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by tooru » Sat Jul 13, 2013 3:15 am
Tianuki wrote:@Ciel, I've always been interested in how people write poems and yours are absolutely lovely. I'm not very good at writing poems and don't really know how to so I'm just going to say that you have a wonderful talent.
Thank you! You guys are so nice to me, and my writing totally doesn't deserve it. c:
So, now that bravery is tied with courage in my voting poll, I had to write about courage. Think whatever you'd like about this one, although there is a true meaning to this one and it's less obscene. This is not on my thread yet, so you guys get to see it first!
"real words"
My heart pounds like a drum
As my moment has come
I will show them
The real me
The person behind the screen
Will they like me
Still compliment me
Or will they turn a blind eye
Raise their heads to the sky
and walk by
I will have to face the doubt
Scream and shout
Or else I will remain unknown
My notebook full of words in my hand
I step out and let it begin.
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OIKAWA[ kiddos, kals ]
it's n o t t h e
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it's the l o v e.𝔻 𝔸 𝕌 ℕ 𝕋☀ ☀ 𝓁𝑒𝓈𝓈 ┏▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┓xcall x me x an xaddict
xto xxx your xx electric┖▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┚
┏▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┓xwe'll never lose xfaith
xnever forget this taste┖▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┚ █
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by SweetToxic » Sat Jul 13, 2013 4:53 am
2000 words in ^^ I know it doesn't seem like much, but I've been working pretty hard on it. It's the most I've ever done in five days. If I can just get to 50,000 with a finished story, I'll be happy. I mutually know a publisher (a kid at my school is already published. His mother and grandmother runs a pretty popular business here in my state.) so I might try to get it published once I'm done. Wish me luck!
Way off topic, but it would mean the world if you would vote for me ^T^
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by tooru » Sat Jul 13, 2013 7:09 am
Here are Bystander and Real Words formatted. c:
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"Bystander"
A flash of silver metal
Plunged into fragile flesh
The body tumbles down
A bystander watched
Live but dead
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The funeral came
Clothed in a red dress
The color of blood
Bystander came
Crying tears of red
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Sorrow is blue
Blood is red
Live and dead
Bystander stayed home
A noose on the bed.
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{ once again, bravery based on request }""""""

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My heart pounds like a drum
As my moment has come
I will show them
The real me
The person behind the screen
Will they like me
Still compliment me
Or will they turn a blind eye
Raise their heads to the sky
and walk by 
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I will have to face the doubt
Scream and shout
Or else I will remain unknown
My notebook full of words in my hand
I step out and let it begin.
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OIKAWA[ kiddos, kals ]
it's n o t t h e
p a in they're
g e tting over,
it's the l o v e.𝔻 𝔸 𝕌 ℕ 𝕋☀ ☀ 𝓁𝑒𝓈𝓈 ┏▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┓xcall x me x an xaddict
xto xxx your xx electric┖▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┚
┏▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┓xwe'll never lose xfaith
xnever forget this taste┖▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┚ █
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by nutella ♥ » Sat Jul 13, 2013 7:58 am
I need some help, but I'll be brief so you can all get back to your knitting as soon as possible. c:
I'm starting a story about a city built on stilts because the Surface world is too dangerous for life anymore, but I have the strangest feeling it's been done before and my 'original idea' isn't so original anymore. Anyone ever read something like this before?
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NOTHING IS IMPOSSIBLE.
Somebody left the gate open
You know we got lost on the way
Come save us a runaway train
Goin' insane
How do we
How do we not fade
How do we how do we
How do we not fade away
How do we how do we oh
. : ɪ ɴ ᴛ ᴏ ᴛ ʜ ᴇ ᴡ ɪ ʟ ᴅ : .
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by I'm Not The Only One » Sat Jul 13, 2013 8:14 am
nutella ♥ wrote:I need some help, but I'll be brief so you can all get back to your knitting as soon as possible. c:
I'm starting a story about a city built on stilts because the Surface world is too dangerous for life anymore, but I have the strangest feeling it's been done before and my 'original idea' isn't so original anymore. Anyone ever read something like this before?
I haven't personally read or found anything like it, but a good and accurate way to check is by going on Goodreads and searching the site for similar books! Hope this kind of helped c:

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by climbing{the}world » Sat Jul 13, 2013 8:16 am
I haven't read anything about that, either. I think you're good. I'm pretty sure mine has not been tried before... all of you guys on here, you should enter the writing contest. c;
Because I met my best writing/internet buddy through her signature, I decided to list a bunch of things about me. Not that I like making friends. Or that I'm good at it.
Harry Potter; Lord of the Rings; The Hobbit; The Silmarillion; Anything Tolkien Really; My Little Pony; FimFiction; Fanfiction; AppleDash; TwiDash; RariJack; Writing; Poetry; Camp NaNoWriMo; NaNoWriMo; Rabbits; My Pet Rabbit Nali; Slender; Steam; Team Fortress 2; Minecraft; SkyDoesMinecraft; HuskyMudkipz; PewDiePie; Stephano (duh!); Smosh; Ian is Best Smosh; Woona is Best Princess; The Youtubes; Skypes; Scrivener; Movies; Scripts; Award Shows; Elijah Wood aka Frodo; Pippin is Best Hobbit; Tumblr; Shadowlands MC; Tinq.
Take... whatever you want from that. Just, please, no weird, obsessed stalkers, okay?
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by abbie-sama » Sat Jul 13, 2013 9:42 am
I'm writing some sort of alien asylum scientist experiment thingy. I don't want to give all the details because I'm scared that someone will steal my ideas, but would you read something like that? When I finish the first chapter, I'll post a bit.

i'm not
crazy... i'm just a little
unwell. i know, right now you
can't tell
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by climbing{the}world » Sat Jul 13, 2013 10:17 am
Because I met my best writing/internet buddy through her signature, I decided to list a bunch of things about me. Not that I like making friends. Or that I'm good at it.
Harry Potter; Lord of the Rings; The Hobbit; The Silmarillion; Anything Tolkien Really; My Little Pony; FimFiction; Fanfiction; AppleDash; TwiDash; RariJack; Writing; Poetry; Camp NaNoWriMo; NaNoWriMo; Rabbits; My Pet Rabbit Nali; Slender; Steam; Team Fortress 2; Minecraft; SkyDoesMinecraft; HuskyMudkipz; PewDiePie; Stephano (duh!); Smosh; Ian is Best Smosh; Woona is Best Princess; The Youtubes; Skypes; Scrivener; Movies; Scripts; Award Shows; Elijah Wood aka Frodo; Pippin is Best Hobbit; Tumblr; Shadowlands MC; Tinq.
Take... whatever you want from that. Just, please, no weird, obsessed stalkers, okay?
Okay.*
*Fault in Our Stars reference anyone?
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by grAde8 » Sat Jul 13, 2013 11:07 am
I'm a writer, but I don't want to join anything. I prefer to be known anonymously... as in, by my username. Sometimes I'll write short stories, sometimes poems. I usually only post my writing on the forums of Chicken Smoothie, but I just thought you should know how I roll. If anyone cares... Oh well, TO THE WRITING!
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