SunClan's Story [New Thread]

[SukarettoYanagi]

{ S o r r e l d a s h }

{ No Crush / Mentoring Orionpaw

Sorreldash nodded, seeing if Pineclaw would reply or not. He didn't; so she continued in a rather soft voice.
"About thirty survived, including the new kits. Yes, Foxstar." The warrior was loyal to Foxstar full-heartedly, and instantly followed the order. Blood hung in the air, as Cougarpaw reached her side she gave a flick of her tail in a motion to keep up; though she didn't have any doubts for the tom, as he was just about a little bigger than herself, and enjoyed running around like his sibling.

{ Cougarpaw ✗✗
{{ No Crushes - No mentor - Brother of Wolfpaw ; Cousin of Sorreldash
"They say you got to be large to be strong. You just have to have a big heart!" ☣


Cougarpaw's eyes glinted with joy at the number. Their clan was truely here; though so many had died in the fire, a lethal amount of StoneClan existed. His singed fur held his honor of helping his true leader back to her clan. He nodded in agreement as Foxstar called the order to move, following and dashing before siding by Sorreldash.

Ashcloud's breathing was slowly grown more shallow and raspier as the time ebbed by, and she could feel her life slipping from her. She wanted to hold on to, to live, but she just didn't have the strength or the energy. Her grey coat was matted with blood and rumpled from the fight. Her icy blue eyes were closed loosely, her mind shooting images of her life through her mind. It was all moving too fast. she couldn't see it. Any of it.

Loudstep wasn't particularly hungry, but he knew he had to eat. "I'd say we hunt while we're here. It'll be easier than keeping moving and trying to hunt at the same time." he meowed, pointing out that fact. His ginger fur ruffled against a chilling breeze, ears flattening to his head. He hated the cold. It annoyed him. His tabby striped seemed to dissipate against his ruffled ginger fur, the white on him making him look like he'd walked through snow.

(For calico and crimsoned C: )

[TheCalicoTabby]

{Thanks!}

Foxstar
{Leader, 35 moons, ♀}
A heavily scarred
red she-cat with
bright amber eyes.

The scent of blood was strong, easy to follow. Foxstar hurried through the forest, ignoring the twinges of pain in her hind leg. She leapt over a small log, only to slip as she landed, barely managing to regain her balance. She looked down, eyes narrowing as she saw the small pool of blood she'd slipped on. "We're close." she said tersely, looking back up at her companions. Not waiting for a reply, she set off again, winding her way through the tangled undergrowth. She wrinkled her nose at the scent, now almost overpowering. She looked around for the source, her eyes widening as she saw the small dappled grey form. "Ashcloud!" she exclaimed, hurrying to the cat's side.

Pineclaw
{Warrior, 36 moons, ♂}
A handsome brown
tabby with long claws
and a scarred muzzle.

Pineclaw instinctively fell into his usual position at Foxstar's right as they ran. With Sorreldash and Cougarpaw behind them, it was almost like stepping back in time. Before the fire, and before SunClan. Just another StoneClan patrol, he and his mate at its head. He felt like himself again, for the first time in moons.
Then, his heart froze. He barely heard Foxstar's cry, seeing only his best friend, lying in a pool of blood. Far too much blood. He knew he should do something, but he couldn't bring himself to move as Foxstar approached Ashcloud.

Lightpaw
{Apprentice, 9 moons, ♀}
A scruffy, white-patched
ginger tabby with dark
eyes.

"Alright," said Lightpaw amicably. She gave her messy fur a few quick licks before giving up on it.
"Let's get on with it, then." she said after a moment. "StarClan's waiting!" Her usual energy was returning to her as she trotted off into the small patch of trees, head high as she tasted the air for any trace of prey.

[AlphaWolf10]

Cinder looked over at him. "Yes! I know how to get home!" she meowed. Her dark grey fur flowed like the long grasses in the wind as she ran, racing into the familiar forest that her Clan called home. Her laughed joyously, eyes closed tight as she ran. Her paws skimmed lightly over the ground and she felt like she was flying. She hadn't felt so light in ages, and the apprentice-aged cat loved it.

Stonepaw
He ran next to her matching her speed. He was happy as ever to be going home.
But would this be an end to what has seemed to be a great... Relationship... Once they got back to camp everything would go back to the way it was... Right? Stonepaw ran next to her but his ears slowly went down at the thought of this adventure being over. He put on a fake smile for cinder.

[minette]

Ｃｅｄａｒｐａｗ
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→ { tom }
→ { apprentice }
→ { tagged; galestorm, shiverwhisker }
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He nodded quickly, turning and nearly racing out of the den in his haste. He managed to control his paws, which was a good thing, because he caught the fresh scent of Galestorm very close by. Had she gotten herself to camp all by herself? Cedarpaw skidded to a halt, then spotted her by the camp's entrance, lying on her side and still looking quite scratched up. "G-galestorm!" he flicked his tail, and glanced back for Shiverwhisker.

~ Galestorm
Galestorm opened her eyes. They were dark and milky. " Nervousness isn't good for you, you know that? " she mumbled. She tried to stand up. She stumbled and fell back to the ground. She smirked. " I thought I would be dead by now. " she mewed. She let out a bitter laugh.

