The Advanced Writer's Club

[eden .]

>> yo guys ~
>> I opened up a critique thread and it's in need of some volunteer critics! if you have some spare time and would like to help out, please fill out a form! otherwise, feel free the bookmark and such if you'd like for future use. hopefully it'll be helpful for you ^^

[Artesian]

Welp, I signed up. :3 Good idea, Asian!

@Rosemarrie: Oh, I'm not particular, really. As long as it's not a horror novel, any combination of elements that seems to fit would be fun to do. I would prefer it to be not focused completely around romance, because of how over-saturated the supernatural vampire romance market is? But some romance, yeah totally! You write it so well (I'm enjoying Fear, by the way. I think the term for what the girl is an 'adrenaline junkie'. They could be said to be addicted to fear?)

Another idea I had, with vampires, is a vampire based more around the Chinese concept, where they drain your chi, your life energy. A murder-mystery in a semi-sci-fi world based around vampires who can hide from cameras by bending the light around them and suck out people's life energy could be entertaining... especially if it was on a generation ship. (A ship where it takes such a long time to get to another star that generations go by before they can make it there, so it's an entire mini-civilization on a gigantic ark.) Ah, ignore me, I'm just brain-storming.

[eden .]

Welp, I signed up. :3 Good idea, Asian!

uwu ty bb. hopefully it'll be helpful to people.
thanks to you guys for signing up, btw. it's nice to have a group right off the bat XD
you guys can totally ask for critiques from each other, too. just wanted to make that clear .-. this thread is for everybody!

[Jadeghost]

I signed up too ^_^

Such a great idea!

[abandoned.]

Welp, I signed up. :3 Good idea, Asian!

uwu ty bb. hopefully it'll be helpful to people.
thanks to you guys for signing up, btw. it's nice to have a group right off the bat XD
you guys can totally ask for critiques from each other, too. just wanted to make that clear .-. this thread is for everybody!

i'd offer
but i suck at critiquing XD
and i'm not on often enough v.v

[indebted]

abandoned!
YOU'RE ALLIIIVVEE

[abandoned.]

ehehehe yeah ^^; been sort of drifting around XD mostly getting on long enough to reply to any PMs if there ever are any in my inbox

i'm still working on that collab with my friend, though just don't feel up to writing a lot lately and i still need to finish/think of what to do with burning willow....T_T

[wolfie.]

hey it's been like twenty pages since my last visit over here whaddup

{ I was wondering if anyone has seen any writing contests around lately? ou0 I kind of looked a little myself but lazy little me got sick of clicking through the pages in the forum, so... /shrug

[eden .]

I found this one o3o
I've not entered yet but I'm planning to uwu

y'all have those songs that are literally PERFECT for your story but literally everyone uses it?
but like not everyone's usage of it would fit AS PERFECTLY AS IT WOULD YOURS
/wails

[Artesian]

Thesaurus.com

Go there now and check it out. It is incredible, fantastic, awesome, stupendous, phenomenol - JUST GO CHECK IT OUT!

They have a new way of sorting through synonyms and mrrrr it's so much easier to use.

I DON'T THINK WORDS CANNOT DESCRIBE HOW HANDY THIS NEW VERSION IS, BUT IF THERE ARE WORDS THAT CAN YOU CAN FIND THEM HERE.

*flails with excitement*