The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

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Re: The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sat May 04, 2013 3:58 am

♌ Nepeta Leijon ♌ wrote:Even thought it was short I still liked it! :DD

Night Emerald wrote:Awesome!

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Great entry JF! :D

Mento. wrote:Brilliant!! :D

Thanks you guys! :') It really means so much!! Though I feel really bad... see message below
whoa gal1 wrote:amy did't say le once!

lol, she didn't, did she?

I'm so sorry! I admit I've been neglecting writing this. I've been putting it off and I don't want to loose you guys! You're the only fans I have! I'm so sorry about not writing more! You see, I've started writing other stories on Facebook and now I'm writing 3 stories at a time. I thought I could handle them all, but I realize now that I can't. I'm privately co-writing a story with a friend, I'm righting a Hunger Games fanfiction on Facebook, and then I'm writing TIAJNAD. It also doesn't help that I can't go on chickensmoothie on my mom's computer, because it freezes it. So the only time I can really get on chickensmoothie is when my sister isn't on the computer we share... which she isn't now, hence why I'm on it. And now I can't write a new entry because I have to go in like 3 minutes for piano lessons. I'm sorry guys!

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby .Fish. » Sat May 04, 2013 7:04 am

Its ok JF I understand :33 I will wait for you to write more no matter B33 just take your time! :DD
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Re: The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Tue May 07, 2013 4:47 am

New entry, sorry it's taken so long!















We headed outside and met up with the others.
What took you so long?!
Sorry; wimpy here had a lot of questions.
I'M NOT WIMPY!
Potato, potato.
We're not talking about potatos!
DQ rolled her eyes and sighed.
Jenette, can you use your new angely powers to figure out what we're supposed to do next?
My powers can't tell the future, DQ.
Hey, did you all know that I never agreed to you all calling me DQ?
WE'RE GONNA CALL YOU WHATEVER WE LIKE!
DQ grabbed the bunny by the neck and lifted her up.
What'd you just say?
NOTHING! I SAID NOTHING!
DQ dropped the bunny to the ground.
Guys, can we please not start a fight?
I'm not a guy!
OR ARE YOU?!
... nope, pretty sure I'm not.
BUT YOU COULD BE!
But I'm not.
Guys, can you please just shut up?!
I'M NOT A GUY!
YOU COULD BE!
The ground suddenly lurched and I fell onto my face. I quickly looked around and saw that everybody except for Jenette was on the ground as well. Jenette held a staff in her hand, and it was sticking out of the ground.
Shut. Up.
I kept my mouth zipped.
We can't start arguing; remember that when we argue bad things happen? Somebody ends up almost bleeding to death, and I don't want any of you to be the one who does. Well, maybe DQ, but-
I'm right here, you know!
As I was saying, we can't argue. That would be bad.
Woah, woah, woah, we are not done with the whole me bleeding to death subject.
Pretty sure we are.
Haha, you're funny, Jenette. No way we're done.
DQ stood in front of Jenette, fist clenched. Jenette stood calmly there, fist not clenched.
Can we save it for the war, DQ?
DQ stood there a moment, fist still clenched, but then she slowly started to back away.
Now, does anybody know how we're supposed to train?
No.
Nope.
Not at all.
Not in the least.
I DIDN'T KNOW I WAS SUPPOSED TO TRAIN!
You don't have to train, Flower; just us.
WHY DO YOU ALL GET TO DO THE FUN STUFF?!
Flower plopped down on the floor and crossed her arms.
I can't deal with you right now, Flower. Just stay out of the way, please.
fine if you want to be that way I mean sure.
OH MY GOSH.
WHAT?!
FLOWER JUST WHISPERED FOR ONCE!
We all stared at Flower.
WHAT?!
Ignore the bunny. So what do we do to train?
How are we supposed to know?
Jenette walked over to the front of the cave and rammed her head against the hard rock multiple times. Flower leaned in to whisper to me.
Why is she hitting her head on a rock?
I think she's aggravated.
Or she's trying to get a concussion, in which I'll be happy help her.
I heard that, DQ!
That's why I said it out loud.
I can't believe I'm dealing with such idiots.
Did you hear that? She called us all idiots! Some angel she is.
Jenette stopped ramming her head against the rock and trudged over to DQ.
That's it! I've tried to be nice this whole time, I've tried to stay calm, but this is the last thread!
And then Jenette did something I thought she'd never do; she hugged DQ.
What.... the... heck.
DQ didn't hug back. She just sat there.
Jenette? What the heck are you doing?!
You've lost so much in your life and all you need is a little kindness, but that's hard to come by, isn't it? Everybody thinks you're this psychotic evil thing, but you're just misunderstood.
DQ pulled away from Jenette.
Since when did you become a psychiatrist?
I have no idea.
Even though DQ tried to hide it, I could still see that she was surprised by Jenette's act... and she even looked a little bit happy.
So, now that that's settled with, what do you nutjobs think we should do?
Nobody has an idea.
WHO'S NOBODY?!
... none of us.
THEN WHO'S NOBODY?!
Don't even try, Amy. Don't even try.
Then we all burst into laughter... even DQ. She looked happier than usual, like some sort of weight was lifted off her shoulders. Was it possible that DQ could be good?

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby .Fish. » Tue May 07, 2013 8:33 am

RevolutionMockingjay wrote:Nobody has an idea.
WHO'S NOBODY?!
... none of us.
THEN WHO'S NOBODY?!
Don't even try, Amy. Don't even try.

LOL!!! Psst! Flower I know who Nobody is! >>>You XDD JK maybe!<<<< pawsome entry!
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Re: The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby star star. » Tue May 07, 2013 3:07 pm

OHMYGOSH FLOWER ACTUALLY WHISPERED





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Re: The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby TPDebate » Tue May 07, 2013 5:35 pm

quick, somebody get a camera!
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Seven for the Dwarf-lords in their halls of stone,
Nine for Mortal Men doomed to die,
One for the Dark Lord on his dark throne
In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.
One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them,
One Ring to bring them all and in the darkness bind them
In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.


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Re: The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby Nonexsitent » Fri May 10, 2013 4:50 am

Haha, surprising that Flower whispered.
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Re: The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Wed May 15, 2013 5:04 am

♌ Nepeta Leijon ♌ wrote:
RevolutionMockingjay wrote:Nobody has an idea.
WHO'S NOBODY?!
... none of us.
THEN WHO'S NOBODY?!
Don't even try, Amy. Don't even try.

LOL!!! Psst! Flower I know who Nobody is! >>>You XDD JK maybe!<<<< pawsome entry!

lol, thanks! ^.^
Night Emerald wrote:
OHMYGOSH FLOWER ACTUALLY WHISPERED

Yes she did. Amazing, right?
whoa gal1 wrote:quick, somebody get a camera!

lol
Our Bleeding Shadow wrote:
Haha, surprising that Flower whispered.

'Tis.

So sorry for no new entry! I just have NO ideas for this story. My brain has died. Anybody got ideas for me, maybe? :)

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby .Fish. » Wed May 15, 2013 6:59 am

Its ok JF, I got no ideas though XDD
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Re: The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby daz » Thu May 16, 2013 12:31 pm

awesome!! Wait.... Flower whispering!!?? WUUTTT
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