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by MacGyver » Wed Apr 24, 2013 4:24 am
I've finished a rough draft of a short story I'm doing for school. An 800-1000 word limit. -.- Needless to say, I went a bit over. (About 40 words). But I wonder if you might look it over for me, once I finish some quick proofreading? :3 Be as harsh as you like! I had to really rein myself in and cut out more than I would've cared to because of the word limit, I'm afraid. XP
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by MacGyver » Thu Jun 27, 2013 2:28 pm
Thank you! I'll probably pm it to you later this afternoon.

Last bumped by Abissh on Thu Jun 27, 2013 2:28 pm.
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