a thousand lives ;; Dreamer's Characters

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K i a n

Postby the dreamer. » Fri Jul 19, 2013 4:30 pm

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kian ;;three years;;mateless
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when you're dreaming with a broken heart, waking up is the hardest part.you roll out of bed and down on your knees and for a moment you can barely breath


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    just the basics love
    Well, to start my name is Kian. When I was born my mother gave it to me, she said it suited me, I do not know why though. It means 'all the more' or 'as many as'. I like to think this is because my mother thought I could go far, she said I was special and I was a good pup. i have lived for thirty six months making me three in human years. I am also a purebred Siberian Husky. My mother was one, My father was one..I am one. I was born on the fifteenth of june it was very hot and one of my siblings died of a heatstroke, leaving just me and my brother. I am one hundred percent male. Though, you can take my word for it.
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    his appearance
    Are you blind or something? I have coppery red along my back and tail. Though, where there isn't red I am white. I have a light shade of blue eyes. I am heavily built. with a broad chest and lots of muscle. My legs are long and muscle-y. My coat is shiny and long.
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    personality
    Being only three I am very energetic. I love to run around and just act like a total pup. I could run for a long period of time if I pace myself. I am also outgoing I will try anything once! I already learned this is a bad trait with a skunk, which is a story I do not want to tell so don't even ask about it. It was very traumatic for me, though now a couple baths later I am fine and dandy and smelling normal again. I can also be very forward with you. I am still trying to decide if this is a good trait or a bad one, since I won't ever go and talk about you behind your back. I'm not afraid to say it to your face, though which gets me in trouble a lot. Sometimes I will say the wrong thing and it gets me into a fight where another train comes in.. I am very strong willed. Some may call this stubborn. I tend to stick to what I believe even if I know I am wrong. I will say what I believe in and won't think twice about it. I am also stuck in my ways, meaning I don't like to change. It isn't terrible like I won't try anything new.. this I already have stated that I will. By this I mean that If I like to do something and it is something that I do for fun, like swimming, if someone says it is lame and I shouldn't do it I won't change for them. This, I believe, is a good trait since there is only one you. I am also Easily distracted. It is something that can be used against me, sure but I don't mind. I just have a very short attention span. I have told you about the fun side of me that acts like a pup. My serious side is a bit different. I can be very serious and strict in rough situations. I try to think of the best outcome and since I am not afraid to voice my opinion I usually say it and it happens to work out just right. Though this doesn't always happen. I am also very dominant, if you don't respect me I won't respect you. This could, of course get me in trouble but I don't mind it is just how I act and it is me.
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    love life
    I am currently single. This does not mean I go around flaunting myself at every girl. I am not life that, I respect faes. I am more gentle with faes. I tend to go for the quirky and outgoing fae's. I have fallen for the shy, quiet faes more then once in my lifetime and they are the heart breakers. I currently have no pups, but when I find the right girl I plan on having some. Only if she wants some, though.
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Re: a thousand lives ;; Dreamer's Characters

