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Mmmm... by r e n

Artist r e n [gallery]
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Mmmm...

Postby r e n » Fri Feb 01, 2013 7:07 am

My entry for the extremely hansom boy, JBD #368
THANK YOU KOMI<333
First intermediate post~ Hope its worthy!

I want critique
I REALLY WANT CRIT~~

So, comments, crit and votes welcome :D
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Re: Mmmm...

Postby toccata » Mon Feb 11, 2013 4:40 am

Is that blood on his tounge? Otherwise it's great
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Re: Mmmm...

Postby r e n » Mon Feb 11, 2013 4:42 am

Thats what my friend said xD
No, he has a red tongue. Its chocolate

Thank you! <3 Its my first intermediate post~
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Re: Mmmm...

Postby toccata » Mon Feb 11, 2013 4:46 am

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Re: Mmmm...

Postby skategoths » Mon Feb 11, 2013 4:48 am

The only crit I could give you is to perhaps make the snout a little thinner at the top, otherwise it's amazing. I love the fur on the neck!
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Re: Mmmm...

Postby r e n » Mon Feb 11, 2013 5:38 am

Thank you :D
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