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Re: The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby star star. » Thu May 16, 2013 1:29 pm

Mento. wrote:awesome!! Wait.... Flower whispering!!?? WUUTTT

We were all startled...





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Re: The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby Nonexsitent » Thu May 16, 2013 6:56 pm

I have a few ideas. :3 After school (UK time) I'll send them through PM.
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Re: The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby Alnitak » Sun May 19, 2013 5:28 am

Another Great entry, JF.
I cannot believe Flower whispered. Twice.
Man, its a shame you couldn't make Feugo good.
Anyway, I may have some ideas...
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Re: The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Thu May 23, 2013 5:56 pm

♌ Nepeta Leijon ♌ wrote:Its ok JF, I got no ideas though XDD

Thanks. :)
Mento. wrote:awesome!! Wait.... Flower whispering!!?? WUUTTT

Night Emerald wrote:
Mento. wrote:awesome!! Wait.... Flower whispering!!?? WUUTTT

We were all startled...

lol
Our Bleeding Shadow wrote:
I have a few ideas. :3 After school (UK time) I'll send them through PM.

Thank you! Can't wait to get them! :)
Lion. wrote:Another Great entry, JF.
I cannot believe Flower whispered. Twice.
Man, its a shame you couldn't make Feugo good.
Anyway, I may have some ideas...

Okay! Please send them to me when you can! :) See announcement below as well, please! :)

So sorry. I know I haven't been on in a long time... and I haven't posted... I've lost a lot of interest in Chickensmoothie. It doesn't help that my sister is on the computer nearly 24/7, so the only time I can really get on is when she's showering and in the morning. Another problem: this story has just sort of stopped. The haters are probably having a party right now, but I feel really upset. I don't want to loose all you guys; a lot of fans dropped out, I think, when I published the book. Then the haters came and made everything worse. Then I slowly just stopped writing this. It doesn't help that I've changed writing styles, now. I don't know how, but I just can't write funny anymore. I'm more of a tragedy/suspense writer now (it also doesn't help that I'm currently writing about 6 stories on top of this). That's why I need so many ideas. I'm really hoping that you guys can get me back on track. :) Even my brother has been asking me when I'm going to write a new entry, but I just don't know because my writing has changed drastically. I really, really want to continue this series, but I need you guys' help to get through it. Think you could help?
I really feel horrible for neglecting you guys. I've just lost a lot of interest in CS and my writing has changed and I've been really stressed lately, too. Luckily I'm on summer break now, and I got a bunch of books from the Library today, so I'm hoping I can just relax and read for once. I'll try getting on tomorrow (if I can). Again, I'm so sorry! I hope you guys can forgive me.
I have to go now. My sister's about out of the shower, and I don't want her yelling at me to get off. Thanks for reading this (long) message, and I hope you can forgive me. ~~RevJay

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end all of this,
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Re: The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby .Fish. » Thu May 23, 2013 10:03 pm

RevolutionMockingjay wrote:So sorry. I know I haven't been on in a long time... and I haven't posted... I've lost a lot of interest in Chickensmoothie. It doesn't help that my sister is on the computer nearly 24/7, so the only time I can really get on is when she's showering and in the morning. Another problem: this story has just sort of stopped. The haters are probably having a party right now, but I feel really upset. I don't want to loose all you guys; a lot of fans dropped out, I think, when I published the book. Then the haters came and made everything worse. Then I slowly just stopped writing this. It doesn't help that I've changed writing styles, now. I don't know how, but I just can't write funny anymore. I'm more of a tragedy/suspense writer now (it also doesn't help that I'm currently writing about 6 stories on top of this). That's why I need so many ideas. I'm really hoping that you guys can get me back on track. :) Even my brother has been asking me when I'm going to write a new entry, but I just don't know because my writing has changed drastically. I really, really want to continue this series, but I need you guys' help to get through it. Think you could help?
I really feel horrible for neglecting you guys. I've just lost a lot of interest in CS and my writing has changed and I've been really stressed lately, too. Luckily I'm on summer break now, and I got a bunch of books from the Library today, so I'm hoping I can just relax and read for once. I'll try getting on tomorrow (if I can). Again, I'm so sorry! I hope you guys can forgive me.
I have to go now. My sister's about out of the shower, and I don't want her yelling at me to get off. Thanks for reading this (long) message, and I hope you can forgive me. ~~RevJay

