|| Like a Blood-stained Hurricane || Accepting~! ||

[light-racer]

{{@light-racer - After I read through your forms, there were a few problems I noticed. The first two are your font color and size. Try to keep them the same through out your posts, as it can end up being confusing and hard to read. The only real exception to this is if you have section titles larger, or if you type a short, spam-ish note in small font.
The third problem is frequent misuse of punctuation, capitalization, and spacing. It seems that you have an annoying habit of capitalizing the second word in the sentence, and not capitalizing names or the first letter in a sentance. You also {{sometimes}} put spaces in the wrong place {{Like this .}} or leave them out altogether {{Like this.See?}}. Also, you frequently leave out apostrophes in the word "I'm" and you sometimes forget to capitalize it.

Because of the three issues above, it took me almost twenty minutes to read something that would usually take me less than five. If, when we start roleplaying, I continue seeing these problems, I will ask you to leave.

There's also a problem with the form itself: you can't just say 'see above', 'look at other form', ect. These forms aren't just for me, they're for other members who want to know about your cat. If a person wants to know about Cole's history, they don't want to read through the form for Clove. Please add both Cole's history and family to his own form.

The last problem is on my part. To make linking to forms easier, I decided to make it a rule to put separate forms in separate posts. I would appreciate if you could move one of your forms to a new post and delete the form from the original post.

And you absolutely can reserve spots. c: But do you mean night guard? There aren't night warriors. ;3 Also, there's a three character limit, so you can't roleplay Falcon, a second in command, a guard/warrior, and a dog. c:

Hehe, I only asked for the three characters ^o^ I'll have my three forms up in a moment! :3 I'll just edit this post so I'm not crowding the thread with nonsense]]

Oh, you did? >.< Oops. Which were the positions you asked for other than Falcon?
*Points above* Could you have your forms in different posts? It makes linking to different forms easier. ^^}}

Ok sorry for the trouble i'll edit and fix the problems you listed.

[V for Kiyoshi]

Falcon is played by Paris Dreams ^o^ I wanted to reserve leader, night guard, and a dog spot c:
Oop, yes I can post them in a separate post! ]]

[birdi]

Falcon is played by Paris Dreams ^o^ I wanted to reserve leader, night guard, and a dog spot c:
Oop, yes I can post them in a separate post! ]]

{{. . .
Darn.
I thought I was smarter than that. X'3
I'm sorry, I must have stopped reading usernames. ;n;}}
Edit;; Wait, leader? I thought you said second in command. *Is confused*
Okay, I'm going to go back and see what other mistakes I made.
Edit #2;;

I am finally finished with my form!

* Wipes sweat from forehead *

Darn. I didn't even reply to you in the first place. Accepted~!

[light-racer]

Name: Cole
Sex: Male
Sexuality: Straight
Age: 42 Moons]
Family: I have a sister,Clove. We never really knew our parents we were raised by my moms sister, Chas.
Relationships: I'm Not looking for anyone but I'm sure I'll find someone.
Appearance:
I have a white chest and my paws are white. My front paws only have a tiny bit of white, but my the white on my back legs reach about halfway up. My under side is dotted with white. Other than that I don't have any other white splotches. These are my personal photos please don't take.
Flaws: I'm not a skilled hunter ,but I can catch prey. I hate climbing but can do it only if I have to. (I usually can't get down.) I have a horriable time with trusting people. Unlike my sister, I cant trust someone on the spot. It take's me a while to warm up to you. I speak what's on my mind.(I've gotten into plenty of trouble doing this.) I hate being not seen. I can't handle silence. I let my anger show. "i'm not afraid to hide it.
Skills: I like to lead. Being seen and heard is what I love. Fighting and making influencing decisions. I'm kind and helpful. You ask questions I give you an answer without beating around the bush.
Rank: Head Guard is what i'm proud to be.
Personality: I stay around different groups, Talk to a lot of others and practice different fighting techniques with the rookies. I'm generally very nice and get along with most cat's.
History: I was told that I was born under a dumpster.(Our parents were always stray) After that we were taken to an abandoned human building my aunt lived in. We had been living with her for three days when my parent's went hunting for some food ,because we all were starving, and never came back. My aunt thought the dogs got them so she went out and came back with food and confirmed their death's. Our aunt passed on three moons ago so now we are here on behalf of our parent's.
RP Sample: Cole lead the way and heard the sound the same time Clove did. his head snapped around as he saw the creature coming from inside the dumpster. His tail twitched for Clove to follow him and lay low. he could see clove had all her defense's up and was not hesitating for a fight. He made a lowly audible sound, signaling for Clove to follow. he didn't want trouble today. he continued on and then heard a bark not for away.
Other: N/A
Form

[birdi]

{{Both of your cats are accepted, light-racer.
I'm sorry if I came off as cold/angry/overly annoyed, I didn't mean to. ^^}}

[light-racer]

{{ Hahaha nope not at all. I understand. It does matter. I just didn't take time to read through it. Sorry if I inconvenienced you.}}

[birdi]

{{ Hahaha nope not at all. I understand. It does matter. I just didn't take time to read through it. Sorry if I inconvenienced you.}}

{{It wasn't an inconvenience so much as an annoyance. ;3

I'm, like, the Hitler of grammar Nazis.}}

[light-racer]

{{ Hahaha ok it won't happen again.}}

[V for Kiyoshi]

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ᴛᴏʙɪᴀs

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Name; ᴛᴏʙɪᴀs

[Tobias is named after his father. His mother has always told him that his father was a great cat, one full of wisdom and courage. Hearing all this, he has always been proud to bare the name Tobias. He sometimes goes by Tobi, to very close friends.

Age; 37 ᴍᴏᴏɴs

[Tobias was born in the middle of leaf green. He had two siblings, one who died from malnutrition. His brother, Talon, is apart of the group of cats around here.

Gender; ᴛᴏᴍ

[It's easy to see that this cat is a tom. His sexuality would be straight.

Rank; sᴇᴄᴏɴᴅ ɪɴ ᴄᴏᴍᴍᴀɴᴅ

[Working his way up the ladder, he has finally conquered what seemed impossible, he is second in command. He loves being second in command, and would be content with this title for the rest of his life if need be.

Appearance; ғʟᴜғғʏ ᴛᴀʙʙʏ

[Tobias is a large tabby with long, shaggy hair that almost drags on the ground. His neck fur is even longer than the rest, making it appear as a mane. It isn't always groomed properly, but he does his best

History; ʟᴏɴɢ

[Born to a loner, him and his brother grew up sort of alone, yet together at the same time. He grew up quickly, mastering hunting and fighting at a young age. He did all he could for his mother before she died from being hit. He was with his brother for a while and they found/will find this band of cats and proved himself worthy of a high position.

Personality; ᴍɪxᴇᴅ

[Tobias is a mix of personalities. He is strong willed, and does what he sees right. He will care for others before he does himself. Sometimes, he can get protective, but seeing as he has been on his own for a little while, he just wants to keep the people he cares for in safe paws. He can be grumpy, and on his worst days, can get angry, but he controls himself very well.

Roleplay example;

[Tobias jumped from his self proclaimed post. His eye had caught movement in the brush, and wanted to investigate. Placing his body close to the ground, he creeped up towards the bushes and sniffed silently. It didn't smell dangerous, but he knew better than to take any chances. Jumping into the bush with his claws out, he let out a yowl and pinned the creature down. In a heartbeat, he calmed himself and looked at what was underneath him. It was a bird. Silently debating with himself, he decided to let the poor thing go. He had already eaten today, and wasn't hungry. He slowly walked towards his post again, when something seemed out of the ordinary. Hair standing up, he called out, "Whose there? Why are you trespassing?"

[I hope this is okay, if I'm missing anything, please tell me! ^o^
Also, other forums coming soon, maybe tomorrow if that's alright]

[Curious]

I'm so sorry if this seems a bit obnoxious, but umm... I don't exactly know what that means. At first I thought it meant gender, but then I realized I'd already put that down, so I thought it was a mistake and deleted it... xc Oops! Sorry!

{{It's not at all obnoxious! A person's sexuality is {{generally}} their preference of gender when in a relationship. In {{hopefully}} less complicated terms, a person's sexuality determines whether they would fall in love with a male or a female. Since I don't know your age, I'm going to leave my explanation at that, but I can add to it if you want. It's nothing that I would feel is inappropriate at all, but some adults might think differently. ^^}}

Yeah, sorry about that, thanks. c: I'm going to edit now, although, by the time you read this, I'll probably be done.cx