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Is this a good idea?

Yes! I love it! Write it now!
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New Story Idea - Please post thoughts.

Postby Weeping_Angel }Y{ » Sat Apr 06, 2013 1:07 am

So, I have this idea to write a story about elemental mistresses. There are ten of them: Metal, Earth, Fire, Water, Air, Ice, Nature, Light, Darkness and Animals.

Each of them has different powers that help them keep their individual kingdoms alive. When evil threatens all the kingdoms, they have to find a way to work together to save each other.

There is conflict between the kingdoms. Each of them wants to do it their way and no one wants to compromise. But without each other, no kingdom will survive.

Please post thoughts and title ideas. Thanks.


To give you a better Idea of the conflict, here are some individual conflicts between the mistresses.
Key:
>< elements have countered effects on each other
> element effects element
< element reacts to element


Fire > Ice
Water > Fire
Nature < Animals
Light >< Darkness
Fire > Metal
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Re: New Story Idea - Please post thoughts.

Postby Weeping_Angel }Y{ » Thu Apr 11, 2013 10:53 am

anyone? I want to know if this is a good story before I pursue the idea and write about it.
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Re: New Story Idea - Please post thoughts.

Postby ~*Amber*~ » Thu Apr 11, 2013 11:19 am

Maybe you could make some get along more than others like water and fire dont but Nature and animals do :3
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Re: New Story Idea - Please post thoughts.

Postby Weeping_Angel }Y{ » Thu Apr 11, 2013 11:21 am

I was thinking that could be the cause of conflict. They can't work out their differences, so they put their own kingdoms in danger.
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Postby ~*Amber*~ » Thu Apr 11, 2013 11:35 am

Well its hard to resolve all of this is you dont know how they will come together
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Re: New Story Idea - Please post thoughts.

Postby Rhen » Thu Apr 11, 2013 11:50 am

I think it's a good idea.
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Re: New Story Idea - Please post thoughts.

Postby Weeping_Angel }Y{ » Thu Apr 11, 2013 11:55 am

~*Amber*~ wrote:Well its hard to resolve all of this is you dont know how they will come together


They each have apprentices that will try to get them to join forces. I don't want to say too much more on that though because I think it would spoil the story.

crimson_roses wrote:I think it's a good idea.


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Re: New Story Idea - Please post thoughts.

Postby Swiftcloud » Tue Apr 23, 2013 10:03 pm

It sounds like a good idea to me. c:
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Postby Weeping_Angel }Y{ » Thu Jun 20, 2013 5:15 am

bump. any ideas?
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Re: New Story Idea - Please post thoughts.

Postby Weeping_Angel }Y{ » Thu Jan 02, 2014 8:32 am

Anyone?
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