First Welcome :33
2. What about changing some of TIAJNAD into your new writing style but kerping some funny parts? :))
3. Do you only have 1 computer in your house? :OO
4.I will be here furefur Forever I will always be a fan of TIAJNA.
5. I will send you ideas if I efur think of any! :DD
6. I will always furgive you :'33
7. Siblings are such a pain. I know mine are XDD
8. Off to crash the hater party!!! Maybe some deaths to B33
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Re: The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Fri May 24, 2013 5:45 am

♌ Nepeta Leijon ♌ wrote:First Welcome :33
2. What about changing some of TIAJNAD into your new writing style but kerping some funny parts? :))
3. Do you only have 1 computer in your house? :OO
4.I will be here furefur Forever I will always be a fan of TIAJNA.
5. I will send you ideas if I efur think of any! :DD
6. I will always furgive you :'33
7. Siblings are such a pain. I know mine are XDD
8. Off to crash the hater party!!! Maybe some deaths to B33
♥♦Nepeta♣♠

1. Thanks. :)
2. That might work... :)
3. There's two, but I can't go on CS on my mom's (it makes her computer crash).
4. Really? Thank you! :)
5. Okay! Sounds good! :)
6. Thanks, Rocky. :)
7. lol, yes they are. XD
8. lol, good luck! X)

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby star star. » Fri May 24, 2013 8:37 am

RevolutionMockingjay wrote:So sorry. I know I haven't been on in a long time... and I haven't posted... I've lost a lot of interest in Chickensmoothie. It doesn't help that my sister is on the computer nearly 24/7, so the only time I can really get on is when she's showering and in the morning. Another problem: this story has just sort of stopped. The haters are probably having a party right now, but I feel really upset. I don't want to loose all you guys; a lot of fans dropped out, I think, when I published the book. Then the haters came and made everything worse. Then I slowly just stopped writing this. It doesn't help that I've changed writing styles, now. I don't know how, but I just can't write funny anymore. I'm more of a tragedy/suspense writer now (it also doesn't help that I'm currently writing about 6 stories on top of this). That's why I need so many ideas. I'm really hoping that you guys can get me back on track. :) Even my brother has been asking me when I'm going to write a new entry, but I just don't know because my writing has changed drastically. I really, really want to continue this series, but I need you guys' help to get through it. Think you could help?
I really feel horrible for neglecting you guys. I've just lost a lot of interest in CS and my writing has changed and I've been really stressed lately, too. Luckily I'm on summer break now, and I got a bunch of books from the Library today, so I'm hoping I can just relax and read for once. I'll try getting on tomorrow (if I can). Again, I'm so sorry! I hope you guys can forgive me.
I have to go now. My sister's about out of the shower, and I don't want her yelling at me to get off. Thanks for reading this (long) message, and I hope you can forgive me. ~~RevJay

JayF. I forgive you. <3 My writing has also changed, in my opinion... (At least, I think... xD) And trust me, I would help you in anything. We were on the way home, and I thought of some ideas for my book series.... Maybe I can help you with ideas?? (;
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Re: The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby .Fish. » Fri May 24, 2013 9:55 am

RevolutionMockingjay wrote:
♌ Nepeta Leijon ♌ wrote:First Welcome :33
2. What about changing some of TIAJNAD into your new writing style but kerping some funny parts? :))
3. Do you only have 1 computer in your house? :OO
4.I will be here furefur Forever I will always be a fan of TIAJNA.
5. I will send you ideas if I efur think of any! :DD
6. I will always furgive you :'33
7. Siblings are such a pain. I know mine are XDD
8. Off to crash the hater party!!! Maybe some deaths to B33
♥♦Nepeta♣♠

1. Thanks. :)
2. That might work... :)
3. There's two, but I can't go on CS on my mom's (it makes her computer crash).
4. Really? Thank you! :)
5. Okay! Sounds good! :)
6. Thanks, Rocky. :)
7. lol, yes they are. XD
8. lol, good luck! X)

1. :33
2. Yay
3.Ohhh
4. Yep welcome h33h33
5. Yay
6. Welcome JF
7. Yurp XDD
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Re: The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby Rebel Faery » Sat May 25, 2013 3:59 am

Sorry for not replying! My internet was down, I've been playing on sims, overloadedwith fanfiction, busy with school, making plans for a webshow with by best friend, the usual, yadayadayada.
So, once again, reading while I write...

"I'm not a guy!"
"OR ARE YOU?!"
"... nope, pretty sure I'm not."
"BUT YOU COULD BE!"
"But I'm not."
"Guys, can you please just shut up?!"
"I'M NOT A GUY!"
"YOU COULD BE!"

And off we go again! lol :D Amy + Flower = hilariousness

"OH MY GOSH."
"WHAT?!"
"FLOWER JUST WHISPERED FOR ONCE!"

