Unchangeable Actions - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series

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Who's your favorite?

Amy
7
22%
Jenette
5
16%
Suzi
2
6%
Gish
3
9%
DQ
5
16%
Ginger
0
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Rhubarb
7
22%
Misty
1
3%
Jessy
2
6%
Brent
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Unchangeable Actions - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Mon Mar 18, 2013 6:15 am

Hello! I have decided to start writing the seventh book of TIAJNAD! If you haven't read any of the other books in the TIAJNAD series, here's the links to them:
First Series:
1st Book: TIAJNAD
2nd Book: Sneaky Times In This Journal
3rd Book: Do Not Read Any Further
4th Book: The Big City And Bob!
5th Book: No Place To Run
6th Book: At Death's Door
7th Book: Life Or Death
8th Book: 'Til The Last Breath
9th Book: Running Out Of Time
10th Book (Finale): War With The World
Back Stories:
~~Jenette: The Call Of The Angels
~-Suzi: Broken
Second series:
1st Book: After Saving The World
2nd Book: Escape From Time
3rd Book: The Banishment Land
4th Book: End Of The Road
5th Book: Ones We Forget
6th Book: Ever Second Counts















What do you MEAN you lost it?!
I mean that it somehow disappeared from my sight!
Amy! That was important! How could you lose it?!
I didn't lose it! it just disappeared!
Right. Uh-huh, sure.
I mean it! It just disappeared!
Well, thanks to you, now so will we.
I didn't think a doughnut was that big of a deal!
Jenette looked at me with a weird expression on her face.
A.... doughnut? We were talking about a DOUGHNUT this whole time?!
Yeeaaah..... weren't we?
I thought we were talking about the second time machine!
Oh, that? I got it right here!
I pulled out the small time machine. Jenette stared at it and then at me.
This whole time that we've been arguing you had it?!
Wait, so you thought we were arguing about the time machine? I was arguing about the doughnut that disappeared.
Why would we be talking about a doughnut when our future is in jeopardy?
I shrugged.
I dunno. I was eating a doughnut and it just disappeared. Maybe I ate it without even knowing...
Amy?
I guess I could have inhaled it really fast without even knowing...
AMY!
Yeah?
We need to get back to saving our future.
Why do we always need to save everything? I'm getting tired of saving people.
Yeah, but this time you'll be saving yourself and your friends (and family).
Meh. That's a little bit better.
Jenette looked down at the time machine in her hands.
Now, how do you work this time machine?
I dunno.
Jenette looked up at me.
What do you mean you don't know how to work it? It's yours!
Hey, I got it for Christmas from Brent and nobody knew how to work it. I was going to return it when... ya know.... all that stuff with Suzi being evil and you not happened.
Right. Well, I guess we'll just have to figure out how to work it.
I laughed.
What?
You sound like we're going to work out. WORK IT,WORK IT!
Jenette stared at me. I smiled.
Okaay, ignoring that, let's get to work on this thing.
So we spent hour upon hour fiddling with the stinkin' thing. And as for DQ and Pete, they were talking in the corner. Privately. Whispering.
Jenette? What're they talking about?
Jenette looked up from the time machine and stared at DQ and Pete.
I don't know. I don't have super-hearing, Amy.
Oh. Right. Well can't you just go into their head like when you go into mine and see what they're thinking about?
Jenette looked down at the time machine again.
I'm afraid that only works with you, Amy. I was assigned your Guardian Angel when you were little, so you're the only one I can talk to through thoughts.
Oh.
And then I saw something I thought I'd never see: DQ laughing. She laughed and laughed, and Brent smiled along with her. Even Jenette looked up from working on the time machine when she heard that.
It sounds so... weird.
What?
DQ laughing. I don't think I've ever seen her laugh.
DQ looked over at us and stopped laughing.
What? What's wrong with us?
Let's just get back to the time machine, Amy. Ignore them.
But what's wrong? What'd I do?
I'll explain later. Come on, let's figure this thing out. The more time we spend not working on it the more time Clyff has to change our fate.
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"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Unchangeable Actions - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Ser

Postby Rebel Faery » Mon Mar 18, 2013 6:32 am

First post, oh yah!

And awesome first entry! I love it!
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let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
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Re: Unchangeable Actions - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Ser

Postby star star. » Mon Mar 18, 2013 7:31 am

Awesome!!
Waaiitt... DQ laughing...
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Re: Unchangeable Actions - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Ser

Postby .Fish. » Mon Mar 18, 2013 7:33 am

Third post YAY
Awesome, OH MY JEGUS DQ IS LAUGHING SOMETHING IS WRONG I CAN FEEL IT I CAN FEEL IT
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Re: Unchangeable Actions - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Ser

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Mon Mar 18, 2013 11:46 am

.:Invisi:. wrote:First post, oh yah!

And awesome first entry! I love it!

Thanks, Rebel! :)
/epic.fail/ wrote:Awesome!!
Waaiitt... DQ laughing...
Iznowdcared

lol
Rockfire wrote:Third post YAY
Awesome, OH MY JEGUS DQ IS LAUGHING SOMETHING IS WRONG I CAN FEEL IT I CAN FEEL IT

lol

Since this week is Spring Break for me, I'm gonna try and write an entry everyday. Now, I might forget some days, so sorry if I don't. But I'm gonna try to do so everyday (though I MIGHT not be able to do it tomorrow because my dad might make me weed outside [get rid of the weeds])...