[SukarettoYanagi]

Ashcloud, her sides barely moving, did not respond. She could hear sounds, voices, but they were faint and too far away to make out. She knew she was in pain, but she couldn't feel it as her body had gone numb. The flow of her blood had slowed, the cold making it clot on the surface. The grey tabby tried to run toward the voices but couldn't get her legs to work. It was as though she'd lost control of her body and something else was holding her there. "Hello?! Can you help me?!" she called out, but her tongue wouldn't work and the only things that made her realize she was trying to speak was her mind.

Shiverwhisker had rushed forward and caught her as she fell back down. "Cedarpaw, help me get her to my den. I can work there." he meowed, voice commanding as he spoke to the apprentice. His green eyes held little light, but there was a little hope. I can save her. I know I can...! Help me Cricketshine! Help me to save her. he begged his deceased mate silently, praying the warrior would live with what little herb stock he had.

"Hurry Stonepaw! The clan must be excited to see us when we return...!" Cinder meowed, laughter lighting her voice. She smiled back at him, her whiskers warning her of a bush or clump of ferns in which she easily lept over. She stayed behind the bush, waiting to spring out at Stonepaw after he lept over and landed. She was certain their time together would grow into something daily. she liked it all too much just to cease!

[AlphaWolf10]

Cinder looked over at him. "Yes! I know how to get home!" she meowed. Her dark grey fur flowed like the long grasses in the wind as she ran, racing into the familiar forest that her Clan called home. Her laughed joyously, eyes closed tight as she ran. Her paws skimmed lightly over the ground and she felt like she was flying. She hadn't felt so light in ages, and the apprentice-aged cat loved it.

Stonepaw
He ran next to her matching her speed. He was happy as ever to be going home.
But would this be an end to what has seemed to be a great... Relationship... Once they got back to camp everything would go back to the way it was... Right? Stonepaw ran next to her but his ears slowly went down at the thought of this adventure being over. He put on a fake smile for cinder.

[TheCalicoTabby]

Foxstar
{Leader, 35 moons, ♀}
A heavily scarred
red she-cat with
bright amber eyes.

"Ashcloud! Ashcloud, can you hear me?" asked Foxstar urgently, noting with relief that she-cat still breathed. Not dead. Yet. Hearing no response from the she-cat, she looked up again. "Pineclaw, Cougarpaw!" she called sharply. "I'll need you two to carry her. Be careful." She feared moving the she-cat would worsen her injuries, but they had little choice. They had to get her somewhere safe, where a medicine cat could look over her wounds. Did Shiverwhisker still live? Spiderpaw? She'd find out soon enough. "Sorreldash, I'll need you to lead us back to camp." she said, focusing herself. She looked back at Ashcloud, lowering her voice so only she could hear. "Don't you dare die on me. That's an order. I haven't come all this way just to lose another clanmate."

[SukarettoYanagi]

(Edited for you alpha! I knew I was forgetting a reply! XD)

Ashcloud's mouth moved in some way that one could accept as a reply, though a medicine cat would simply say it was involuntary movement of her nerves. She hanged limp between the two toms, her head dangling downward and her tail dragging over the ground. It seemed to be pointing to the other cat that was there. It was Nightshade, the cat who'd done this to her over a mouse and a few words about territory.

[AlphaWolf10]

Ashcloud, her sides barely moving, did not respond. She could hear sounds, voices, but they were faint and too far away to make out. She knew she was in pain, but she couldn't feel it as her body had gone numb. The flow of her blood had slowed, the cold making it clot on the surface. The grey tabby tried to run toward the voices but couldn't get her legs to work. It was as though she'd lost control of her body and something else was holding her there. "Hello?! Can you help me?!" she called out, but her tongue wouldn't work and the only things that made her realize she was trying to speak was her mind.

Shiverwhisker had rushed forward and caught her as she fell back down. "Cedarpaw, help me get her to my den. I can work there." he meowed, voice commanding as he spoke to the apprentice. His green eyes held little light, but there was a little hope. I can save her. I know I can...! Help me Cricketshine! Help me to save her. he begged his deceased mate silently, praying the warrior would live with what little herb stock he had.

"Hurry Stonepaw! The clan must be excited to see us when we return...!" Cinder meowed, laughter lighting her voice. She smiled back at him, her whiskers warning her of a bush or clump of ferns in which she easily lept over. She stayed behind the bush, waiting to spring out at Stonepaw after he lept over and landed. She was certain their time together would grow into something daily. she liked it all too much just to cease!

Stonepaw
He turned his run into a jog then into a quick walking pace.
He walked past the trees and began towards the bushes and fern clumps.
Would this amazing time with cinder end? He hoped not...(Writers block)

[zoketi.]

Ｃｅｄａｒｐａｗ
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→ { tom }
→ { apprentice }
→ { tagged; galestorm, shiverwhisker }
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Cedarpaw watched painfully as the she-cat tried to stand and failed. He moved over immediately to help the medicine cat, offering his support on Galestorm's other flank. He positioned himself carefully against her, flicking out his tail, and nodded to Shiverwhisker. He was still scared for the wounded warrior, and wanted to do all he could to assist her.