Ocean Life (Kiamara #13 Story And Writing)

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Ocean Life (Kiamara #13 Story And Writing)

Postby xtr.terrestrial » Sun Jun 02, 2013 6:47 am



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I am trying out for this beautiful, magnificent kiamara up there ♥
Here is where I will put her story, history, and personality, because it takes up too much space on the form.
Posting is now open <3


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Personality

Postby xtr.terrestrial » Sun Jun 02, 2013 6:48 am

Mischevious
Mizu is very mischievous. I mean really, she TOTALLY didn't steal that cookie out of the jar, she promises -winks-
Mizu wrote:WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT. I DID NOTHING! -hides cookie behind back- e3e



Imaginative
Mizu is also very imaginative! She loves to make sand castles, and dang if you saw them they are pretty amazing!
Mizu wrote:-walks away from sand castle for others to see- Tada!!!



Zesty
She is the pinky pie of the kiamara world, she is always happy and exited about everything, and I mean EVERYTHING.
Mizu wrote:OMG LOOK AT THAT THAT BIRD IS FLYING ASDFGHJK I AM SO EXITED ;U; -flails-



Unique
Have you ever seen a kiamara stuff 13 cookies in her mouth at once and be able to chew it and swallow it whole, no. I don't think so!
Mizu wrote:-slams paw on table with cookies in her mouth and mumbles- VICTORYYYYYYYYY
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History

Postby xtr.terrestrial » Sun Jun 02, 2013 6:48 am

Mizu wrote:I was born a single child, and will always been that way. I grew up at the beach for most of my life. It was the one place I could go and relax myself. I remember the first time I went to the beach. It was a great time of my life, and probably the best time of my life. When I was about 3, my mother and father died in a tragic car accident together. Ever since then, I have raised myself. Yea, you may think that would make me all sad and junk, but NUPE! I LOOOOOOOOOVE LIFE! Life is fun! FUN FUN FUN!!! I won't let that silly old thing bring me down! I bought a house at the beach not to long ago, and I have lived by myself. Yea, it is empty, but it is kinda nice having peace and quiet.
As long as I have pepsi, cookies, and the beach, I am just fine! ♥
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Story

Postby xtr.terrestrial » Sun Jun 02, 2013 6:48 am

Sunset Beach wrote:
Today was the day. Today was the day I was going to the beach for the first time in my life! I jolted up from my bed in excitement. I ran over to my bag and went through everything, I had a check list to make sure I had everything...
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... "Now that I have everything, now I need to go get ready", I thought to myself. I walked over to my desk and picked up my bathing suit. Quickly, I put it on and pulled the bag down from the tall table. "Mommy, I am ready!" I called out to her, I sighed. "No response" I thought to myself. I walked over to her bedroom door and hopped up on her bed, noticing that she is still asleep. I hopped on top of her and started to jump up and down. "Wakey Wakey sleepy head!" I said to her. She mumbled and sat up. "What time is it..." she said angrily. "It is..." I looked at the clock. "Ten thirty! Wow, you slept in! Come on, today is the day you promised to take me to the beach for the first time!" I said jumping up and down in excitement. "Oh... yea..." she said getting out of bed. "I already got everything ready!" I said, trying to make her proud. "Thats cool," she said in a sarcastic-like tone. I sighed and walked into my room, grabbing the beach bag and pulling it into the living room.

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We got into the car. I buckled up, turned on the radio, and relaxed. I looked out of the car window and watched the palm trees roll past us. When I looked over to the other side, I could see a large ocean. I saw little kiamaras playing around in the sand, building sand castles, you know what I mean. We drove down a long path way and got a a huge parking lot. We parked quickly in the spot that was closest to the beach. Quickly, I ran to the trunk of the car and pulled the bag and umbrella out. I dragged them down the the nicest spot I could find on the beach. I quickly laid down the blanket and put the umbrella up.
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My mom laid down on the towel and relaxed. I ran down into the water with excitement. The nice cold water felt amazing on my fur. I walked in more to the point where I was swimming to keep myself up. I looked down and saw a little fish swim past my feet. I ducked under and watched it go by in amazement as I came back up and giggled. I decided by now I would go back on the beach and make a sand castle.

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My mom handed me a towel. "Dry off before you get in my nice leather car, can you sweetie?" she asked with a smile. I took the towel and dried my fur off. Before I got back into the car, I laid down a dry towel to prevent any excess water to get on the leather. While I was at the beach, I was digging in the sand. I found this, necklace of some kind. The necklace had pearls and tiny little shells on it. It didn't seem like a normal necklace to me, but to you it may seem like just a plain old thing you would get from a game at the movies. I put it around my neck. The main big pearl began to glow. "I wonder if this is like some kind of buried treasure?!" I thought to myself. I giggled. I knew it wasn't. I rested my head on the side of the car and watched the clouds pass. It was a fun time, probably the best time of my life. I went into the ocean, I built a huge sand castle, I collected some shells, and I relaxed and drank some pepsi! Well, it was nice as you can see. It made me realize that the beach is my home, and that it is the place I should go to if I ever want to relax.
That is how I learned that the beach is where I need to be ♥
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Why I Want Her

Postby xtr.terrestrial » Sun Jun 02, 2013 6:51 am

Lets put it this way, why would I not want her? She is just gorgeous <3
It is a very hard competition I am going against! Everyone trying out and others know how pretty she is. Like me, I am working as hard as everyone else to get this kiamara. Yes, I do own 2 kiamaras, and I am close to my limit. This shows that even though I am still close to my limit, and if my dream kiamara (soul eater one eue) ever comes up, it shows that I don't care, and that I love her so much I will still go close to my limit. Like I said, this is a very hard competition and I wish the best to everyone else trying out for her <3
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Art

Postby xtr.terrestrial » Sun Jun 09, 2013 7:50 am

Fireflies- By Me::
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Cookie!- Pixel By Me::
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Butterfly- By Me::
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Ocean Friends- By .Amber. ::
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Hey There- By Lupi-Tox on DA::
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Who stole the Cookies from the Cookie Jar?- By Tamashī::
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She got into the shoe polish again- By NovaTrinity on DA::
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Blinking Avatar- By derpwolf:3::
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Nom Nom Nom, Yummy!- By NoctPanda::
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I got a jar of dirt!!!- By me::
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Chillin' like a villan- by creambitt on DA::
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My Pepsi!- By HannahBug::
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Anthro- By me::
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Late night snack- By PokeZelda
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Bounce Animation- By midnight dragon::
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Re: Ocean Life (Kiamara #13 Story And Writing)

Postby xtr.terrestrial » Sun Jun 16, 2013 6:44 am

Ok! Posting is now open! <3
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