Postby the dreamer. » Mon Jul 22, 2013 12:54 pm

she's a lady and ladies shouldn't be messed with!
-forever the sickest kids

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redleaf

Postby the dreamer. » Fri Aug 02, 2013 6:35 pm

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name: Redleaf
gender: she-cat
age twenty-three moons
rank warrior
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Meet Redleaf, a she-cat with a striking color to match her striking personality. Read on to find out more about this pretty cat. Redleaf is a warrior in her clan and at the age of twenty three moons she is still young, though not too young not be able to do anything. She has a striking red color to her fur and hypnotizing yellow eyes. Her eyes have often been described as "deep, yellow orbs". Which they are, the windows to your soul have to be deep right? Redleaf is Definitely female, you can tell by her size and the fact that she acts and talks like a female. She is small, at only seven pounds. Do not let her weight fool you, though she can be deadly when she wants to be with her razor sharp claws. Rogues often confuse her for a weakling, since she only stands twenty three centimeters tall and is only about twenty inches long, with an about eight inch tail. She is nimble and quick, which is what she uses mostly against her enemies. Where they use their weight against her she uses her ability to move fast and quick and be light footed but heavy clawed. Redleaf's coat is short but still fluffy enough to be warm, her pelt is soft to the touch and has an almost calming effect to it. Her fur has always been soft and fluffy ever since she was a little kit. Redleaf was born in the wild and has never been a kittypet, in fact she despises kittypets. Redleaf is a warrior in her clan and that is the only rank she loves to do. She loves to fight ever since she was young and had to fight. When Redleaf was born her mother gave birth to two healthy, beautiful kits. Redleaf and her sister, nightwind.When they were born her mother raised them until they were around six moons old...about to go into their apprentice stage. What happened was their mother decided it was no longer safe for them in their current clan. Not once did her mother mention anything as to why they were not safe.. just , simply, that they were not. Redleaf and her sister followed her mother carelessly for days until one day Redleaf's mother and sister were hit by a car. Leaving Redleaf to defend for herself. Where Redleaf's fighting instincts come from, she knows how to survive in the toughest of times. Which Redleaf did up until she was sixteen moons old when she found this clan and happily joined right into the clan. With grace and gratefulness she has grown into the cat she is today. The cat she is today is cunning, able to outsmart even the smartest of enemies. Redleaf often can trick a trickster into believing his own tricks. Hypnotizing isn't it? Redleaf is also confident and set in her ways, even if she is wrong she will act like she is right...though she is not snobby about it she just does not like the feeling of being wrong. Redleaf is also very exuberant, more often times then not, acting like a kit a being carefree. She is very excitable and can get excited over the littlest of things. You have heard most of her good traits, there are some bad ones. On bad days she can be very sullen, just gloomy and not wanting to do anything. On those days you should avoid her completely, it would be in your best interest... believe me. She is also very quarrelsome, always picking fights and just wanting to fight on bad days. Along with just acting boorish, and rude. but that is the good and the bad of Redleaf, the everything. Everyone has bad things and good things about them and it's not like she can just change the way she acts. Take her or leave her, she probably won't mind anyway. And if she did mind, she would tell you how she feels and she would tell you what she thinks because she does not take anything for granted, she realized that when her mother and sister were killed. Luckily she found this clan and now has a home again and she WILL, without a doubt protect her home..so watch out.
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Re: a thousand lives ;; Dreamer's Characters

Postby the dreamer. » Fri Aug 02, 2013 6:38 pm

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ENEGADE
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»»renegade {::} »»RANK {::}»»brute{::} »»four years old
Life is hard, Sometimes we have to fight against those ones, we love.

Renegade ;; A person who deserts and betrays an organization, country, or set of principles




the obvious details....
Renegade is his name, fighting and protecting is his game. This brute has a lot of details that stand out about him just in his looks, I will explain them to you now..so read closely because to underestimate this wolf could be deadly. To repeat myself, his name is Renegade. His mother, Ivy, chose this name for him when he was just a pup. Ivy chose this name since he was, a Renegade. He would always betray his litter mates. Little Renegade did this because this was the only way he knew how to survive... betray or be betrayed. The name was also chosen sine he did not listen to any rules, at all. As a pup, he was a trouble maker. Though, he is not a pup anymore, he is at the age of four years. This brute as enough experience to know how to kill you but is still enough of a young-en to want to work it out. If you can not tell he is most definitely a brute. Renegade also owns the great rank of RANKHERE.



renegade for the blind...
One word do describe Renegade's looks is big. He is a rather LARGE brute. This is a good and bad thing. Good, since it is easier for him to overpower prey. This can also be bad, though, leaving him with huge clumsy paws sometimes it is hard to get up to the prey. It is also harder to move around in a fight...but Renegade can get around. Don't underestimate his size for stupidity. Describing Renegade's coat would have to be a mixture of white/cream, grey, and a dark black on top. Under his belly is a creamy whiteish color and along the bottom of his tail. Though, running from the tip of his nose, down to his sides and up over to his tail is a dark grey and black mixture of hairs. There is also, some brown mixed in where the black stops. This brute's eyes can be described as golden orbs, though, they also have flecks of amber color around the Iris of his eye. Together the golden and the brown look lovely. His pelt is soft on his underbelly, but towards the top of his backbone the fur gets coarse.



pawprints of the past....
Renegade's past is not a exciting one. He was born on July 9th, a particularly hot day. His mother gave birth to five, healthy, beautiful pups. There was Renegade, who his mother had first named him Kane, his two brothers.. Jace and Jasper and then his two sisters, Laia and Luna. Renegade was the oddball out, being the color he was when his siblings were all pure snow-white. Renegade was not the runt of the litter, Luna was, in fact he was the biggest of the litter. Though, he was the most picked on..his father was a wolf the same color as him and his mother was all white. Renegade was, if nothing else, proud that he looked like his father. After five moons of being picked on and the 'fake runt' Renegade got sick of it and fought back. This was when his mother decided that the name Renegade fit him better and changed it to that. After he had retaliated his siblings didn't pick on him anymore, instead they were afraid of him. Renegade hated that they were afraid of them, when his father saw that the other pups were afraid of him his father banished him from the pack. His father said that the pup was 'poisoned' and was going to 'poison the other pups' if he stayed. Renegade found a loner and she become his adoptive mother up until he was three years old, during this time his mother taught him how to survive, how to hunt, and most importantly... how to fight to survive.. When he was around three and a half, his 'mother' was killed. Renegade, to this day, does not know how. He just came back one day and she was not with him anymore. Renegade ran. He ran and ran until he could not run anymore and that was when he found the pack .


