FYI: That was sarcasm [CS Pet Diary]

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FYI: That was sarcasm [CS Pet Diary]

Postby mantlepiece » Sun Aug 18, 2013 1:28 pm

Hiya!
Thank you for taking the time to read this (or vote in the poll above)! :D

If you could help me make this better by kindly pointing out mistakes or things that you don't like i would really appreciate it.
This story was inspired by another CS pet diary by CalamityK (or GizmoTheDragon now), so I give the credit of some of the ideas in here to Gizmo (don't worry though, i came up with this plot by myself).

Click here if you want to see all the introduced characters and their present outfits (as the story progresses i may change them around a bit). Don't forget to refresh! c:

Oh, and FYI, if you read through this a second time (which i thank you for) and find some things slightly different, DO NOT BE ALARMED! I like to edit my work. ;)

And I made a banner. ^u^
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Okay... so... dear, ah, notebook.
Talk about awkward. So, i've started this new school, and in english class we have to do about 20 minutes of diary writing before class starts. Even if the dog who came up with this was loopy i have to admit its better than musing over sentence structures or whatever else the teacher comes up with in this dreaded class.
I suppose i should tell you who i am, not that a notebook would care.
My name is Alex, (short for Alexandra, which i never tell anyone). I once lived in another state but my dad divorced my mom, for some *cough* reason, and us two moved, leaving my two older sisters and mother behind. Now me and my dad live in a quiet neighborhood.
Hmm... what else should i write? I'm 16, the only thing i'm good at in school is math, i like to dog watch, play soccer (the only other thing i'm good at) with my dad, hang with friends, (but that's kinda hard to do when you don't have any, soooo)- hang with myself… I hate my physical eds teacher (i know, harsh, it's only the second day but you haven't met him), bullies, waffles (don't ask) and… well that's the major ones.
This is a picture of me with my hood down (Yea, i usually wear it up, but you know how dogs are; all nantsy about seeing your face clearly in photos.)
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Yeah, i'm not one for flowers and fluffy bunnies (or bald bunnies for that matter). Oh, and incase your wondering (which you are not, because your a paper product), i have no idea where my red eyes come from. I asked my dad once about it but he wasn't really sure. Maybe i'm part albino? If that's even possible.

I have a picture of my dad, but i'll have to bring it tomorrow and stick it in here.
Not much else to say... except this school stinks! Literally! Some one just farted. -_- Oh my gosh, the teachers face! I would be laughing if it didn't smell so bad!
Yes! Goodbye! *gag*

~Alex
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for all have sinned and fall short of the glory of God, and are justified by his grace as a gift, through the redemption that is in Christ Jesus,
Romans 3:23-24


I've loved being on CS (a bit too much) but I have people in my life that I need to prioritize, plus, I have a life that I can live if I wasn't spending so much time on here. ☺ So, i'm gonna be tying up some loose ends then leaving. Over and out!

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Re: FYI: That was sarcasm [CS Pet Diary]

Postby sprite. » Sun Aug 18, 2013 7:24 pm

Really good, reminds me of me a bit but I don't usually wear my hood up and I don't mind school. It's really good and you should post another one soon.

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FYI: That was sarcasm [Entry #2]

Postby mantlepiece » Tue Aug 20, 2013 11:09 am

Yay! I'm glad you like it! Here's another one. XD

Dear notebook,

I got the picture of my dad:
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I know, i look a lot like him. He's cool. He has got a maintenance job at the moment, so dogs call him and he goes and fixes windows, pipes, holes in walls or whatever else has managed to break. We've made it a routine that once i've done half my homework (and if he's free), we go to the park and kick a ball around or something or rather. I couldn't ask for another father.

Anyway, i have 18 minutes to kill... writing... writing... boring... blah blah... the teachers watching...
Fine, i'll tell you what happened on the bus this morning seeing as i have nothing better to do (and yes, i take the bus):
I was climbing onto the crusty bus (which is packed by the time it gets to me), nodded politely at the driver (who just stared at me like i was holding people up) and casually walked down the bus with canines gawking at me as i tried to spot an empty seat (why? It's not like i was walking on my head or something). In the end I had to sit next to some random guy and I swung my legs out across the isle as the driver closed the doors after the last student and continued the drive to school.
As the bus shuddered along, I watched the teens in the bus. All the evils (or populars as most call them) sat towards the back, giggling, gossiping and being stupid. Then the quiet or new canines tried to sit alone, filling the space next to them with their bag (thanks!). The nerdy canines were reading a book. And everyone else sat near the front.
As I was watching everyone (and no it's not creepy!), my mind wandered from one thing to the next until I feel something shove against my legs. I woke up from my day dream just in time to see some dog trip and stumble over my outstretched legs. "Sorry! You okay?"
I almost winced at my sympathetic words as the evils chuckle, but i shook off my regret. The stranger had caught himself before he could fall flat on his face. He wore simple, faded clothes, had jet black fur... nothing really looked off about him, but... i dunno... When he looked at me... something didn't feel right about him... i dunno what...
Anyway, excuse my ramblings; he just looked at me with dark RED eyes (maybe that's what's not right) and said casually, "I'm fine." before turning away and sitting in a nearby seat.
I huffed silently and was about to go back to day-dreaming when i heard, "Are you new?"
I looked at the guy sitting next to me. (Here's a pic of him i happened to find):
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"What?"
"Are you new?"
"Yeah." Was there a problem with that or something? "So?"
The guy thumped his tail nervously "Uh, well...want me to show you around school? It can be rather confusing to find everything."
I eyed him for a second. I hadn't memorized where things were, seeing as i had only gone to school for a couple three days and my memory isn't super or anything. Where's the harm in it?
I shrugged. "Why not."
"Cool, i'll show you around as soon as we get there. My name's John by the way." He grinned.
"I'm Alex."
Then he asked me where i was from and what brought me down here and I pretty much told him what I told you. Then we got off the bus and he gave me a brief tour of the school, every now and then commenting on certain things or giving me advice. And... that's about it... school.

