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by candu » Sun Jun 16, 2013 10:39 am
Previous Username: Emma The Writer
New Username: Khajina
What you'd like to be called now: Emma, Emmy, Aqua or Jina
happenings in 2015:discovered dan + phil,
swam competitively,
went to we day twice,
started listening to p!atd,
got my braces off,
visited family i haven't
seen since like 2004,
tried candy from japan,
saw superwoman and
justin trudeau in person,
got ice cream a lot,
stopped being friends with
some really toxic people,
had an amazing year.



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by invisible_redhead » Sun Jun 16, 2013 1:00 pm
Username: invisible_redhead
What we will call you: I go by Sky and Red, but most people just call me Red.
Will you critique other's work?: Maybe.
Links to your story if you have any: I don't have any stories posted.
Anything you want us to know?: I was a member on Inklings once, but I haven't posted in a long time and I wasn't on the members list, so I'm signing up again.
Sometimes you see things that are
real,
and other times it's like
crazy, crazy, crazy
all up in your face.
All the time.
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by ~Demonic Moon Curse~ » Sun Jun 16, 2013 5:39 pm
~Fang~ wrote:I have three stories in my signature. Could someone(s) please go over them and critique them? Thankyou!
Please?
Oh me! Oh life! of the questions of these recurring,
Of the endless trains of the faithless, of cities fill’d with the foolish,
Of myself forever reproaching myself, (for who more foolish than I, and who more faithless?)
Of eyes that vainly crave the light, of the objects mean, of the struggle ever renew’d,
Of the poor results of all, of the plodding and sordid crowds I see around me,
Of the empty and useless years of the rest, with the rest me intertwined,
The question, O me! so sad, recurring—What good amid these, O me, O life?
Answer.
That you are here—that life exists and identity,
That the powerful play goes on, and you may contribute a verse.
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by Rolly-chan » Mon Jun 17, 2013 12:57 am
Maerorem Lestrange wrote:I like the Latin word Maerorem (obviously). It means gloom, which is also a word I really like. I don't like the word neat when describing something, though. I just find it irritating.
Oh, when it's about Latin words I really like the phrase perpetuum mobile |D In memoriam, too. *sigh* I really need to refresh my Latin. Haven't used it in forever xD
Maerorem is the accusative, though, the nominative would be Maeror.
actually, I shouldn't be here, I have a Bachelor thesis to complete till tonight *cough*
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by mi ainsel » Mon Jun 17, 2013 6:00 am
Artesian wrote:So, I've got a new
book up online, the entirety of a project I finished a few years ago.
At the creation of the island of Aerema, the goddess Ryath chose one animal to rule over the land forever-more. She searched far and wide to find the perfect being on which to place the crown -
Yeah, that's not how it happened. Really, the one who can do the job gets the job, after alli s said and done, plotted and schemed, twisted and turned. Through magical accidents, murder attempts and mysterious allies, plots are unravelled and a kingdom is formed.
This story includes magic, snow, elven animals, wolves, panthers, revealed identities, books of magic, crowns, snakes, evil tyrant crocodiles ... among a myriad of other things.
It's available for your perusal, and if you like it, please rate or comment. :3 It's not my best, I don't think, but it's still fairly entertaining.
I just wanted to say that I read this a couple of days ago and really enjoyed it. It has a few typos, but otherwise it's a really good read. :3
✩ My deviantART ✩Guess who’s back on CS? It’s been a while.art by trashqrince <3
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by Artesian » Mon Jun 17, 2013 8:21 am
Mello-chan wrote:Artesian wrote:So, I've got a new
book up online, the entirety of a project I finished a few years ago.
At the creation of the island of Aerema, the goddess Ryath chose one animal to rule over the land forever-more. She searched far and wide to find the perfect being on which to place the crown -
Yeah, that's not how it happened. Really, the one who can do the job gets the job, after alli s said and done, plotted and schemed, twisted and turned. Through magical accidents, murder attempts and mysterious allies, plots are unravelled and a kingdom is formed.
This story includes magic, snow, elven animals, wolves, panthers, revealed identities, books of magic, crowns, snakes, evil tyrant crocodiles ... among a myriad of other things.
It's available for your perusal, and if you like it, please rate or comment. :3 It's not my best, I don't think, but it's still fairly entertaining.
I just wanted to say that I read this a couple of days ago and really enjoyed it. It has a few typos, but otherwise it's a really good read. :3
Wow, thanks Mello-chan!

I'm glad you enjoyed it. ^-^ (If you remember where the typos are, please send me a PM, and I'll fix them.)
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