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[Cherry]

Kyotori : Just read your "thing." I really love your writing style! It feels so real and natural. I can already feel myself getting into it because it just has such a wonderful atmosphere. It feels like I'm living the story, and that's one of my favorite things in writing.

You know, I kind of felt like that too. Almost reminded me of the way I felt reading this one romance story with a completely different plot. Close to same feeling, different plot. ^^

[houndpine]

Hey guys, I just finished writing something for a jbd contest, would anyone like to critique it? It's pretty short c:

PM me!

[nutella ♥]

that moment when everything's going great, and your computer crashes.

[Cherry]

I know how that feels. I write on my iPod with an app, and I sometimes accidentally turn my iPod to the side, which erases every new thing I've written. Once I'm sure I wrote over 100 words in one sitting and they all got deleted.

[Captain Chomp]

Username: ~Minty Wolf~
What we will call you: (a maximum of four.) Minty
Will you critique other's work?: (yes, no, or possibly.) Yes
Links to your story if you have any:
Anything you want us to know?:

[Roonil Wazlib]

Can someone please critique my piece for Lady Luck's contest? Here's the link: viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1827248
If anyone could take a look, I'd be very grateful.

[Rolly-chan]

Guys, Holly Lisle is offering a cool free mini-course on revising your story. "101 Worst Mistakes Writers Make In First Draft".
Here it is.
It's free, it's safe (trust me, I am already registered at her site and get her newsletter - she doesn't spam you or anything), and I'm sure it's great. =3 I already own some courses by her (Plot and Character Clinics, How To Write Page Turning Scenes, How To Think Sideways, ...) and they never disappointed me in any way.
The lessons will be delivered to your mail address in the next days. And while you're waiting, you get that PDF list of mistakes and can already start to identify them in your own stories ^^

[Kodabomb]

Hey all..!
I wrote a new song today. Can I have some crit/comments/advice? I know you can't hear the tune but still. C:
It's about a character from my book.

(no title)
Some might say that change it futile
That a leopard can't change her spots
Once one turns she cannot come back
And the light past is forgot.

Some might say that the darkness lingers
You go in and can't come back
So why is it at the end of a tunnel
The white comes the end of the black?

Jewel Empire, my heart comes pure
I'm sorry for what I've done 
Forgive me sweet kingdom's joy
The red and black reduced to none.

All things came and will stay forever
History doesn't forget
Go ahead; come and bring me justice
Your wishes can be met

But let it be known that none was on my mind
A wicked heart I lack
And let it be known at the end of a tunnel
The white comes the end of the black.

Jewel Empire, my heart comes pure
I'm sorry for what I've done 
Forgive me sweet kingdom's joy
The red and black reduced to none.

Forgive me, I'm sorry
I promise none holds fault
All ponies, I'm sorry....

Jewel Empire, my heart comes pure
I'm sorry for what I've done 
Forgive me sweet kingdom's joy
The red and black reduced to none.

And let it be known at the end of a tunnel
The white comes the end of the black.

[Chai Tea]

Username: Chai Tea
What we will call you: Chai or just Tea
Will you critique other's work?: Yes, of course!
Links to your story if you have any: I'm starting a story, but I don't have a link yet
Anything you want us to know?: Nope, not really! cx

[Small Child]

It looks great Koda! I don't know what it would sound like, but I love the lyrics.