{ INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

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What grabs your attention on a book cover?

I usually look for people on book covers - I like the personal note of them.
33
8%
I like simple covers, with colors or an easy background.
50
12%
I love book covers that have one object on them.
32
8%
I could really care less.
13
3%
Something different - out of the ordinary.
137
34%
I love books that look shiny!
24
6%
So long as the inside description is good, I really couldn't care about the cover.
104
26%
#Idkwhatsgoingonhere
14
3%
 
Total votes : 407

Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby nutella ♥ » Wed Feb 27, 2013 11:21 am

Welcome to Inklings, skitz. ^^

On a completely unrelated note, I am still looking for someone to give me an honest opinion on the prologue to my Warriors fanfic, which I am hoping to get up on CS eventually. [ yes, I know, another fanfic, but I swear it'll be good. .3. ] anywho, if anyone is interested just shoot me a PM and I'll send over the first 'lil bit. C:
thanks, ~flower.
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby NE0N-UMBR30N » Wed Feb 27, 2013 11:26 am

i n s a n e wrote:
i n s a n e wrote:So guys


I wrote a new story




Swaying Song Pack

"Daddy's Little Girl"
Part Three


"Explinations"

-Everyone was rushing around the clearing,panic clear on their faces. Snow looked over to see her grandpa's face distrought with pain,Tambra trying to comfort him.Sparks was following behind Star,both carrying more herbs as they raced towards the medicence den.Ocean,Derek,and Estella stood beside Ashalia,her mother,trying to comfort her.It was then,when Snow saw her mother,saw her sobbing into Dereks fur,Snow knew what had happened.

"NO!"A sense of dread swept over her then,eyes widening sadly,and fearfully.She couldn't bring herself to comprehend any of it.Star had said he had more time,she'd said he was better.This wasn't supposed to happen!Running frantically through the crowd,Snow made it to Star's den,shoving past everyone and skidding to a stop in the den.

She stood there,unable to move,shaking when she saw her father's lifeless form laying on the ground.Sparks glanced at her sister for a second,her eyes sympathic,before leaving the den to give Snow some time.Snow finally edged forward,closer to Iggy.She vertured out a paw,and prodded his shoulder lightly.When she got no response,her ears pulled back,and she dropped to the ground,tearing up,slowly breaking down.

"Papa I'm sorry!"She pleaded,thinking maybe if she did,just maybe he would come back."Just please come back,you have to!You can't leave!"She broke off then,loud sobs echoing from the den then.She started to hiccup lightly.-


"Snowbell!"A sharp voice jarred Snow awake from the the terrifying dream,the white wolf bolting upwards as she shook her head."Ah,what what?!"She called frantically,blinking the sleep out of her eyes as she looked towards whom had awoken her.


"Oh Uncle Xavier."She said,earning a grin from the normal rude wolf." 'Ey kiddo."He said,and tilted his head,looking at her with concerned eyes."Ya look terri kid."He murmured softly,flicking his ears for a second."Tell me ya got some sleep Snowball."His nickname for her was one that had settled early on,and only he got away with it.Along with the few small exeptions of Kodi.Snow rolled her eyes,mock glaring at him.

"What is it?"She asked,standing up and streching.Xaiver gave her an amused smile."Ah nothin',yer dad just asked to see ya."Snow's eyes brightened up immediatly,a grin gracing her lips."Really?He's still okay?!"She asked in a hurried,happy voice.Xaiver chuckled at his great nieces reaction."Yea I'z guess he's 'bout rite as rain."His accent was an unusual one,but then again not many wolves had an accent." 'T leas' he was when I'z checked on 'em."Snow wagged her tail at hyper-speed.Not waiting for another word from him,she darted out of the den past him,piledriving towards Star's den in which her sick father was residing,leaving her uncle with a loud,"Thanks uncle Xavi!" before she left the den.

She padded quickly to Star's den;she was the healer of the pack. Her father was staying there for her to keep an eye on him due to a breathing sickness he had caught only who knows when.Snow's ears folded back,her eyes slightly wide."Dad?"She called softly before peeking in the den. Upon hearing a raspy,"Come in",Snow ducked throw the briars and walked slowly into the den. Snow bit back tears when she saw her father,sprawled out on the den floor. She could see his ribs;the disease had also made him like this. He hardly ate anymore,and when he did,it never made a difference.

