Ones We Forget - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

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Re: Ones We Forget - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sun Feb 10, 2013 8:57 am

Rockfire wrote:Ok, YAY

:)

Oh my gosh. I just found this old TIAJNAD Quiz that I made a while back (when I was still writing book 4 of the first series) and one of the questions was this:

Question:

What am I hoping will happen to my book if I ever get it published?

Choices:

Thousands of people will read it
It will become a movie
People will enjoy it
All Of The Above


And now think about it. At least 200 people have read it. It is becoming a movie. And my stalkerwans enjoy it. My dream came true before, and I haven't even realized it until now!

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Ones We Forget - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby daz » Sun Feb 10, 2013 8:58 am

LOL, awesome!!!!
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Re: Ones We Forget - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby .Fish. » Sun Feb 10, 2013 9:04 am

OMW JF thatis AWESOME
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Re: Ones We Forget - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sun Feb 10, 2013 10:10 am

New entry!















My eyes opened slowly. What happened? What was going on? I was tied up and I could feel something moving under me. No, all around me. It was dark, but there was a little light coming through a crack. I looked through the crack and squinted. A breeze blew against my cheek and everything flew by quickly. I shook a bit as everything around me moved. And then I finally figured it out. I was in a car. It explained the bumping, everything moving quickly, the breeze. But why? What had happened? I tried to call for help, but a gag made it impossible to do so. I got to my feet as best as I could with my tied arms behind my back and sort of hopped around the truck I was in. I suddenly ran straight into a wall, unable to see in the dark. I fell to the ground with a thud, and the truck I was in suddenly screeched to a halt and flung me across the room. I heard shouts and then light suddenly flooded into my eyes.
Before I could see who had captured me they threw a sack over my head and everything went black.

