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To Capture a Moment in Time~Pkmn DawnxZoey~posting allowed

Postby wolves+horses » Sun Aug 18, 2013 4:50 am

Part 1


"Bi, biii!"

A nymph-like Pokémon danced on the wind without a care in the world. This wasn't particularly abnormal for the Voice of the Forrest, and its woodland friends greeted it in their various cries.

Refreshed by their innocent joy, it swam through the air at top speed, carrying itself faster and faster until all was a blur of green. The creature felt it could scatter the wind with its wings; What did it matter their size? The scent of pine littered the air. Drops of sunlight dabbed themselves across the branches, the ground, anywhere. Everywhere.

Home. The feeling enveloped the tiny being until it was gloriously overwhelmed! "CELE - !"

"Got that?"

"Bi?" It stopped suddenly, blinking its enormous blue beauties. Had it just heard a person speaking? It swiveled its head and saw a clearing to the right. The little thing cautiously floated to the edge, peering out from behind a large tree trunk. Four people stood in the field. The one with short red hair was apparently the one who held that unmistakable voice: thick but taut.

"Remember," she said to the blue-haired girl. "One of the most important aspects of Pokémon Contests is direction. Direction of the moves to a specific point to get the best result, and direction of the audience's attention."

The smaller one's face lit up. "Wow, Zoey! That's cool! I never thought about it like that."

Zoey smiled. She wished she could mentor Dawn forever. It was moments like these that she cherished more than anything. When her secrets gave Dawn an epiphany, nothing could compare to that adorable flare of life in her eyes, the admiration, the connection.

"So Dawn, why don't'cha show her your routine you've been working on?" piped up the guy in the hat. His squinty-eyed comrade nodded in agreement.

"Well..." She shyly put a hand to the back of her head. "It's not exactly at its best..." she admitted. Guys, I don't wanna look lame in front of Zoey. Or at least not more lame than I already usually do. She knew Zoey was one of the most patient, accepting people ever, but it wasn't exactly her dream to screw up right in front of her.

"Go on," the tomboy encouraged.

"Huh?"

"Like Ash and Brock said. Just try." Zoey winked. "No need to worry, right?"

Dawn couldn't help but smile. Zoey always knew what to say. "Right," she replied confidently. Both girls took a step back. She looked at Piplup. "Alright Piplup, time to show her that routine we've been starting."

"Piplup!" The tiny penguin jumped a couple feet ahead.

"Now!"

"Pip-lup!" Piplup created a whirlpool in front of it.

"Next move, go!" cried the young coordinator.

"Pip-lup-lup-lup!" Bubble beam shot from its beak, entering the funnel. But the moment the bubbles hit the water, they popped. They sparkled as they popped, but it still wasn't what she was going for. She sighed.

"Hmm." Zoey's head tilted downward slightly, and she must have been lost in thought. Her eyes had that faraway look.

"Why doesn't it work?" moaned Dawn beside her.

"Lup..." her Pokémon agreed.

Zoey perked up and looked at her hard. "Dawn," she said curtly. Dawn looked at her curiously. "Keep in mind what I said about direction. Think of every step. Where should you have placed everything to make it better?"

Dawn looked a bit surprised, then puzzled as she went back and mused over every detail she could. She slowly started putting something together. "...Well, whirlpool is in the center, and so is bubblebeam..." Zoey nodded slowly, watching her figure it out. "And when Piplup uses bubblebeam, the bubbles pop. So... Maybe I need to move something... Maybe..." She jerked upright once more. "I've got it! I'm gonna try again!"

She and Piplup tried the routine once more, this time pointing bubblebeam to the edge of the whirlpool. The wind from the whirlpool grabbed the bubbles and pulled them in. Once in, they popped, and the bursts of water from them flew out from inside the cyclone, giving the appearance that the whirlpool was spraying sparkles. Dawn's eyes and smile grew and Zoey grinned in satisfaction.

Once the display had subsided, Piplup ran over to its trainer, who gladly let it jump into her arms. She spun in a circle giggling before setting it down. Zoey tried to hide how sweet she thought it was, but allowed herself to watch with a whole-hearted smile. She closed her eyes to savor the moment, so she didn't notice when Dawn danced over to her.

"Zoey!"The redhead's eyes flew open at the sudden ecstatic voice. "Thank you so much! I can't believe it worked!" Dawn calmed herself down a little then. "Well, actually, I can." Her smile widened. "Because you helped me!"

