Phoenix Adopt #2 by |~Nevermore~|

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Phoenix Adopt #2

Postby |~Nevermore~| » Wed Feb 13, 2013 1:06 pm

I spent a lot of time on this one and changed my mind many times while making the design. I must say I am quite fond of it and am not letting her go easily (; If you want a shot at her, completely fill out this form:

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[color=#800040][b]Name:[/b][/color]
[color=#800040][b]Gender:[/b][/color]
[color=#800040][b]Intended Use:[/b][/color]
[color=#800040][b]Poem*:[/b][/color]
[color=#800040][b]Story*:[/b][/color]
[color=#800040][b]Personality*:[/b][/color]
[color=#800040][b]Art(Optional):[/b][/color]
[color=#800040][b]Your Favourite Colour in her Scheme:[/b][/color]


*Starred areas may be any length you want, ranging from one sentence to many paragraphs.
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Re: Phoenix Adopt #2

Postby Hemalily » Wed Feb 13, 2013 1:50 pm

Name: Crimson Angel
Gender: Female
Intended Use: Stories, poems, RPs, traditional art, the works!
Poem*:

The crimson angel
Floats by
On delicate, fluttery
Wings
Spreading hope
And peace
Every where she goes

Story*:
Angel floated on a warm breeze, gazing around at the forested land. She thought back to her earlier days, when she was younger.

42 Years earlier
Angel twirled in the bright blue sky, showing off her plumage. She was very proud of it and a bit vain. She laughed at the other duller Phoenixs. She knew she was better than them, and her coloring only proved it. She was the best, prettiest, fanciest, and cutest Phoenix in the world. She showed her colors off a bit more, and then landed delicately on the ground. Several other birds came up to her and complimented her. She just smiled condescendingly at them. After they left she settled down and began preening. She carefully cleaned each feather until they gleamed. She smiled, confident of her appearance. A small brown Phoenix came up to her, blushing. "What do you want?" Angel asked accusingly. The small bird shied away and replied "Nothing, I'm sorry" Angel huffed and turned her back to the now lonesome Phoenix.

Flash forward 22 years and Angel was stuck, in a trap. She didn't know how she got there, but she did know that she was in trouble. She desperately searched for a way out, but found none. Bowing her head, she cried. A sound came from behind her and she tensed, thinking a human. She turned to her death and then blinked. The noise came from a large, brown bird with sparkling wings. Angel sighed, relieved. "Will you get me out of her?" She asked the bird. The impressive Phoenix just nodded it's head and snipped the rope with it's beak. "Thank you" Angel said gratefully. She turned to leave, but paused as the other Phoenix whispered "You are better than what you have become" and then flew away. Angel, gasped with the realization. She was truly horrible. She could be better. She firmly resolved from that day forward that she would be kind to everyone, no matter what.
Present time
Angel smiled at the coming rays of the morning, warming all they touched. She too, hoped to do the same one day.

Personality*: Angel is a generous and wise Phoenix. She used to be selfish and self absorbed, but several events in her life have changed that. She loves to help everyone and is a all around good person. She is very caring and nurturing. She does have a few flashbacks to her original snottiness, but she quickly recovers and apologizes.
Art(Optional): Maybe, but it will be traditional.....
Your Favourite Colour in her Scheme: Most definitely the red, it just makes her pop and be unique.

I will provably edit this more, maybe add more to personality and art. Thank you for adopting her out! She is amazing!
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Re: Phoenix Adopt #2

Postby |~Nevermore~| » Sat Feb 16, 2013 3:43 am

Very lovely form so far. Thank you~
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Re: Phoenix Adopt #2

Postby Vermilion Ink » Thu Feb 28, 2013 9:47 am

Name:Glory
Gender:Female
Intended Use:For rpg/s, story.
Poem*:WIP(you should know that i am terrible at poem writing :D but i will give it a try!)
Story*:
Personality*:
Art(Optional):
Your Favourite Colour in her Scheme:

(I'm sorry the thing is one big work in progress at the moment)
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Re: Phoenix Adopt #2

Postby PPr:Kut » Thu Feb 28, 2013 10:34 am

WIP!!

Name:


Tianxiong


(Pronounced as : Tie-an-She-Yon)


(A lot of people get his name wrong, so he simply goes by Xion most of the time)


Gender:


Male


Intended Use:


Roleplaying and stories. I wanna be better at art to draw him though.


Poem*:




Story*:


Once upon a time, there lived a happy little family of Phoenix chicks. Many of them looked the same, it even confused their bold and powerful mother sometimes. She happily fed them, their nest of hardened ashes right over top a volcano. Throughout the times, she would teach them how to fly, hunt, pinpoint locations, and ways of how to attract the opposite gender when the times were right. It was a happy and most enjoyable time to be one of these chicks. And it was never truly sad when a sibling died. Rising from the ashes was indeed very common among the Phoenix race. So long as they were returned to a nest with heat involved.

However, things get sad when you simply vanish. That's what happened to our mother. We were always told to keep shelter during rain storms, and she would find food for us if the storm would endanger us. We learned the hard way that a Phoenix could not come back if they drowned or stayed too long in the rain. But as time went on, we knew we would all fade away like mother if we stayed at the nest. Plus, we were growing just a little too big for the nest. so we flew off into a flock, but eventually, I left my family, for I knew that times would evolve into lack of family anyways. We promised that each year, on our birthday, we would flock together to our old home and celebrate the day together. Nothing has stopped us so far.

I would come to grips with a darker sadness when I realized that not all creatures rose from the ashes, again, the harder way. This may seem like a strange story, but I once fell in love, but not with another Phoenix. No no, instead, I feel for a large swan. She was beautiful, even though we were taught to eat smaller birds. At first, I did want to eat her, but my hard resisted, and I wished to be with her. She understood my being of existence, and even though we couldn't mate, we were in love. However, the love would soon end, as soon as she passed away, unable to be "immortal" like I was. Now I learned the reason why Phoenixes could only be with each other.

For now, I travel the skies, with a duty set in mind. My love, the swan named Sandra, said i would make a perfect father, and a perfect guardian because of my undying bravery. And that's what I would do. I would find somewhere, where I could be accepted, so that I could show them all that I'm willing to make others happy at the cost of my own. I would be, the planet's Guardian Angel.


Personality*:


One could say that from his majestic appearance, he would be one of the heroic, yet distant and complicated anti-heroes. In reality, Xion is in-fact a bit of a know-it-all, and there are times where he can be a real dirt-bag. But that's because he's had a bit of a rough past. The truth behind it all can be seen in Xion's bravery. Xion i fearless, and is willing to die to protect the innocent at any cost. He himself once said that we would tear off his own wings if it were for the sake of the lives of the innocent. Behind his need to be a know it all, Xion cares for people, nature, and mythical creatures alike, and is more than willing to put his needs behind all of theirs. He is rather kind and comforting to children and the elderly, and he knows how to be respectful. He is also an art critic, having a deep passion for artwork.


Your Favourite Colour in his Scheme:


The transcending colour of blue to violet within his tail feathers. Right in between the differing colours is a very dark indigo like colour, which appeals to me the most out of the colours,a nd is part of the reason why I wanted him to begin with.
"He was a true warrior. Born with a strength and clout that would make most Saiyan fathers proud. But there was something far darker about him. Violent, threatening..."
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