The Critique Cafe- Need Active Critics!

[Rabbitheart]

I would like some critique on my story please!
Username: Rabbitheart
Link to what needs critiquing: The Story of Us
What is it: (Short story, novel, one shot, "diary", poem, genre, etc) I believe it's going to end up being a Novella I think, it's sort of a teen romance (clean romance, so basically just signs of affection such as kissing, hugging, cuddling, holding hands, etc.). I have a basic idea where I want the story to go, but so far I'm only on the first chapter.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Hmm...I don't mind getting it here, but I think I'd probably prefer it if I can get it via PM.

[Jericho]

Note to everyone: I got very sick recently and was unable to do the critiquing I wanted to do. I will be unable to critique till Saturday next week.
I did get around to critiquing that photo though.

- Fox -

[mrose]

I would like some critique on my form please!
Username:
Mrose123
Link to your form:
viewtopic.php?f=53&t=1604516&start=20#p48556145
Adoption Agency you are applying for:
Jellybean dragon adopts
Deadline for your form:
The contest ends January 9th, so I'd like critique sometime before then.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM?
PM would be great. c:

I hope I filled this out correctly. ouo

[slurm]

I would like some critique on my form please!
Username:
Gerbilfuzz
Link to your form:
viewtopic.php?f=53&t=1650604&hilit=whiskers&start=80#p50382127
Adoption Agency you are applying for:
Jellbean Dragon Adopt V.2
Deadline for your form: (Please give us a date as well as the actual day it's due)
2•20•13
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM?
PM so I don't have to dig through pages. Unless this isn't that active I am just assuming it is very active.

[DoctorWhoCrazy]

I would be willing to help out by giving critique. I am active, and an experienced writer!

[Jericho]

I would be willing to help out by giving critique. I am active, and an experienced writer!

Feel free at anytime to give a critique, be sure to follow the guild lines on the front page though.
If you would be interested in becoming a Critic it is based on showing your work and then the owner (applefiend) will accept or wait for further improvement/examples. Basically just show your work. XD Hope this helps!

[CaptiveLegacy]

I would like some critique on my story please!
Username:
carrie911
Link to what needs critiquing:
viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1527812&p=45982841&hilit
What is it:
Novel
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM?
Either way is fine with me c:

[.The Bootless Box.]

I would like some critique on my form please!
Username:
{Internal Blackout}
Link to your form:
It's not totally finished (Look at second part on Pirate please)
Adoption Agency you are applying for:
SLAP
Deadline for your form:
The code drop is unknown
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM?
PM please

[Jericho]

I would like some critique on my form please!
Username:
{Internal Blackout}
Link to your form:
It's not totally finished (Look at second part on Pirate please)
Adoption Agency you are applying for:
SLAP
Deadline for your form:
The code drop is unknown
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM?
PM please

I have sent you a critique through pm.

[Lizbutt]

I would like some critique on my Logo Design please!
Username: Carry
Link to what needs critiquing: link here
What is it: Logo for Pitt Bull Bakery
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM is best.

Thank You in advanced.