Zoey studied her expression carefully. Was there something deeper she was sensing? She brushed off the thought. No, I'm probably just imagining it, she thought. Nonetheless, there had been a spark whether they wanted to admit it or not. There was always a spark.

"Pika?"

Everyone looked at Pikachu, whose ears were twitching madly. "What is it, Pikachu?" asked Ash.

Pikachu pointed towards a large tree. "Pikachu!" The gang turned their attention to the tree. They watched in hushed curiosity. After a moment of slight hesitation, a Pokémon came into view. Ash, Pikachu and Brock perked up immediately.

"Celebi!" the boys cried at once.

"Pika-pi!"

Celebi looked at them strangely at first, but quickly remembered the old friends. "Bi, bi!" it cried with a smile. It zipped over to Ash and Pikachu, patting Pikachu on the head. "Bi!" it said in hello.

"Kachu!"

"Hi, Celebi, great to see you again!" said Ash.

Brock crossed his arms with a smile. "Yeah, hey!"

Celebi nodded to them. "Bii!"

Dawn and Zoey watched the interaction. Both were a little stunned by the unspoken history of the unexpected guest, but Zoey had done her research.

"Wait, isn't that the Legendary Pokémon Celebi? As in the Voice of the Forrest?" Her mouth remained agape.

Dawn turned to her quickly. "What!? Um, Ash?"

He nodded in confirmation. "Yeah, we ran into Celebi before once. There was this kid named Sammy who'd been accidentally dragged 40 years into the future by Celebi."

"That's right! Celebi time travels!" Zoey remembered. Dawn looked at the legendary with a new light spinning in her eyes.

Brock continued. "Mhmm, and Ash and Celebi got to be good friends, and Pikachu too."

"Cool," Zoey breathed.

"Cool is right!" exclaimed Dawn. She stepped forward, introducing herself to the cute little creature. "Hi there, my name is Dawn!"

"And I'm Zoey," she said, stepping closer calmly.

Celebi looked back and forth between the two for a moment or two with no specific emotion on its face. Dawn smiled bigger and tilted her head hopefully. Suddenly, Celebi squealed and flew in a circle over them, making Dawn giggle with delight. Zoey smiled but arched an eyebrow. What did that mean?

"Wow!" Brock exclaimed. Everyone looked at him questioningly. Without being asked, he explained. "Pokémon are often more in tune to body language and emotion, and Celebi seems to have picked up something really strong from you two." Dawn blinked, and she tried to hold it in as she felt herself blushing, though why she was blushing she didn't know. Zoey, on the otherhand, held a poker face.

"What is it, Dawn?" asked Ash.

She didn't know how to answer. Frankly, she didn't know what it was. She searched her mind frantically for an explanation. "Uh, I was just thinking... Maybe it's picking up on us because of the training I'm doing." She looked up at Celebi and called its name to get its attention. It buzzed a foot or so in front of her when she addressed it. "Celebi, did you see me and Piplup practicing our contest moves?" she said uncertainly. She hoped the answer was yes.

Celebi nodded slowly. "Bi..." Zoey furrowed her brow. The way Celebi had answered that made it sound like that wasn't the actual reason. But Dawn hugged it in relief.

"See?" she said a bit too loudly. "That's why!" Zoey narrowed her eyes. The girl was trying to convince herself, too. She didn't say anything, though.

Suddenly, Celebi tugged on her arm, as though it had just gotten a wonderful idea. "What is it?" she asked. The Pokemon only tugged more frantically. "Do you want us to follow you?" She started walking in the direction it was pulling and everyone began following. This made Celebi stop. It shook its head in obvious frustration. "What's wrong?" she tried again. Celebi then seemingly gave up.

It flew up into the air a bit higher and closed its eyes. When it opened them, they were emanating with a mysterious blue glow - and so were Dawn and Zoey! The girls began levitating, odd forces pushing them up from the earth.

While both were shocked, Dawn began to grow frantic. "Wh - What's happening!?"she practically screeched. Zoey only stared in silent terror.

Smiles grew on the boys below.

"Celebi's using psychic!" said Brock.

Ash chimed in happily. "Hey, I remember me and Sammy getting to fly with Celebi, too! Don't worry, it's fun!"