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Unchangeable Actions - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Ser

Postby .Fish. » Mon Mar 18, 2013 12:02 pm

Awesome JF can't wait ::::D
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Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Mon Mar 18, 2013 2:32 pm

Did another join.me. Rockfire asked...
Q. Was DQ drunk when she was laughing?
A. Odd question... you will have to wait and see, Stalkerwan. ;)

Q. Do you ever think about making the characters suffer but then decide against it?
A. I think about making something bad happen to them, such as a dilemma or making one of their friends/lovers die, and I sometimes talk myself out of it but usually not.

Q. Will anyone die by murder?
A. Well, Jessy has already died by murder. I don't know quite yet if anybody else will, but they might.

Q. Will Jenette come back to life?
A. That will remain unknown until the end of the series, I'm afraid.

Q. Has Jenette ever kissed someone besides Rhubarb/Clyff and liked it?
A. Not yet. Her first true love is Clyff, though she might love someone else in the end.

Q. Do you have any favorite pairings with your characters?
A. I think I'd have to say I like JenetteXClyff the most. Their love started from the very beginning, before Amy had to save the world. They were inseparable, and then Clyff/Rhubarb lied and their love shattered. Very tragic, if you ask me (then again, I wrote it, so just ignore me :p).

Q. Will the spider be killed very brutally and not shown any mercy what soever?
A. You will have to wait and see for that too, I'm afraid.

Q. Will Amy ever have a normal life after saving the world a lot?
A. "Normal" has so many different definitions. Normal to one person may not be normal to another. You will have to wait and see, then judge for yourself weather or not her life is normal.

Q. Will Amy ever die a regular death or will the spider keep killing her?
A. You will have to wait and see if Amy dies or not, I'm afraid.

Q. Does Ariadne ever stop going into other people's bodies?
A. She just died in the sixth book, and she has finally returned to her family in Heaven.

Q. Do you ever read something and come up with an idea from there?
A. Usually I make up the ideas on my own, but I guess sometimes I might do it self-consciously. I don't think I have, though... you'll have to tell me if it seems like that. :)

Q. Do you ever feel like making everyone die and then bring them all back to life somehow?
A. Haha, yes. You've seen me do that with Jenette a ton of times. I just love her so much that I can't let her go! I based her and Amy sort of after me, so it's hard killing myself. :p You see, I'm really crazy at times (like Amy), and I will do anything for my family (like Jenette).

Q. Do you ever do stuff with your hands (besides typing) when you're writing new entries?
A. Hmm... well, my hands get really cold when I'm on the computer (really, which is odd because I'm always hot [seriously, I wear tank-tops in the winter]). Once I actually spoke out loud without even knowing it while I was writing the entry. Like, I suddenly said hi and my sister was like "What?" and I was like "What?' and she was like "you just said hi" and I was like "I DID?!" and she was like "Yes" and I was like "...nuts."

Q. Do you ever write down your ideas or do you try to remember them?
A. I usually just wing an entry, so I frequently don't have any idea at all. :p But once (for the first series) I wrote down a bunch of stuff to add into the ending of TIAJNAD (the first series, anyway). I really didn't need it, though. I remember it all (my teachers say I have a good memory, but just when it comes to stuff I like [I fail at History and Science since I can't remember anything in that 'cause it doesn't interest me]).

Q. Do you ever wonder what the characters taste like?
A. ... uh.... no. XD

Q. Do you ever just want to have a contest to see who can murder the most haters?
A. Um... I don't think I'd want to MURDER them, though they do aggravate me a lot.

Q. Do you ever have help with entry writing?
A. Nope, I write them all on my own (though I sometimes get suggestions from other users).

Q. Are you stressed out about writing ever?
A. Sometimes it's a bit exhausting when everybody's all like "MORE WRITE MORE!" and I'm so busy in life. I know it aggravates you stalkerwans when I say I'm "too busy", but life gets in the way a lot (especially when it decides to give you extra homework).

WhoaGal1 asked...

Q. How did you get the idea for TIAJNAD?
A. Well, first off I loved writing. I'd been writing since I was 9 years old. I saw other people posting CS Diaries/Journals and decided to try one of my own. I saw that a few people liked it and decided to continue writing it. :)

Q. Are you going to write any more back stories?
A. Yes, I was thinking about doing one on Agent Cornelia, Rhubarb, and Linda/Aurauria when I was writing the first series, and now I'm thinking about writing one on Ariadne, too (since there's a lot of unanswered questions about her).

Q. How long has it been since you first started writing TIAJNAD?
A. Almost 2 years. :)

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Unchangeable Actions - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Ser

Postby .Fish. » Mon Mar 18, 2013 10:51 pm

╬JesusFreak╬ wrote:Rockfire asked...
Q. Do you ever wonder what the characters taste like?
A. ... uh.... no. XD

WhoaGal1 asked...

Q. How long has it been since you first started writing TIAJNAD?
A. Almost 2 years. :)

I can't belive I ask that question but I wonder what Amy tastes like........
JEGUS thats a long time JF ;;;;)
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Re: Unchangeable Actions - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Ser

Postby Rebel Faery » Tue Mar 19, 2013 5:03 am

Rocky, your second and third question were a bit morbid, weren't they?... lol

You know what we should have? A TIAJNAD Wiki. That would be awesome. :D
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let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
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Re: Unchangeable Actions - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Ser

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Tue Mar 19, 2013 6:05 am

Rockfire wrote:I can't belive I ask that question but I wonder what Amy tastes like........
JEGUS thats a long time JF ;;;;)

lol, and yes it has been quite some time. :)
.:Invisi:. wrote:Rocky, your second and third question were a bit morbid, weren't they?... lol

You know what we should have? A TIAJNAD Wiki. That would be awesome. :D

lol
And if you guys want to you can make one. I don't know how, but if you do you've got my permission.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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