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[WhiteFang121]

Prices range from free to 2 commons:
3 verse poem: free
4 verse poem: 1 common
5 verse poem: 2 commons/1 uncommon


If you donate a PPS pet (over common) that i do not have, you will be added to the VIP list.
VIP's get all poems free!
VIP's:
# Rocky121
#Novalane
#animalzrock123
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Blacklist:NONE! lets try to keep it that way.

Here is one of my poems:

Werewolf Of The Night

Sharp fangs
deadly bite
he comes for you
in the night

howls at the moon
filled with power
and in your room
over you he will tower

youll have no chance
death come fast
and in the morn'
familys agahst

laying dead
in your own blood
and leading out,
tracks of mud

in the morning light
he will change back
no memories
his night is black
WF

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[b]I wanna pome!!![/b]
[b]Username:[/b][b]Subject:
Verses:
Payment:
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Slots:
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Thanx!!!
WF [/center]

[Emygrace]

Username: Rocky121
Subject: Rocky
Verses: 5
Payment: -
Extra: naw

[WhiteFang121]

*sigh* it had to be rocky. nice originality.

[Emygrace]

sooorrryy! jeeeezzzzzio ((Don't worry.. we're friends!))

[Amazonboy]

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[Amazonboy]

Username: Amazonboy
Subject: Nagas
Verses: 5
Payment:
Extra: I mean nagas as in the upper half of a human lower half of a snake and poisonous fangs


Could I also get some critism on this poem I wrote for my love (named Mary Jo) who I havent seen for a long time here it is:
Summer's over and I havent seen you for awhile
And when I see your happy face it always makes me smile
I missed you very much it is true
I have waited so long to see you

When I see you everything is fine
To see your hair and eyes brightly shine
Seeing you brightens up my day
And I am sad when you are away

Oh Mary Jo
I have missed you so

[WhiteFang121]

Sure! I'll add you to the slots. Your poem is really sweet. The only thing is maybe try not to repeat words too often. Apart from that it's really good. ^^

[Amazonboy]

thanks and yeah Ill edit it i have alot of yous in it thanks

[WhiteFang121]

For rocky121:

Rocky

Sweet little ball of fur
Who everybody loves
To cuddle up close to him
Evrybody shoves

Pink little tongue
Licks you on the hand
Shows he is by far
The cutest puppy in the land

His scruffy brown fur
Is soft and very cuddly
And when he naps by you
You'll feel happy and bubbly

Rocky's eyes are brown and shiny
You can see the love inside
And when you're feeling sad or lonely
In him you can confide

In short he is an angel
Though white he is not
He's sweet and cute
And we love him a lot.

Like it?

[Emygrace]

I love it and my mum says "I am deeply moved".
hahahha thanks! brown fur though? lol pooost XD thanks