Send me away on a starlit cloud.. (Poem)

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Send me away on a starlit cloud.. (Poem)

Postby Apple Cider. » Tue Jun 18, 2013 1:24 pm

Send me away to somewhere nice,
Some place that i can call paradise,

This life i'm living is bitter and cold,
I wish my life were a book so my story could be told,

But alas no one ever bothers to listen,
So i set sail on a starlit cloud and let the world be forgotten,

This little cloud of mine that i hold dear to me,
Is forever my secret that only my eyes are allowed to see,

For the world would crush the life that lives in this little cloud,
And it's my duty to be the protector. I had pinkie swore; i vowed,

So send me away on a starlit cloud,
Where i can voice my opinion aloud,

And not be told i am wrong or disciplined for i am only human,
The stars that lay all around me act like my crewman,

And i am the sailor of dreams,
I am the person who is here to sew up the seams,

So send me somewhere nice,
Some place i can call paradise,

This life i'm living is bitter and cold,
I wish my life were a book so my story could be told,

But alas no one ever bothers to listen,
So i set sail on a starlit cloud and let the world be forgotten.

- Poem written by me.
(c) ME.
Please do not copy this poem, i worked hard on it.
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Re: Send me away on a starlit cloud.. (Poem)

Postby abbie-sama » Tue Jun 18, 2013 9:25 pm

I really like this. I actually can relate to wanting to "get away", per se, and leave this crazy, mixed up world. Great job c':
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Re: Send me away on a starlit cloud.. (Poem)

Postby Apple Cider. » Wed Jun 19, 2013 3:21 am

Awe, why thank you. (:
It took me about 15 minutes
to come up with this idea and
type it all out. I just put my
feelings on paper. (: I'm
glad you liked it! And i'm
sorry i made you cry. That
wasn't my intention. Haha
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Re: Send me away on a starlit cloud.. (Poem)

Postby burtleyy » Wed Jun 19, 2013 3:41 am

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Re: Send me away on a starlit cloud.. (Poem)

Postby Apple Cider. » Wed Jun 19, 2013 5:19 pm

Thank you! c:
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Re: Send me away on a starlit cloud.. (Poem)

Postby Isa Novak » Sun Jun 23, 2013 6:49 am

Very beautiful poem!
Made me almost cry..
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Re: Send me away on a starlit cloud.. (Poem)

Postby Apple Cider. » Thu Jul 04, 2013 5:56 pm

Thank you, you guys. (:
it means a lot. <3
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Re: Send me away on a starlit cloud.. (Poem)

Postby Apple Cider. » Fri Jul 19, 2013 2:21 pm

Small bump. (:
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