ᴍɪss sɴᴀᴋᴇ ᴇʏᴇs wrote:name- chicago rosetta.
gender- female
age- eighteen
nickname- chicago rose, cags, rosie.
mother- skylar iris rosetta
father- samson peterson rosetta
sisters- eden
theme song- natalie
-- ʀᴜɪɴᴇᴅ ᴍʏ ʟɪғᴇ--hair- wish brown, goes too her shoulders.
[not dyed, it just turned out that's way]
eyes- green.
figure- tall and skinny
skin- naturally pale
scars- scattered about her back but the
serious ones are on her neck.
tattoos- only
one
piercings- ears
birthmarks- on her ear, half
of the lobe is a light brown.
eyesight- black raybands
-- ˁᴴᴱ ᴮᴱᵀᵀᴱᴿ ᴿᵁᴺ--positive- caring, sweet, not too forward.
negative- quiet, insecure,
shy around new people.
problems- past anorexia.
orientation- heterosexual
crush- here
label- the childish one, the wannabe princess.
social rank- none
popularity- in the middle.
secrets- her past anorexia.
other- quote box was made by pumpkin queen.
credit to her. writing to me. pictures to owners.
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gender- female
age- eighteen
nickname- chicago rose, cags, rosie.
mother- skylar iris rosetta
father- samson peterson rosetta
sisters- eden
theme song- natalie
-- ʀᴜɪɴᴇᴅ ᴍʏ ʟɪғᴇ--hair- light red.
eyes- medium brown, goes past her shoulder blades.
figure- tall and skinny
skin- naturally pale
scars- scattered about her back but the
serious ones are on her neck.
tattoos- only
one
piercings- ears
birthmarks- on her ear, half
of the lobe is a light brown.
eyesight- black raybands
-- ˁᴴᴱ ᴮᴱᵀᵀᴱᴿ ᴿᵁᴺ--positive- immature, childish, happy go
lucky,
negative- demanding, protective,
shy around new people.
problems- past anorexia.
orientation- heterosexual
crush- here
label- the childish one, the wannabe princess.
social rank- none
popularity- in the middle.
secrets- her past anorexia.
other- quote box was made by pumpkin queen.
credit to her. writing to me. pictures to owners.
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ʟɪᴛᴛʟᴇ ᴍɪss sɴᴀᴋᴇ ᴇʏᴇs wrote:name- chicago rosetta.
gender- female
age- eighteen
nickname- chicago rose, cags, rosie.
mother- skylar iris rosetta
father- samson peterson rosetta
sisters- eden
theme song- natalie
-- ʀᴜɪɴᴇᴅ ᴍʏ ʟɪғᴇ--hair- was a dark brown, but now a light black.
[not dyed, it just turned out that's way]
eyes- green.
figure- tall and skinny
skin- naturally pale
scars- scattered about her back but the
serious ones are on her neck.
tattoos- only
one
piercings- ears
birthmarks- on her ear, half
of the lobe is a light brown.
eyesight- black raybands
-- ˁᴴᴱ ᴮᴱᵀᵀᴱᴿ ᴿᵁᴺ--positive- caring, sweet, not too forward.
negative- quiet, insecure,
shy around new people.
problems- past anorexia.
orientation- heterosexual
crush- here
label- the childish one, the wannabe princess.
social rank- none
popularity- in the middle.
secrets- her past anorexia.
other- quote box was made by pumpkin queen.
credit to her. writing to me. pictures to owners.
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by Brittle » Thu Aug 22, 2013 1:21 pm

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ʟɪᴛᴛʟᴇ ᴍɪss sɴᴀᴋᴇ ᴇʏᴇs wrote:name- chicago rosetta.
gender- female
age- eighteen
nickname- chicago rose, cags, rosie.
mother- skylar iris rosetta
father- samson peterson rosetta
sisters- eden
theme song- natalie
-- ʀᴜɪɴᴇᴅ ᴍʏ ʟɪғᴇ--hair- raven black, goes a little
past her shoulders.
eyes- walnut brown
figure- tall and skinny
skin- naturally pale
scars- scattered about her back but the
serious ones are on her neck.
tattoos- only
one
piercings- ears
birthmarks- on her ear, half
of the lobe is a light brown.
eyesight- black raybands
-- ˁᴴᴱ ᴮᴱᵀᵀᴱᴿ ᴿᵁᴺ--positive- intelligent, quiet,
good at listening.
negative- insecure, protective,
shy around new people.
problems- past anorexia.
orientation- heterosexual
crush- Mallory or Cody.
label- the writer, the insecure one.
social rank- nerd, quiet girl.
popularity- at the very bottom,
secrets- her past anorexia.
other- quote box was made by pumpkin queen.
credit to her. writing to me. pictures to owners.
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by Brittle » Thu Aug 22, 2013 1:31 pm
ʟɪᴛᴛʟᴇ ᴍɪss sɴᴀᴋᴇ ᴇʏᴇs wrote:name- chicago rosetta.
gender- female
age- eighteen
nickname- chicago rose, cags, rosie.
mother- skylar iris rosetta
father- samson peterson rosetta
sisters- eden
theme song- natalie
-- ʀᴜɪɴᴇᴅ ᴍʏ ʟɪғᴇ--hair- light red.
eyes- orangy side of brown.
figure- tall and skinny
skin- naturally pale
scars- scattered about her back but the
serious ones are on her neck.
tattoos- only
one
piercings- ears
birthmarks- on her ear, half
of the lobe is a light brown.
eyesight- black raybands
-- ˁᴴᴱ ᴮᴱᵀᵀᴱᴿ ᴿᵁᴺ--positive- immature, childish, happy go
lucky,
negative- demanding, protective,
shy around new people.
problems- past anorexia.
orientation- heterosexual
crush- here
label- the childish one, the wannabe princess.
social rank- none
popularity- in the middle.
secrets- her past anorexia.
other- quote box was made by pumpkin queen.
credit to her. writing to me. pictures to owners.
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◣xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx◢ ʟɪᴛᴛʟᴇ ᴍɪss sɴᴀᴋᴇ ᴇʏᴇs wrote:name- chicago rosetta.
gender- female
age- eighteen
nickname- chicago rose, cags, rosie.
mother- iris rosetta
father- peterson rosetta
sisters- eden
theme song- natalie
-- ʀᴜɪɴᴇᴅ ᴍʏ ʟɪғᴇ--hair- a flaxen blonde, goes to
her shoulders, very curly.
eyes- sea foam green.
figure- tall and skinny
skin- naturally pale
scars- right across her eyebrow.
a mirror accident.
tattoos- none.
piercings- had a nose piercing.
birthmarks- a patch of
tan on her right knee.
eyesight- no need for glasses.
-- ˁᴴᴱ ᴮᴱᵀᵀᴱᴿ ᴿᵁᴺ--positive- caring, sweet, not too forward.
negative- quiet, gullible,
shy around new people.
problems- some cutting issues in the past.
orientation- heterosexual
crush- here
label- the violinist.
social rank- none
popularity- in the middle.
secrets- her past.
other- quote box was made by pumpkin queen.
credit to her. writing to me. pictures to owners.
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