the way you act can effect everything
Renegade is impulsive. Sometimes he does not think before he acts, which is a very bad habit to form. He will just charge right into a fight. Fight first, ask questions later. This trait his not his best and by far not his worst, but it is one of the more dangerous ones. This has gotten him into a fight that he can't win more then once. More often that not, with a few wolves or even..with a bear that was taking something of his. Outgoing, is another word to describe Renegade. He will try ANYTHING once, which has gotten him into trouble a lot..one time , which he tries not to recall, with a skunk. Renegade will do the things that others are afraid to try to do and will most likely love doing it. Him being outgoing has also sprouted a new trait... Renegade is very adventurous. Willing to go into any shady cave, up to any strange creature and come back, most of the time, with is pride a little damaged. Though he takes his pride very serious as he is very prideful. Prideful, yes.. full of himself? No. Renegade is also used to being alone, as he has been for weeks at a time.. this makes him very Independent. Though, when he needs to be for his status, he is also very social. A few other traits that he has are fierce and dangerous. If having to choose fight or flight he WILL without a doubt, fight. He loves to fight, it makes him feel dominant and alive. Which brings his other trait, dominance. Being dominant since he was a pup has become and every day thing. If he likes a fae, he will be very dominant over her.

matters of the heart [family/love life]
Renegade has four brothers and sisters, already stated above. Though, he does not talk to them anymore since he was kicked from his pack. As for love life Renegade is currently single, with no past mates and no current mate. He also, is NOT a father with no pups. From the pack, nobody has caught his eye meaning he has no crush. Renegade tends to look for the shy, quiet faes. Mostly, the faes that are the complete opposite of him. Someone he can be dominant over.
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Aliza

Postby the dreamer. » Mon Aug 05, 2013 8:41 pm

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      SPEEEName; Aliza
      SPEEENickname; Liza
      SPEEEAge; three years
      SPEEEGender; female
      SPEEErank; here

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Jackson Ashburn

Postby the dreamer. » Thu Nov 28, 2013 10:09 am

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don’t mind spending every day
Out on your corner in the pouring rain
Look for the boy with the broken smile
Ask him if he wants to stay awhile.




no light, no light in your once bright eyes...
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dont be careless, just care less...
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the wasted years, the wasted youth, the pretty lies, the ugly truth
    history here.




we accept the love we think we deserve
    love life/relationship status/ family here
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Re: a thousand lives ;; Dreamer's Characters

Postby the dreamer. » Thu Nov 28, 2013 10:09 am

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Ruger

Postby the dreamer. » Thu Dec 05, 2013 12:14 am

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Meet Ruger. Named after the gun by his old owner. That's right, he used to have an owner. Up until he was about two he had an owner. One day while he was out hunting partridge for his owner he got lost. Ruger wandered and wandered until he found the pack. He was scared, had no idea how to get back.. and was talked into staying. He never really liked having an owner anyway, for one his owner would make Ruger do all the hunting and then never give him any of the meat that they harvested. And in such a way, hunting is one of Ruger's strong points. He is an excellent hunter, skilled and great at it. Which is a good thing cause he loves to do it. Fighting, eh, not so much he really hates conflict. Even though he is a big dog with long lengthy legs he is more humble then violent. He is gentle, but can become obsessed with the hunt, if he misses a rabbit or something he will stay out all night until that rabbit comes out of its hole and he will kill it. Or wait until he does. After that he does a victory walk back to the pack. Ruger has coached a lot of dogs on hunting and is the go to guy when someone needs something. He is now at the great age of four and is currently single. He has never thought about having pups but he definitely would if he found a girl that caught his eye. Ruger is also a pure bred blue-tick hound. AKC registered and everything, though that doesn't really matter now since he does not live with his owner and never wants to go back.
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Re: a thousand lives ;; Dreamer's Characters

Postby the dreamer. » Thu Dec 05, 2013 12:15 am

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