{ INKLINGS } LOCK! NEW THREAD

Are you a writer or a poet? Come and share your creations with us, or discuss writing techniques with others
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby runnershigh » Mon Jun 17, 2013 3:28 pm

Username: ✂ I N S A N E.
What we will call you: Maxx, Sandstorm, Insane, Thalia
Will you critique other's work?: Yes!
Links to your story if you have any: I have some on here, but I can't find the links right now X3
Anything you want us to know?: I change my username frequently!
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby burtleyy » Mon Jun 17, 2013 5:48 pm

Username: mine turtle
What we will call you: bunny, turtle, burtleyy
Will you critique other's work?: most likely.
Links to your story if you have any: first sparks
Anything you want us to know?: I have been writing for a long while, and am attempting to do some high semi-literate role-plays when I have the inspiration. I am also beginning to seriously work on writing, and 'First Sparks' is merely an idea I got from inspiration.
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby videlicet » Tue Jun 18, 2013 11:02 am

School is finally out for the summer, and I'm relishing the chance to be able to write again! C: I've been sitting on a novel plot for almost half the year -no exaggeration- but I haven't been able to do anything with it yet.
Which leads me to ask some very pertinent questions -how do you guys go about plotting your novels? What do you do when you get stuck at a certain section, and how do you go about world-building and character-shaping?
This is partly simple curiosity, and partly my idea of being proactive (for once) and attempting to acquire some tips before driving right into the fray. :p

As well, I've found myself creating a new writing-focused club here, to encourage and aid collaborative writing amongst the members of Chicken Smoothie. I'm not certain whether or not it's something that many people are at all interested in, but I thought I might as well share it.

-Viz
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are moving across the landscapes, / over the prairies and the deep trees,
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby Apple Cider. » Tue Jun 18, 2013 12:48 pm

I recently wrote a poem
earlier today. (: Here's
the link for you guys! (:
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby ~Demonic Moon Curse~ » Wed Jun 19, 2013 6:24 am

~Fang~ wrote:
~Fang~ wrote:I have three stories in my signature. Could someone(s) please go over them and critique them? Thankyou!


Please?


Sorry to be persistent, but can someone please check these over for me so I can continue? I don't want to continue a bad story line.
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Oh me! Oh life! of the questions of these recurring,
Of the endless trains of the faithless, of cities fill’d with the foolish,
Of myself forever reproaching myself, (for who more foolish than I, and who more faithless?)
Of eyes that vainly crave the light, of the objects mean, of the struggle ever renew’d,
Of the poor results of all, of the plodding and sordid crowds I see around me,
Of the empty and useless years of the rest, with the rest me intertwined,
The question, O me! so sad, recurring—What good amid these, O me, O life?
Answer.
That you are here—that life exists and identity,



That the powerful play goes on, and you may contribute a verse.
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby Rolly-chan » Wed Jun 19, 2013 6:50 am

s e v e n wrote:School is finally out for the summer, and I'm relishing the chance to be able to write again! C: I've been sitting on a novel plot for almost half the year -no exaggeration- but I haven't been able to do anything with it yet.
Which leads me to ask some very pertinent questions -how do you guys go about plotting your novels? What do you do when you get stuck at a certain section, and how do you go about world-building and character-shaping?
This is partly simple curiosity, and partly my idea of being proactive (for once) and attempting to acquire some tips before driving right into the fray. :p

As well, I've found myself creating a new writing-focused club here, to encourage and aid collaborative writing amongst the members of Chicken Smoothie. I'm not certain whether or not it's something that many people are at all interested in, but I thought I might as well share it.