I'll just say that i've pretty much settled in here; I have all my supplies, I now know what classes to go to and how, my locker is almost sorted, I just need to decorate it, etc. No friends... no enemies, better than i thought it would go in three days… 'cause i have a reputation for making enemies.
Looks like my time is up.

~Alex
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Re: FYI: That was sarcasm [CS Pet Diary]

Postby littoone77 » Tue Aug 20, 2013 12:16 pm

These are pretty cool! Good work.
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Re: FYI: That was sarcasm [CS Pet Diary]

Postby mantlepiece » Tue Aug 20, 2013 12:24 pm

Thank you so much! X}
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for all have sinned and fall short of the glory of God, and are justified by his grace as a gift, through the redemption that is in Christ Jesus,
Romans 3:23-24


I've loved being on CS (a bit too much) but I have people in my life that I need to prioritize, plus, I have a life that I can live if I wasn't spending so much time on here. ☺ So, i'm gonna be tying up some loose ends then leaving. Over and out!

In memory of Toviel

Does your belief suit you or reality?

Why do you really believe what you believe?

There can only be one truth. But which is it?

There is hope in Christ.

"For God so loved the world, that he gave his only Son, that whoever believes in him should not perish but have eternal life."
John 3:16, English Standard Version Bible
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Re: FYI: That was sarcasm [CS Pet Diary]

Postby sprite. » Tue Aug 20, 2013 7:58 pm

{{Another great entry.}}

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Re: FYI: That was sarcasm [CS Pet Diary]

Postby urie » Tue Aug 20, 2013 10:31 pm

Ace! Loving this!
i'm pretty sure the last time i played here was in 2015. insane to see how it's changed. feel free to ask for my pets lol
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Re: FYI: That was sarcasm [CS Pet Diary]

Postby mantlepiece » Wed Aug 21, 2013 1:33 pm

Wow. I didn't think so many people would like this so soon! O.O (Pardon me if i'm overreacting, lol)
Thank you all. It means a lot. ;)
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for all have sinned and fall short of the glory of God, and are justified by his grace as a gift, through the redemption that is in Christ Jesus,
Romans 3:23-24


I've loved being on CS (a bit too much) but I have people in my life that I need to prioritize, plus, I have a life that I can live if I wasn't spending so much time on here. ☺ So, i'm gonna be tying up some loose ends then leaving. Over and out!

In memory of Toviel

Does your belief suit you or reality?

Why do you really believe what you believe?

There can only be one truth. But which is it?

There is hope in Christ.

"For God so loved the world, that he gave his only Son, that whoever believes in him should not perish but have eternal life."
John 3:16, English Standard Version Bible
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Re: FYI: That was sarcasm [CS Pet Diary]

Postby mantlepiece » Fri Aug 23, 2013 12:33 pm

Dear notebook... Diary... Whatever!!!

Today i woke up, got ready for school, ate cereal, walked to the bus stop, sat alone (finally!) on the smelly vehicle, watched dogs while i waited for the bell to ring, went to history class, went to math class, went to science class, went to lunch and dog watched again (John said hi, not that it's a big deal), and now i'm at english, next is sports, then i have french, and then the "arts"..., then school is out, another bus ride and walk home, then i'll do some homework, bat balls with dad at the park, come home and have dinner, more homework, bed. And that's my highly engaging life right now. -__-
Booriing! I wish life could be more interesting... like... something interesting! *sigh*
You know what, who cares if i get in trouble, but i seriously can't be bothered writing stuff right now.
Ooo! I know! I'm gonna play a prank on the teacher while her back is turned. Mind if i borrow some paper out of you? Thanks. (Great, now i'm talking to paper.)

~Alex
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Re: FYI: That was sarcasm [CS Pet Diary]

Postby Puppies4ever » Fri Aug 23, 2013 4:43 pm

Very cool. :) Great entries and I'm enjoying Alex's character!
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