The Advanced Writer's Club

[Weeping_Angel }Y{]

Username:DolphinGirl4Ever
Writing Preferences (Poet, Novelist, roleplayer...):I prefer to write fiction, not really novels but fictional pieces varying from children's stories to Sci/Fi and Scary stories
Example (Can be anything; must be a good length):Can You Reason With Treason (scary story, will have a sequel eventually), Earth's Redemption (unfinished Sci/Fi piece)
Links to stories / roleplays: viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1684243 -(Earth's Redemption)
viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1684537 -(Can You Reason With Treason)
Other: hate writing mysteries, but love reading them. I am always accepting of respectful feedback, and try to be respectful if asked to provide feedback.

[Make_a__Scene]

Does anyone know Russian? There's one phrase in my short story that needs to be in Russian, and I don't trust internet research. I think it's rudimentary, so you don't have to be completely fluent, but then again I'm not too sure. I'd really appreciate it if someone could PM me if they have any resources available.

[breath.]

Sorry I don't know anything.............

[breath.]

Fly Away

One day I will leave,
Like a feather in the breeze,
You can't expect me to always stay,
I will spread my wings,
And
Fly Away......

By Fly


Tell Me

I want you to let me borrow your sweatshirt at night,
Hold me and say,It's going to be alright,
Tell me I look Beautiful,
On the worst bad hair days,
And tell me that you love me,
In 1000 different ways...

By Fly

[Make_a__Scene]

Sorry I don't know anything.............

Please don't double post. And comments like these are counted as spam; if you don't know anything, just don't respond.

[Rolly-chan]

Does anyone know Russian? There's one phrase in my short story that needs to be in Russian, and I don't trust internet research. I think it's rudimentary, so you don't have to be completely fluent, but then again I'm not too sure. I'd really appreciate it if someone could PM me if they have any resources available.

I'm half Russian and I can speak and write it :3 (and if anything, I can always ask my parents, they speak Russian fluently and know their vocabulary).

[Make_a__Scene]

Rolly, my dear, you get better every day. -^^-
I have a character whose parents are Russian, but he doesn't really speak any Russian. The only thing he does know how to say is 'I love you'. But before I just jump into the online translators, I was wondering if there were any different phrases for 'I love you' that would have slightly different definitions of the word 'love'. Passionate versus affectionate friendship. Like the difference between agape, eros, philia, and storge.

[crescent + cheep]

Rolly, my dear, you get better every day. -^^-
I have a character whose parents are Russian, but he doesn't really speak any Russian. The only thing he does know how to say is 'I love you'. But before I just jump into the online translators, I was wondering if there were any different phrases for 'I love you' that would have slightly different definitions of the word 'love'. Passionate versus affectionate friendship. Like the difference between agape, eros, philia, and storge.

learning russian is on my to-do list.
but it's a probably never going to happen thing :(
what is eros, philia and storge?
//feel dumb.

why do you all have so interesting conversations?
^^

//don't mind me my nerves are overstretched.

[Make_a__Scene]

Agape, eros, philia and storge are Greek words that basically translate into words for 'love' in English.
Agape is general affection, or "true love" in the sense of complete devotion, not necessarily passionate.
Eros is the passionate love. Sensual desire, longing.
Philia is affectionate regard, friendship, dispassionate love.
Storge is the kind of love you share with your family.

[crescent + cheep]

Thank you, 1000 (: