The Advanced Writer's Club

[eden .]

Thesaurus.com

Go there now and check it out. It is incredible, fantastic, awesome, stupendous, phenomenol - JUST GO CHECK IT OUT!

They have a new way of sorting through synonyms and mrrrr it's so much easier to use.

I DON'T THINK WORDS CANNOT DESCRIBE HOW HANDY THIS NEW VERSION IS, BUT IF THERE ARE WORDS THAT CAN YOU CAN FIND THEM HERE.

*flails with excitement*

WHOA THEY JUST MADE IT X6000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 BETTER HOLY CRAP A;DSLKFJA;LSKJFA;LSDKJF;ALSKDJF;ALSDKJF

[rose;]

omg arty
that site
just
omg
yes

[Jadeghost]

I had a very vivid dream last night.

And it gave me an awesome idea for a new story.

An alien race has arrived on a post-apocalyptic earth. They do not see any signs of life anywhere. But just when they are about to give up and leave since the atmosphere is hard for them to take even with protective equipment, they run into a small but extremely powerful surviving pack of humans. The humans fight to defend themselves, and it becomes clear they would rather die than be taken by the alien race. (Here's where it gets a little fuzzy because dreams don't always make sense) the main character, a soldier in one of the alien legions, betrays his general by standing up for one of the humans. As punishment, the soldier will be left on earth at the mercy of the humans while the aliens leave. But little does he know they are still watching him...

Idk, it really doesn't make much sense coming directly from my dream, and obviously parts of it will need tweaked. But should I try and run with this?

[Brittle]

@jade;

OO! That sounds wonderfully amazingly terrifically awesome! Go for it!
{the best part about fuzzy dreams, you imagine the rest of it c;}


Here's my latest story idea;

[wolfie.]

Thesaurus.com

Go there now and check it out. It is incredible, fantastic, awesome, stupendous, phenomenol - JUST GO CHECK IT OUT!

They have a new way of sorting through synonyms and mrrrr it's so much easier to use.

I DON'T THINK WORDS CANNOT DESCRIBE HOW HANDY THIS NEW VERSION IS, BUT IF THERE ARE WORDS THAT CAN YOU CAN FIND THEM HERE.

*flails with excitement*

{ Dude I saw that, and I'm so ecstatic right now.
It's amazing /flails
I love how they set it up it's just fabuloussss
I haven't even gotten to use it to it's full extent yet but omg it's magnificent

[Darius4Ever ~ ♥]

Username: opia.
Nickname: opi i guess...
Writing Preferences: all of the above.
Example (Can be anything; must be a good length): semi. advanced + club member 110
Links to stories / roleplays: i'll post later.
Other:

[princess pudding]

The following members have been accepted:

Stablestar
Lolli ∞ Kitten
opia.

If you have not been accepted, please do not post. Try practicing your writing and apply again.
There is always room for improvement! If you have any questions, feel free to contact me.

Someone needs to kick me in the behind every time I forget about this. >>
So sorry to everyone who's been waiting, and thanks for all your patience.

[Veins Of Opal]

Username:
Veins of Opal
Nickname:
Opal could works, or Veins. Either of those.
Writing Preferences (Poet, Novelist, roleplayer...):
All three, really.
Example (Can be anything; must be a good length):
Free-verse poem
Links to stories / roleplays:
This is a bit of an older roleplay, but, it'll work.
Other:
Nope, nothing else comes to mind.

[princess pudding]

The following members have been accepted:

Veins of Opal

If you have not been accepted, please do not post. Try practicing your writing and apply again.
There is always room for improvement! If you have any questions, feel free to contact me.

[Chickenpaste]

"Bright as the moon" is a rather cliche phrase. I'd suggest using a metaphor rather than a simile, and start the first paragraph in a poetic fashion. I haven't read the story your writing, so I'm not sure if this will be fitting, but that'd be my suggestion for any story opening.