My fanfiction about hetalia

[Arachnomania]

This is a fan fiction I decided to write about the anime show hetalia axis powers. It involves my friends and I. I will post one paragraph at a time. If you want to say anything about my story PM me, Don't post it. I'd love to hear what you think of it.

[Arachnomania]

Poland and I share the same birthday, we're twins and I'm the older one. Yet Poland gets the country name and he ages three times as fast as a normal human. We'll both stop aging when we're 20ish, it varies, but still he gets everything when he's younger! Anyway, this is about when I messed up big-time, I was ten at the time.

[Arachnomania]

``Who's that Chestnut?`` I asked the best horse Poland and I have or ever will have. Then I told Chestnut to go over to the mystery person. It was a girl about my age. She had short, curly brown hair.
``Hello, what's your name?`` I asked the girl.
``Indiana, what's yours?`` she replied.
``My name's Ella or Poland. Call me Ella around my brother.``
``Okay``
``Would you like to ride a horse?``
``Sure.``

[Arachnomania]

I told Indiana to go in the cart Chestnut was pulling. When we got to the stables I told Indiana to pick any horse or pony. Indiana chose a beautiful white stallion named Olympian. After we put the saddle and bridle on our horses we set out. After an hour or so we got hungry, so we stopped and had a picnic, then we set out again.