Dawn and Zoey looked at each other and smiled with faint blushes painting their faces. It wasn't everyday that you got to fly with your... best friend... They began soaring through the sky, weaving in and out of each other's paths like they were part of an intricate flying ballet, all the while giggling together for no reason besides pure, simple joy. Celebi looked quite pleased with itself. Until it decided to do something more.

A ball of green light faded into existence, lightning-like power crackling across it as it widened, and eventually hollowed out into a hole in the air. Everyone in the group stopped, gawking at the magnificent display. "Bi bii!" Celebi chimed gleefully. Before anyone could do anything about it, it flew inside and used the psychic hold it had on Dawn and Zoey to drag them with it.

Piplup gasped. "Wait, Celebi, no!" Ash cried. But it was too late: the magical gate of light had collapsed in on itself, leaving no trace that anything unusual had even happened at all. The four of them - Piplup, Pikachu, Ash and Brock - stared in horror at the empty spot where the portal had been not two second ago. "...Where did they go?"
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Re: To Capture a Moment in Time~Pkmn DawnxZoey~posting allow

Postby wolves+horses » Wed Aug 21, 2013 5:27 am

Part 2


The ground was hard. Both girls moaned. Dawn opened her eyes, realized she was on top of Zoey, and scrambled off of her, cheeks going red.

"Zoey, are you alright?" Zoey opened her eyes slowly, blinking the dust out of them. She looked around hoping to find that little imp that had brought them here, but there was only Dawn. Not that she wasn't happy to see Dawn of course. Her face brightened as their eyes met.

"Dawn! Yeah, I'm fine. You?"

"I'm OK. I'm just glad you are." They exchanged a brief smile. If it hadn't been for their predicament, they wouldn't have let go of it so quickly. "Where are we?" Dawn whispered.

They took in the scenery. It was nighttime, and they were sitting in an empty field of overgrown grass. It seemed to be a meadow - one that was not taken care of by people. Above them, a net of stars hung from the endless sky. It must have been a new moon, for there was no illuminated orb to be found, even without clouds present. Strangely enough though, was what looked like a giant comet in the sky that remained frozen in place. Dawn and Zoey stared at it in awe.

"Well, I may not know where we are..." began Zoey. "...but... I know what that is. I've only read about it in books before. It's called, 'The Millennium Comet,' and it only appears every thousand years."

Dawn let out a breath of air that she didn't know she'd been holding; she couldn't believe she was in the presence of something so magnificent. Even Zoey could barely contain herself, but she clung to the discipline she knew they needed to have.

She got up and scanned the area. "Celebi?"

Dawn followed her lead. "Please come out! We need to get back home!" She cupped her hands to her mouth. "Celebi!"

They waited.

Nothing.

Zoey sighed. "Well now what?" she mumbled. Dawn immediately turned her head. Zoey always knew what to do! That was who she could lean on, depend on always! And now she was lost? The idea of it made her realize how dire their situation was. Zoey turned her head too, when she heard her friend's alarmed breathing. "Whoa, Dawn, take it easy!" she coaxed. "I was just musing aloud." Dawn silently kept her eyes from her as she nodded slowly.

Don't be such a scaredy-skitty! the blue-headed girl yelled at herself in her mind.

Zoey could see how hard this sudden odd problem was for Dawn. She never had been the best in new situations. She sighed and walked up to Dawn. She placed her hands on her shoulders. Dawn perked up and started blushing when she realized how serious Zoey was about this. "Look Dawn; Everything's gonna be alright, I promise you." The girl began staring at her like the soft words were hypnotizing her. Perhaps they were. "It may take a while to get back, it may be strange and seem hard, but I'm telling you, as long as you're here and I'm here, we are going to be okay."

Dawn remained motionless. Never had she heard Zoey speak so warmly, so sincerely. She wanted to hold back, but she couldn't help it: her eyes began filling with tears. Zoey's features blurred, and suddenly her cheeks were burning and the most wonderful coordinator in the world was all around her in a tender hug. "I'm sorry, Zoey," she managed. "This isn't how the daughter of a top coordinator acts." She briskly wiped away her tears. They were such an embarrassment!

It was then that Zoey realized the pressure put on Dawn. Not just now, stuck in who-knows-what year or era, but as a coordinator. Her mother was gifted, and Dawn did nothing but struggle. No wonder she craved tips on training as much as she did. But then... Does that mean it's not because of me? She stopped herself. This isn't the time to worry about that!

