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[Affliction]

Username: Twilicious
Character name/ OC or canon : Nightmare Rarity/Cannon
Gender: female
Type (species ex-pegasus, zebra etc) : Unicorn
Age: Young adult
Physical description or image:
A tall dashing dark coated mare, with a diamond on her horn which has began pointier, as well she has a longer tail and mane then the un-corrupted Rarity. Her cutie mark is also more star-like.

Personality: Dark, twisted, fabulous, glorious, cruel, merciless, wicked
History (optional): After being forced by the Nightmare Forces she begins to believe the others might abandom her and find a more talented pony. After the Forces say they wish for her help, Rarity is manipulated into becoming their queen, known as Nightmare Rarity.
Anything else? Rarity and Nightmare rarity are separate characters in this RP

[bud]

((I quit RP as Metalic Scratch))

[Tom Bombadil]

(Accepted. @Kyle thanks for telling me. Will take you off list)

[Affliction]

Nightmare Rarity
My beautiful mane blew, giving off an even more so dramatic effect in the night sky. "Dumb ponies! Cant they see a new prettier pony when one rises from the ashes?" I snarled as I strut down the endless paths and roads. Then a heard a few screams and a familiar face Discord!

[Tom Bombadil]

(Discord)

The dragon noticed the nightmare-pony and growled under his breath.

"Why are there devil-ponies everywhere today?!" he asked. "As if that crazy pinto and her allies weren't enough..."

[Affliction]

Nightmare Rarity
"Look I'm not spiked to see you either!" I lashed back angrily "So who's your friend over there?" I asked confused while staring at the smaller pony.

[Tom Bombadil]

Nightmare Rarity
"Look I'm not spiked to see you either!" I lashed back angrily "So who's your friend over there?" I asked confused while staring at the smaller pony.

(Which pony? There are quite a few)

[Affliction]

(sorry for not being specific, hard to type on phone. Just a warning there may be tons of typos. Oh and All of them)

[Tom Bombadil]

(I'm going to have Storm Clouds jump in here, then i have to go for the night. Bye!)

Storm Clouds noticed a strange nightmare pony loose.

"I'll be back in a bit, Thunder..." she said. "Or you can follow if you like. We got trouble-not a dragon-thing this time, but still."

She trotted over to Discord, ignoring the nightmare-pony.

"Hey Dragon, what is it with you and bothering demon-ponies today. This is the third I've seen!"

"Oh, like it's my fault," retorted Discord. "I keep getting ambushed by psychos-including you!"

He turned back to the nightmare pony.

"Pay no attention to that pinto mare. She's no one."

[QUITETED]

See u at 4ish)
Storm Apple trotted along a path and then on a hill he saw ponyville