-Viz

I am currently going through Holly Lisles How To Think Sideways course, so I'm pretty much doing everything according to those workshops. Coming up with an idea, getting a rough sketch of the plot in my head, noting down only three critical elements on which the story hinges, deciding on the protagonist, the antagonist, the setting and the twist and writing The Sentence from it (just one sentence to convey the essence of the plot in an engaging way while not revealing the conclusion), developing all the critical information (critical meaning ONLY the stuff that either moves the story forward and/or forces a main character to change), thinking up a few good scenes, which I note down in one sentence each on small note cards (The Sentence Light), playing around with the order of the scenes until I find one that I like and that fits, and then... well, writing.
Usually, I'm a very linear writer. I start at the beginning and go step for step, but I'm playing with the idea to jump from scene to scene, no matter from where it is. Maybe that will get my creativity flowing even more xD

I don't really have a usual way to plot. Some elements of it I use every time, like noting down my whole plot in one to three sentences (including the end), noting down the main characters (including antagonist, if he's a character), doing the story math (deciding on the length and dividing it by my mean length of a single scene, which is somewhere between 1,000 and 2,000 words - I usually take 1,000 - to get the amount of scenes I'll have to write for that length), and at least writing down the beginning scene and the ending scene in one sentence on note cards. Sometimes I just go linear from scene to scene, and before I write the next scene, I write down in one sentence what it's about (because a scene is a story in miniature with a beginning, a middle and an end). Other times I pre-plan some scenes and go from there.

When I develop worlds or special physics (like magic) I usually go first for the details I will absolutely need for the story to progress. And then I tend to over-develop worlds *lol* So don't take me as an example of good worldbuilding xD Because quite frankly, you just do not need to develop everything about your world to make it feel rich and well-developed. Building the critical elements is totally enough in the planning stages. Everything else you can build as you go.
(I do usually develop time, weight and distance measures, because I know I'll surely use some of them. Like, I can't always use "noon" for "noon". Inhabitants of other worlds maybe don't call it that. Maybe they call it "midday", which the pets in my CS pet story do, which I still haven't published here because it's far from finished XD).

When I'm stuck I identify the problem first (most often the problem lies within what I've written so far and arises one, two or several scenes before the scene I'm stuck on), then I find ways to fix it and then I fix it. Simple as that.
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby I'm Not The Only One » Wed Jun 19, 2013 6:52 am

Previous Username: ~*Irish Rose*~
New Username: Lorde.
What you'd like to be called now: Lorde, Lordy or Lor haha
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Only One or One. I used to be .thewriter. so please don't steal
that name as I might go back to it. So if you can't tell, my
favourite so is I'm Not The Only One by Sam Smith <3 I live in
New Zealand and like trades, role-playing, reading and writing
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby videlicet » Wed Jun 19, 2013 7:49 am

@Rolly-chan, Wow, that was a lot of excellent advice! Thank you so much for that -I will definitely keep it all in mind when developing my current project! c:
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meanwhile the world goes on. / meanwhile the sun and the clear pebbles of the rain
are moving across the landscapes, / over the prairies and the deep trees,
the mountains and the rivers. --wild geese, by mary oliver

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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby mr.kingrichard » Wed Jun 19, 2013 9:55 am

Oooh, shiny new thread~ Hey everyone, I've been gone for a while but I'm back now.
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby Small Child » Wed Jun 19, 2013 12:37 pm

Er... How does thi sound?
I don’t remember waking up, but I found myself sitting on my bed some time later. I turned to look at the clock, but the hands were blurred, and the numbers seemed to have been wiped off. Rubbing my forehead, I looked over to the window to see the rain pounding against the glass, spattering across it in huge drops. The strange thing was that I didn’t hear it- I couldn’t pick up the sound. For a moment I panicked, thinking I had lost my hearing. Standing up quickly to call out to my aunt, I dropped the bear.
The plush toy fell to the floor with a soft thud, so I knew then that I wasn’t hearing impaired. I looked back to the window, and still the rain slammed against it, fat drops hitting both the glass and the wood. Frowning, I walked over to it, pressing my fingers against the chilled glass.
Looking down to see the lock fastened, I fiddled with it to open the window. The rain made sound now, like rocks tumbling down a metal pipe. Bringing my legs up to sit on the window bay seat, I rested my elbows on the sill, watching it spatter against the road. It all seemed to be going slowly, like someone had placed a large television in front of my window and pressed slow motion.
Sighing, I pulled the windows shut and latched them, the noise being muted almost automatically. Turning to walk down the stairs, a breeze pulled my hair to brush past my ears. As I turned, my eyes widened dramatically as I saw the window was open. I rubbed a hand up my arm to try and get rid of the chill running over my body.
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