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by Rakkun » Thu Apr 04, 2013 12:57 am
Critiques are loved ^^'
This is
FlitterRayne's fursona Kailer.
FlitterRayne wrote:He's an alternate outcome of the Flitter Litter from July 2010.
You can see them here. He was one of the outcomes I drew when I kept suggesting the pair be made into 2nd Gens, and I grew rather fond of him.
here are some other images of Kailer:


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by Rakkun » Thu Apr 04, 2013 2:44 am
lol
He was supposed to look really sad,
but to me he looks like he has an adorable begging face <3
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by Rakkun » Thu Apr 04, 2013 6:20 pm
Crocigator wrote:So cute! Wonderful job!
Thank you <3
It took quite a bit of time ^^'
FlitterRayne wrote:Awww! Rakkun, you did an awesome job! Thank you so much! *squisshle-hugs* <3
Thank you <3
He just looks soooo super cute ^^
werefox wrote:aww so cute ^^
Thanks!

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by santinel » Fri Apr 05, 2013 1:09 am
So if I was gonna critique on this, I'd say that that back leg is a bit too tall. Also, wolves have four toes, but I understand if you drew just three on purpose c:
It really looks awesome though!
And omg will you please share your lining settings?? I can't for the life of me line in the oekaki.
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by Rakkun » Fri Apr 05, 2013 10:41 am
santinel wrote:So if I was gonna critique on this, I'd say that that back leg is a bit too tall. Also, wolves have four toes, but I understand if you drew just three on purpose c:
It really looks awesome though!
And omg will you please share your lining settings?? I can't for the life of me line in the oekaki.
Thank You Very Much for the Critique
I was having a very hard time trying to get the back leg to look good u.u
I tried to lower it because I know that it was way off, but when I did It made
him look very tubby >.<
As for the missing toe, I tend not to add them in my chibi stuff.
Just something got used to doing ^^'
As for my lines settings :3
I like to use:
Pencil 2 (Round Hard Edge)
Pencil 3 (For the Eyes )
Pencil 2 Opacity 66% for the small lighter line on the eyes
* Because I am a mouse artist I have to go back over my lines with an eraser
to get the "pen pressure" look to my lines - I use Eraser 3 (Round Hard Edge) for
all of those line edits.
P.S.- I stalked your gallery and your lines are beautiful <3
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