A miricle or the end of the world? Hmm... tough question...

"Why is she hitting her head on a rock?"
"I think she's aggravated."
"Or she's trying to get a concussion, in which I'll be happy help her."
"I heard that, DQ!"
"That's why I said it out loud."
"I can't believe I'm dealing with such idiots."

Um... can someone call an ambulance? I'm dying over here xD so... funneh... *dies* *ressurects* *laughs like an idiotic super villian*

And then Jenette did something I thought she'd never do; she hugged DQ.
"What.... the... heck."

My reaction exactly (after I laughed my head off and stuff)! Jenette, you never cease to surprise me...

"Nobody has an idea."
"WHO'S NOBODY?!"
"... none of us."
"THEN WHO'S NOBODY?!"
"Don't even try, Amy. Don't even try."

I wont... bother... Flower xD so loveable, fluffy, and dumb- what's not to like? Oh yah- she talks WAY too much...

RevolutionMockingjay wrote:So sorry. I know I haven't been on in a long time... and I haven't posted... I've lost a lot of interest in Chickensmoothie. It doesn't help that my sister is on the computer nearly 24/7, so the only time I can really get on is when she's showering and in the morning. Another problem: this story has just sort of stopped. The haters are probably having a party right now, but I feel really upset. I don't want to loose all you guys; a lot of fans dropped out, I think, when I published the book. Then the haters came and made everything worse. Then I slowly just stopped writing this. It doesn't help that I've changed writing styles, now. I don't know how, but I just can't write funny anymore. I'm more of a tragedy/suspense writer now (it also doesn't help that I'm currently writing about 6 stories on top of this). That's why I need so many ideas. I'm really hoping that you guys can get me back on track. :) Even my brother has been asking me when I'm going to write a new entry, but I just don't know because my writing has changed drastically. I really, really want to continue this series, but I need you guys' help to get through it. Think you could help?
I really feel horrible for neglecting you guys. I've just lost a lot of interest in CS and my writing has changed and I've been really stressed lately, too. Luckily I'm on summer break now, and I got a bunch of books from the Library today, so I'm hoping I can just relax and read for once. I'll try getting on tomorrow (if I can). Again, I'm so sorry! I hope you guys can forgive me.
I have to go now. My sister's about out of the shower, and I don't want her yelling at me to get off. Thanks for reading this (long) message, and I hope you can forgive me. ~~RevJay


No, it's okay, I understand! A bit of advice: don't be me. Don't just drop something, like I do every time. Sure, it's tough, you just have to look for inspiriation and everything. I know what you mean about losing interest in CS; I haven't been on all month. And in future, I'll only come on to adopt or check up on TIAJNAD. Real life sucks sometimes, doesn't it?
As for your computer problem... is there maybe a public library or internet cafe near your house? I know that my local library has computers that you can spend up to an hour on. Maybe try that? Then there's also a tablet (such as iPad, kindle, ect...). I know not every family has these (let alone 4...) but if you do then you should be able to use that to get on CS.
Hope I helped, and I'm sure your inspiration will come back soon! If not, I'll try and see sosie sometime in half term, or PM her or something, and see if we can come up with any ideas to help.
See you sometime in the next month or so

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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
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Re: The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sat May 25, 2013 2:39 pm

Night Emerald wrote:JayF. I forgive you. <3 My writing has also changed, in my opinion... (At least, I think... xD) And trust me, I would help you in anything. We were on the way home, and I thought of some ideas for my book series.... Maybe I can help you with ideas?? (;
~ Kat

Thank you so much, Kat. <3 And yes! Please help me with ideas!!
♌ Nepeta Leijon ♌ wrote:
RevolutionMockingjay wrote:
♌ Nepeta Leijon ♌ wrote:First Welcome :33
2. What about changing some of TIAJNAD into your new writing style but kerping some funny parts? :))
3. Do you only have 1 computer in your house? :OO
4.I will be here furefur Forever I will always be a fan of TIAJNA.
5. I will send you ideas if I efur think of any! :DD
6. I will always furgive you :'33
7. Siblings are such a pain. I know mine are XDD
8. Off to crash the hater party!!! Maybe some deaths to B33
♥♦Nepeta♣♠

1. Thanks. :)
2. That might work... :)
3. There's two, but I can't go on CS on my mom's (it makes her computer crash).
4. Really? Thank you! :)
5. Okay! Sounds good! :)
6. Thanks, Rocky. :)
7. lol, yes they are. XD
8. lol, good luck! X)

1. :33
2. Yay
3.Ohhh
4. Yep welcome h33h33
5. Yay
6. Welcome JF
7. Yurp XDD
8. H33h33

:)
.:Invisi:. wrote:Sorry for not replying! My internet was down, I've been playing on sims, overloadedwith fanfiction, busy with school, making plans for a webshow with by best friend, the usual, yadayadayada.
So, once again, reading while I write...