"Hey Snow."Iggy mummbled weakly,raising his head slowly to look at his daughter.
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby breath. » Wed Feb 27, 2013 7:52 pm

Good Job Rose!!!
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby breath. » Wed Feb 27, 2013 7:55 pm

Fly Away

One day I will leave,
Like a feather in the breeze,
You can't expect me to always stay,
I will spread my wings,
And
Fly Away......
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby OrangeNeon » Thu Feb 28, 2013 12:34 am

Good job Rose!
Looking for all 2010 staff litter dogs. Will possibly overpay.
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby rothbart. » Thu Feb 28, 2013 2:26 am

OakStar47 wrote:Guh...

I'm too lazy to be starting another comic. Why am I doing this? Oh yeah, because it needs doing.

So. Anybody willing to help me name this (or possibly even co-write bits and pieces of you're a real sweeie; I'd love you forever and ever and ever) is definitely welcome, as I am one of the worst people at naming stories ever.

The comic's going to be sort of a slice of life deal revolving around Miles Salander, a pansexual, female born agender high school student and their group of very diverse friends. Contact me if you've got any ideas!
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby Rolly-chan » Thu Feb 28, 2013 5:14 am

ʀose ; wrote:
      Guys. Guys. GUISE.
      An agency requested my entire manuscript after I sent them a query letter! =D
      asdfgkjl; so excited right now. ~

Yay, that's great :D I'll be keeping my fingers crossed for you!
But your foot is in their door already, so... +_+
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby NE0N-UMBR30N » Thu Feb 28, 2013 5:24 am

i n s a n e wrote:
i n s a n e wrote:So guys


I wrote a new story




Swaying Song Pack

"Daddy's Little Girl"
Part Three


"Explinations"

-Everyone was rushing around the clearing,panic clear on their faces. Snow looked over to see her grandpa's face distrought with pain,Tambra trying to comfort him.Sparks was following behind Star,both carrying more herbs as they raced towards the medicence den.Ocean,Derek,and Estella stood beside Ashalia,her mother,trying to comfort her.It was then,when Snow saw her mother,saw her sobbing into Dereks fur,Snow knew what had happened.

"NO!"A sense of dread swept over her then,eyes widening sadly,and fearfully.She couldn't bring herself to comprehend any of it.Star had said he had more time,she'd said he was better.This wasn't supposed to happen!Running frantically through the crowd,Snow made it to Star's den,shoving past everyone and skidding to a stop in the den.

She stood there,unable to move,shaking when she saw her father's lifeless form laying on the ground.Sparks glanced at her sister for a second,her eyes sympathic,before leaving the den to give Snow some time.Snow finally edged forward,closer to Iggy.She vertured out a paw,and prodded his shoulder lightly.When she got no response,her ears pulled back,and she dropped to the ground,tearing up,slowly breaking down.

"Papa I'm sorry!"She pleaded,thinking maybe if she did,just maybe he would come back."Just please come back,you have to!You can't leave!"She broke off then,loud sobs echoing from the den then.She started to hiccup lightly.-


"Snowbell!"A sharp voice jarred Snow awake from the the terrifying dream,the white wolf bolting upwards as she shook her head."Ah,what what?!"She called frantically,blinking the sleep out of her eyes as she looked towards whom had awoken her.


"Oh Uncle Xavier."She said,earning a grin from the normal rude wolf." 'Ey kiddo."He said,and tilted his head,looking at her with concerned eyes."Ya look terri kid."He murmured softly,flicking his ears for a second."Tell me ya got some sleep Snowball."His nickname for her was one that had settled early on,and only he got away with it.Along with the few small exeptions of Kodi.Snow rolled her eyes,mock glaring at him.

"What is it?"She asked,standing up and streching.Xaiver gave her an amused smile."Ah nothin',yer dad just asked to see ya."Snow's eyes brightened up immediatly,a grin gracing her lips."Really?He's still okay?!"She asked in a hurried,happy voice.Xaiver chuckled at his great nieces reaction."Yea I'z guess he's 'bout rite as rain."His accent was an unusual one,but then again not many wolves had an accent." 'T leas' he was when I'z checked on 'em."Snow wagged her tail at hyper-speed.Not waiting for another word from him,she darted out of the den past him,piledriving towards Star's den in which her sick father was residing,leaving her uncle with a loud,"Thanks uncle Xavi!" before she left the den.

She padded quickly to Star's den;she was the healer of the pack. Her father was staying there for her to keep an eye on him due to a breathing sickness he had caught only who knows when.Snow's ears folded back,her eyes slightly wide."Dad?"She called softly before peeking in the den. Upon hearing a raspy,"Come in",Snow ducked throw the briars and walked slowly into the den. Snow bit back tears when she saw her father,sprawled out on the den floor. She could see his ribs;the disease had also made him like this. He hardly ate anymore,and when he did,it never made a difference.

"Hey Snow."Iggy mummbled weakly,raising his head slowly to look at his daughter.She frowned for a second,walking into the den and sitting beside him."Morning dad."She murmured lightly,flicking her ears forward and trying to put off her sad expression.She saw her father give her an amused grin,and watched him chuckle for a few seconds before breaking off with a cough.Snow shot forward,patting him on the back to help stop his attack."Dad calm down!Star said not to use up your strenght."

Iggy managed to stop coughing,looking back up at Snow and giving her a tired grin."Sorry,sorry."He said,the same amused expression on his face."I just thought it was funny."He shrugged.Snow sat back down,and tilted her head to the side."What was?"

"It's not morning sweetie."Iggy said,grinning at her."If anything,I belive it's late afternoon."Snow frowned again,then let out and annoyed groan.She face pawed,rolling her eyes."Oh greatI told Derek not to let me sleep past morning!"Iggy grinned at her."Alright,alright,sit down Snow.Don;t worry about it too much."Snow nodded and sat down,looking over at her father.

"So anything happened lately?I haven't been able to tell hence I've been in a den for three months."Iggy stated questioningly,letting out a low yawn.He was trying to keep the mood humorous,Snow could tell.He never liked sad things.Snow thought for a minute,eventually coming up with nothing "Nothing much,if you can believe that.It's been pretty peaceful."Iggy shook he head and snorted,rolling his eyes."Peaceful?Yea right,not with Jace and Kodi around!"Snow chuckled at his statement.It was true,there was never a quiet day when those two were involved."Or Uncle Xaviver and Grandpa."She offered;those two fought like cats and dogs.Iggy let out a huff."Those two need to calm thier tails down before I bite both of them."

"Yea,they can gert really annoying sometimes."

"That's an understatement dear."

Snow giggled at that remark,and nodded."Yep."Iggy chuckled lightly,as not to bring up another coughing fit.They sat like that for a while,talking about things that had been going on.Snow flicked her ears,looking at the front of the den."Ashalia came and talked to me eariler."He murmured gently,staring forward.Snow flicked her ears,looking down at him."She wanted to give her life for mine."Snow bit her lip,suddenly scared of the answer.She didn't want him to die,but at the same time she couldn't lose her mother."And I told her no.This is my battle,and I'll fight it."

Snow nodded."Papa?...I had this dream.."She broke off,closing her eyes at the memory.Iggy turned and faced her with a confused expression. "About what?"His tail laid gently over her shoulder,as if in comfort.She shuddered,not wanting to relive the dream,but knowing she needed to tell someone."I..."She broke off again,choosing instead to stare at the ground

."....dreamed that you died."

Iggy stared up at her with wide eyes,confusion clear across his face.Snow could all but guess his next question."How did everyone?....."Snow hung her head,describing in length how scared she had felt coming out of the den,seeing the entire pack upset,how terrifyed she had been upon seeing her mother and grandpa looking so heart broken,seeing so much pain on Ash's face;something that she wasn't used to seeing.And to see Repede so upset made her cry.She told him how her heart had broken when she ran in that den and saw him lying there motionless.How Demon and Star and hung thier heads,almost in failure,and how she had cryed over his unmoving body,apologizing and begging him to come back.

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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby anomaly. » Thu Feb 28, 2013 6:06 am

Thinking abouy writing something of girl who has a crush on a werewolf.
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby ri bird. » Thu Feb 28, 2013 6:08 am

Rolly-chan wrote:
ʀose ; wrote:
      Guys. Guys. GUISE.
      An agency requested my entire manuscript after I sent them a query letter! =D
      asdfgkjl; so excited right now. ~

Yay, that's great :D I'll be keeping my fingers crossed for you!
But your foot is in their door already, so... +_+


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