Things That Annoy You [v.64] *new rule no.9

[[please delete]]

Fox, please stay away from my house.
I do not enjoy hearing your ungodly screams in the middle of the night.

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We ran out of ice.
Dammit.

[derision]

Boys.
The boys.
My boys.
My brothers.
All of these in general,
my brothers are just..
bothering me.

[mothfae]

i swear to god if i have too endure one more annoying pop song i am going to implode.

[i made a new account]

ahhhh I had to stand in the rain for ages and now that its dry its curly??? what? it's in ringlets why is this. how is this even possible

[arcticwolf]

I hate when you lose signal when you're on the phone with someone, and they keep calling your name and you're just like
i'm here
yeah
yes i'm here
hey
i'm here

and then you want to scream at the phone so they can hear you even though it won't make any difference

[ghftz.]

hey
hey mom
how about instead of staring me creepishly in the eyes when i make a stupid suggestion for several minutes before actually saying what's wrong with it
you just come out and say what's wrong with it and skip the damned staredown
seriously
you know damned well how uncomfortable staring makes me and you also know damned well that i do not think quickly and i'm not going to just magically come up with the reason just because you're staring at me
actually staring makes my brain shut down
so stop with the pointless dramatic effects okay because they're absolutely useless and discomforting

Also I bloody hate this sentence.
It isn't one that can simply be excluded as it's the beginning structure of the paragraph, but I can't frigging reword it so that it looks like.
"[brief summary], [motivation], [reasoning for motivation]; [explanation behind reasoning], [brief influence by character's mentality."
I have this god-awful attachment to run-on sentences. Though I can usually atleast make them make sense, here it just isn't working.. the three separate ideas at the beginning of the sentence are driving me up the wall. It sounds absolutely horrible and I can't figure out how to fix it. Problematically though, I'm currently re-writing something I wrote a long time ago and had once already asked for help on it, to a rather large group of people supposed to be really good at this stuff, and they weren't able to find a way to fix it either and I'm pretty sure if I asked for help on it again they'd either give the same response or maybe add on that I shouldn't be repeating a question I already got a response for, no matter how unsuccessful.

[Edwawd]

Friends being rude to you and not being sure if they are for real or not >~<

[Lierre]

My crush(girlfriend??) is going to send me a package since I've been feeling really sad lately and even though she just started getting it together yesterday and hasn't even sent it yet I want it NOOOWWWww. I keep checking the mail everyday for it. Ugggh.

[Kyar]

I love her but I love Luna too and I just asdfghjkl why. :(

[xXFoxfaceToastXx]

I want my bff back, she's the one I wanted to spend my bday with and now she's gone for months. :'c
Pretty much my online bday sucks, even the person I commissioned art from as a gift to myself went MIA.