She sat Dawn down, keeping her steady. "Hey, no need to worry. Dawn tensed a bit and looked up at Zoey. Zoey gazed at her lovingly and nodded her head.

Something unspoken had just passed between the two of them. Dawn shifted a bit and let herself settle comfortably into Zoey's embrace. They both took a moment to calm down.

After a while of star-gazing, Zoey decided to talk to her to help her feel more relaxed. The last thing they needed was to panic.

She started out with something simple. "So Dawn, I really liked your new contest routine." She grinned when she saw the smile etch itself on the girl's face.

"Oh, thanks!" said Dawn. "But it's not as good as yours I bet."

Zoey's smile faltered. "Dawn, don't ever say that about yourself." There she went again, getting scold-y. She tried to compensate. "You're an amazing coordinator. Everyone's gotta start out somehow, and most don't start off as well as you did." Dawn listened intently.

"You know Zoey?" Her voice was barely audible, and she stared at the Millennium Comet with a faraway look. "Sometimes I think I'm too impatient. I just want to do everything there is to do."

Zoey smiled again. "That's just because you're so passionate. I could tell from the moment I saw you."

Now Dawn gave a confident smile. "And I could tell you were a great coordinator!"

Zoey giggled a little hints of a blush started showing. "Thanks, you're really sweet, you know that?" Dawn blushed back.

They sat back and watched the stars. It seemed they had forgotten about getting back, and if they hadn't, they knew that they had all the time in the world, because once they got back, it would be to right when they left off.

"You're supposed to make a wish," Zoey pointed out.

Dawn looked at her with big blue eyes. "A wish?" She turned back to the night sky where the glowing arc sat suspended among the stars. She closed her eyes.

"What are you wishing for?"

She opened them. "I can't tell you."

Zoey grinned playfully. "You sure?"

Dawn grinned back. "Well, actually..." She took in a deep breath of air. "It wouldn't really matter anyway, cause it already came true." She looked at Zoey and the message got across quite clearly. And once more their cheeks flared red for what seemed like the hundredth time that day.

"If we're going to be stuck here, I'm glad it's with you."

Before the redhead could respond, they heard a very familiar sound. They got up and Dawn stepped away from Zoey. Where was it coming from?

"This way!" She bounded off.

"Dawn!" Zoey gasped. She had no choice but to race after her. As she ran, a pulsing light began to flow from somewhere up ahead - a green light. "Dawn?" She found the girl standing next to a big boulder, and next to the boulder was...

"Celebi!"

"Yeah, I think it wants us to come back now." Celebi nodded at Dawn's theory. It gestured toward the gate that would lead home. Zoey looked at the little Pokémon warily, but it was their only hope. She nodded to it respectfully.

Celebi took its cue and used psychic on them. Then it pulled them through.

~*~*~*~


More hard ground. They groaned. At least Dawn wasn't on top of Zoey this time. Just as their eyes started opening, they felt people helping them up.

"Are you alright?" That was Ash's voice.

"What happened?" And Brock.

Dawn and Zoey looked around. Brock had helped Zoey up, and Ash Dawn. Dawn gasped with delight. "We're back!"

Zoey cheered, too. "Alright!" She stepped up to Dawn. "Great work finding Celebi." Dawn smiled.

"Uh, can someone tell us what happened?" said Ash bewilderedly, repeating Brock.

Zoey turned to the boys, Dawn beside her. "Celebi decided to put us in a different time for a spell, though I'm not sure why. It was at some time where the Millennium Comet was visible."

Ash gasped. "Wow, I remember that!"

Brock was trying to put something together. "Zoey."

"Yes?"

"When did Celebi decide to bring you guys back? What was happening then?"

Zoey and Dawn tried to hide the faint blushes. "Uh... Well, we were talking about wishes. Just sort of taking some time together."

Brock smiled. Probably no one knew love as well as he did. "I think I know why Celebi did all this."

"Why?" asked the ten-year-olds simultaneously.

"Remember when I said Celebi must have sensed something in you two?" Dawn nodded. Zoey looked at him curiously. She had an idea of where this might go. "Well, I think Celebi wanted you both to simply spend some time together, to get closer to one another." Celebi giggled.

Zoey closed her eyes and smiled at the memory of the dark field. "In that case... I'd say it worked."

Dawn smiled at Zoey with a new level of admiration in her eyes. "Me too."
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