"I'm not a guy!"
"OR ARE YOU?!"
"... nope, pretty sure I'm not."
"BUT YOU COULD BE!"
"But I'm not."
"Guys, can you please just shut up?!"
"I'M NOT A GUY!"
"YOU COULD BE!"

And off we go again! lol :D Amy + Flower = hilariousness

"OH MY GOSH."
"WHAT?!"
"FLOWER JUST WHISPERED FOR ONCE!"

A miricle or the end of the world? Hmm... tough question...

"Why is she hitting her head on a rock?"
"I think she's aggravated."
"Or she's trying to get a concussion, in which I'll be happy help her."
"I heard that, DQ!"
"That's why I said it out loud."
"I can't believe I'm dealing with such idiots."

Um... can someone call an ambulance? I'm dying over here xD so... funneh... *dies* *ressurects* *laughs like an idiotic super villian*

And then Jenette did something I thought she'd never do; she hugged DQ.
"What.... the... heck."

My reaction exactly (after I laughed my head off and stuff)! Jenette, you never cease to surprise me...

"Nobody has an idea."
"WHO'S NOBODY?!"
"... none of us."
"THEN WHO'S NOBODY?!"
"Don't even try, Amy. Don't even try."

I wont... bother... Flower xD so loveable, fluffy, and dumb- what's not to like? Oh yah- she talks WAY too much...

RevolutionMockingjay wrote:So sorry. I know I haven't been on in a long time... and I haven't posted... I've lost a lot of interest in Chickensmoothie. It doesn't help that my sister is on the computer nearly 24/7, so the only time I can really get on is when she's showering and in the morning. Another problem: this story has just sort of stopped. The haters are probably having a party right now, but I feel really upset. I don't want to loose all you guys; a lot of fans dropped out, I think, when I published the book. Then the haters came and made everything worse. Then I slowly just stopped writing this. It doesn't help that I've changed writing styles, now. I don't know how, but I just can't write funny anymore. I'm more of a tragedy/suspense writer now (it also doesn't help that I'm currently writing about 6 stories on top of this). That's why I need so many ideas. I'm really hoping that you guys can get me back on track. :) Even my brother has been asking me when I'm going to write a new entry, but I just don't know because my writing has changed drastically. I really, really want to continue this series, but I need you guys' help to get through it. Think you could help?
I really feel horrible for neglecting you guys. I've just lost a lot of interest in CS and my writing has changed and I've been really stressed lately, too. Luckily I'm on summer break now, and I got a bunch of books from the Library today, so I'm hoping I can just relax and read for once. I'll try getting on tomorrow (if I can). Again, I'm so sorry! I hope you guys can forgive me.
I have to go now. My sister's about out of the shower, and I don't want her yelling at me to get off. Thanks for reading this (long) message, and I hope you can forgive me. ~~RevJay


No, it's okay, I understand! A bit of advice: don't be me. Don't just drop something, like I do every time. Sure, it's tough, you just have to look for inspiriation and everything. I know what you mean about losing interest in CS; I haven't been on all month. And in future, I'll only come on to adopt or check up on TIAJNAD. Real life sucks sometimes, doesn't it?
As for your computer problem... is there maybe a public library or internet cafe near your house? I know that my local library has computers that you can spend up to an hour on. Maybe try that? Then there's also a tablet (such as iPad, kindle, ect...). I know not every family has these (let alone 4...) but if you do then you should be able to use that to get on CS.
Hope I helped, and I'm sure your inspiration will come back soon! If not, I'll try and see sosie sometime in half term, or PM her or something, and see if we can come up with any ideas to help.
See you sometime in the next month or so

-Invisi/Rebel

It's okay! :) lol, thank you! :) lol, I'm glad you find it funny. ;) Yes, Jenette is pretty surprising... And yeah, Flower does speak too much. Thank you for the advice! :) I'm going to try not to drop this, it's just so hard to write it anymore. And yes; real life does stink. I wish I could live in a book. Books are always so awesome. <3 And sadly, no. The Library is pretty far away. And I want a Tablet, but I don't have one. :( And thanks; I hope I get ideas soon! My brain just isn't working for this story. -.-

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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