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[The Royal Mirage]

Username
The Royal Mirage

Pony's name
Star Power

Pony's gender
Mare

Species
Pegasus

Reference picture, or link


Bright Futures

About Star:
Star Power is a pegasus assassin from Saddle Arabia with a calm and demure attitude. Like all ponies from Saddle Arabia, she doesn't have a cutie mark - rather, hers is drawn on with body chalk or hidden by outfits while she is on missions in Equestria where she must fit in as a regular pony. She's unattached to government agencies, a mercenary for hire, and has taken down her fair share of political figureheads.

Her talent is her silent, swift flight and her hoof-to-hoof combat skills, and is also adept at using ninja stars ('star' power)

Star isn't my ponysona, but she's the most fleshed out pony character I have so far that I don't have to change right now XP

[SeddieDeer]

I still *really* need help with this? ^^

I NEED HELP Vanilla Salt is going to look pretty much like this- (I'm allowed to edit her design!)

But- Without the splashes near the hooves-
Or with them? (But looking like she does in the one above?)

This is her back story for those who were not here last night:
Her story:
She lives with her eldest sister, who works at a cafe' to support them since their parents passed away. Her younger sister enjoys dressing up and is very intro drama ^^
Vanilla herself:
She is a tom-boy who since her parents have passed away, has become quite rebellious. She dyes her mane this colour (Thought it would explain it?). She skips classes, talks back and rebels. She hides all her feelings under this mask because its easier to deal with them this way. She argues constantly with her elder sister- but they still love one another very much, even if its not said THAT oftern.

[Fenric]

I think she should be without the splashes. She's an absolutely beautiful pony!

[The Royal Mirage]

I like the splashes on the hooves a lot, especially in the top picture - the wing and ear splashes I'm not so crazy about though

[sapiosexual]

i love the ones with the splashes, i think you should keep all of them on!

[SeddieDeer]

Well I have a secret about her...
She shall write in a "Journal" or notebook, like Buttercup does with her diary. (Or she will at least be one of the very main characters in it besides the writer him/herself)
Her parents used to run an ice-cream shop.
Vanilla Salt looks like the above.- The one you are stating your opinions on.

Her Elder sister looks like this!: And is called Neapolitan - (Needs a name to go with it xD)


And her younger sister is pink named Stawberry Shimmer. She loves dressing up and always asks her elder sisters to check for monsters Under her bed xD
They look like icecream- they were born into an icecream family.

The chocolate drips (Which would be Fur Markings) make her look more like the ice-cream family- But since this shall be a Doodle Diary series- I will be ordering a lot of people art, and some kind readers send me art for free of Buttercups Doodle Diary.- I imagine some might with my new doodle diary series also. I don't want to put any users at trouble then they are drawing art of her, commissioned or free D:

So It needs to represent her ice-cream family blood-
But yet be EASY To draw for random users.
Now you know this- what do you think of her design? ^^
What should be changed?

[~Tornado~]

My new oc Red velvet

She looks great!

Maybe Red Velvet and my Red Velvet could be friends? Be warned, though, he's really arrogant. cx

Sure! Also can we still post art? if so I made a drawing that different than my usual 15 min backgroundless stuff

[The Royal Mirage]

Well I have a secret about her...
She shall write in a "Journal" or notebook, like Buttercup does with her diary. (Or she will at least be one of the very main characters in it besides the writer him/herself)
Her parents used to run an ice-cream shop.
Vanilla Salt looks like the above.- The one you are stating your opinions on.

Her Elder sister looks like this!: And is called Neapolitan - (Needs a name to go with it xD)


And her younger sister is pink named Stawberry Shimmer. She loves dressing up and always asks her elder sisters to check for monsters Under her bed xD
They look like icecream- they were born into an icecream family.

The chocolate drips (Which would be Fur Markings) make her look more like the ice-cream family- But since this shall be a Doodle Diary series- I will be ordering a lot of people art, and some kind readers send me art for free of Buttercups Doodle Diary.- I imagine some might with my new doodle diary series also. I don't want to put any users at trouble then they are drawing art of her, commissioned or free D:

So It needs to represent her ice-cream family blood-
But yet be EASY To draw for random users.
Now you know this- what do you think of her design? ^^
What should be changed?

I think Neapolitan is a fine name on its own, Nea for short, though I guess Neapolitan Swirl/Scoop? Just going off ice cream here.
For Vanilla Salt, I would again keep the drips on her hooves, those aren't difficult to draw, but the ones on the wings and ears are a bit excessive.

[WitchSoul0123]

I'd keep the drips! Without them, she'd lose a lot of her character, and I'd not like to see that happen to erXD
They are easy enough to draw, and... Well, she's adorable the way she isXD

[The Royal Mirage]

Also, if anyone buys adoptables on DA, I have some old pony designs that I'm trying to sell - 6,7,8,9,11, and 12 are still available: