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cheshire by welcome to carnival.

Artist welcome to carnival. [gallery]
Time spent 4 hours, 15 minutes
Drawing sessions 1
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cheshire

Postby welcome to carnival. » Sun Feb 10, 2013 7:54 am

this is cheshire from pandora hearts ^^
critism appreciated!! :D
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here's the transparent version ^^
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Re: cheshire

Postby ➳ hoot » Sun Feb 10, 2013 10:25 am

Oh my glob.
How do you shade. H-how do you shade. HOW DO YOU SHADE >:c
This is amazing <33 I just wanna eat him up.
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Re: cheshire

Postby welcome to carnival. » Sun Feb 10, 2013 10:29 am

nooooo!!!! don't eat!!! D: >.< :333 ;D
weeeell... i use one extra layer, in black, then i lower the opacity and shade ;D :mrgreen:
and thank you :333 <3333 :D
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Re: cheshire

Postby geinkotsu » Sun Feb 17, 2013 11:34 pm

Absolutely amazing and eyecatching!
The only thing I would critique is the cloth.
While it does have a good structure, the folds are a little harsh and crumples
and looks more like it could be laying on a flat surface rather than an elegant airy flow.
The key to flowing fabrics is loose curves and rather parallel folds.

That aside- long time no see ;u;
I see you have been drawing so much!
All your art is amazing, but I cannot find the time to comment on it all.
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Re: cheshire

Postby rare animal » Sun Feb 17, 2013 11:37 pm

FUUUUUUUUUUUUU. This is AMAZING. ;U;
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Re: cheshire

Postby welcome to carnival. » Mon Feb 18, 2013 12:15 am

thank you so much for critisizing!! i appreciate it every time :33 <33
i noticed that with the clothing too but i didn't know how to change it;
i'll remember when drawing the next one ^^ :D
and thank you to cheshire cat too <33 :D
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Re: cheshire

Postby rainy.txt » Mon Feb 18, 2013 5:13 am

Squeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaak
My glob!!!
It's chesire!!
Such good art <3
You should draw Break next <3
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Re: cheshire

Postby welcome to carnival. » Mon Feb 18, 2013 5:50 am

thank you! <33 :D
i already did before, it's not that good though ^^ (you can see it in my gallery ^^ x))
maybe i'll give it aynother try if i feel like it :D
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