My eyes opened slowly... again.
Amy?
Suzi?
Amy! Is that you?!
GISH?!
I'm here, too.
GINGER!
Ammmyyy....
Jen.... Jenette?! Where are you?!
I'm... dead. How can you hear me?
What's goin' on?!
Amy, who are you talking to?
Jenette! Can't you hear her?
... no.
Well, isn't everybody chatty today.
DQ? You're here too?
Dairy Queen?
No, Demon Queen. I shortened it...
Oh. DQ is Dairy Queen.
It's now also Demon Queen.
Shut up, please. I don't care what you call me, quite frankly.
Oh, cool! So I can call you Creepy?
That's not what I meant.
How about Bob?
No, I meant-
Katniss?
NO! Now shut up and quit interrupting!
Well, somebody's moody.
Alright, that's it. Somebody untie me so I can punch the stuffing out of Amy.
NOO! NOBODY UNTIE HER! NOBODY UNTIE HER!
Amy, relax. We're all tied up, so how can we untie her?
Oh... chyeah, I knew that.
Wait, what's going on?
Amy, what's going on?
What're we gonna do?
Where are we?
Why are we tied up?
QUIT ASKIN' ME QUESTIONS!
There was a low rumble and I suddenly shook.
Amy? What. Did. You. Do.
I didn't do anything!
I shook again. Make that we all shook. A light turned on and I could see everybody in the room. We were all tied to posts. I couldn't see Jenette anywhere, but besides her we were all there.
Hello, Amy.
BRENT?! IS THAT YOU?! ARE YOU TIED UP TOO?!
No. Quite the contrary, actually. I'm completely free.
Then untie me!
Nope. I can't do that.
WHY?!
Quit yelling. I'm here to take all of your powers.
EAIG'ENHAIGOEHAGIE'AGHIE'AO
What'd I say about the yelling?
AAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!
SHUT UP!
Amy?
WHAT?!
I can't hear now.
I then realized that Gish was right next to me. And I had yelled. In her ear.
Oops, sorry.
Now I have to take your powers, so shut up!
I heard a whirring noise. The room started spinning and I looked up and saw electricity slowly coming downward toward me. It slowly started to come toward me and was centimeters away...
DISPERSE!
The electricity suddenly sizzled loudly and then turned to dust. Seriously, it turned to dust. Real dust.
Uh... what happened?
NO! NONONONONONONO!
Brent kicked a box halfway across the room and yelled. Then he pounded his fists on the ground and yelled some more.
I control electricity, remember?
Oh, right. How'd I forget THAT?!
You forget a lot of things.
Yo, Amy's bro. You done having a temper tantrum?
Shut up.
Hey, come here you big fat baby.
What did you just call me?!
An idiot, a baby, and fat. You're also annoying.
Brent stormed over to DQ (I'm calling her that now so now she reminds me of ICE CREAM!!!) and they started arguing. Suzi suddenly popped up in front of me.
Hiya!
EABGIO;WABHIGO;WAHGIOW;AHGIWOA;GHIWAOGHWIA;OGHIDOA;
Shush! I'm trying to help!
I looked over at where Suzi had been, and her ropes lay there, charred and sizzling. Of course! She had electrified the ropes and burned them away!
My fur suddenly stood on edge as the electricity wrapped around my ropes and burned them. Then my ropes fell to the ground.
Now stay put and stay quiet.
Yes, Sir! I mean ma'am!
Suzi glared at me, then went to help the others while DQ argued with Brent some more.
No, wait, I take back what I said about being fat.
Really?
You're fatter than a hippo.
ARGH!
Thanks, Suzi.
Suzi went along helping everybody else while Brent argued with DQ, anonymous to what was going on behind him. Soon everybody was free... except DQ. She was still arguing with Brent.
DQ! Come on!
Yes, you are a baby, Brent! You just had a tantrum!
I am no- wait, what are you guys doing?! How'd you get out?!
Brent saw us. Free. Untied.
You- you- what?!
Suzi? I think we better go!
Yeah, good idea. You guys go on ahead, and I'll get the Demon Queen.
No way! I'm stayin' here!
Fine, if you want to you can.
So I did. No way was I letting the Demon Queen stay here alone with Suzi. Something bad could happen...
Amy, can you hold Brent back, please?
YES SI- MA'AM!
I ran over to Brent and waved at him.
You are so idiotic.
WHAT?! I AM NOT IRONIC!
I said idiotic.
I'm not ionic!
What does that even MEAN?!
She's free! Let's go, Amy!
Gotta run!
YOU COME BACK HERE!
Brent suddenly picked up a staff (I had no idea where he got it from) and aimed it at me. A bright light suddenly came out of it and shot toward me.
AMY!
The Demon Queen jumped on me just as the bright light hit. I felt static go through me and my eyes burned. It felt as if I was melting from the inside out. And then, all at once, it stopped. I opened my eyes. I was laying on the ground, Suzi looking down at me.
You okay?
Ugh, I think so. How's DQ?
Um... you just said you were okay.
What?
I heard a moan beside me and looked over. And there, staring straight into my eyes, was not DQ, but me.
AAHGAHGAHGHA!
Me looked into my eyes.
Well, this is weird.
What the heck?!
AAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Huh. I am somehow in Amy's body, and she is somehow in mine.
WHAT?! HOW THE HECK DID THIS BACKFIRE?!
I looked over at Brent. He was staring at his staff thingy blankly.
You mean that you did this?!
Uh.... no?
Suzi's eyes turned red and she charged at Brent and knocked him down, then started pounding on him. I turned toward DQ.
Well, this is very weird.
Very.
This dress thing is really scratchy.
I scratched at the dress that I was now wearing (or, rather, DQ was wearing).
Well at least I don't smell like the inside of a pumpkin.
:o HOW DARE YOU!
So yeah. Suzi was fighting Brent, and I was fighting DQ (or rather myself). What was going on? What would we do?!

















Thank you Flashy for the idea of DQ and Amy switching brains!

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Ones We Forget - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby .Fish. » Sun Feb 10, 2013 10:11 am

aWESOME ENTRY JF
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Re: Ones We Forget - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby daz » Sun Feb 10, 2013 10:36 am

YAY! My idea haz been used!!
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cats. identifiable as a colored hair enthusiast, a
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Re: Ones We Forget - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby Kay the Cat-Fox » Mon Feb 11, 2013 4:46 am

Awesome! Great idea Flash!
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Re: Ones We Forget - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby incomprehensible » Mon Feb 11, 2013 5:49 am

ARGH. JF. THE CLIFFHANGERS. ITS DRIVING ME NUTZ.
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Re: Ones We Forget - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Mon Feb 11, 2013 6:55 am

Rockfire wrote:aWESOME ENTRY JF

Thanks! :)
OneFlash. wrote:YAY! My idea haz been used!!

Yush, it has!!
Kay the Cat-Fox wrote:Awesome! Great idea Flash!

:)
BrEaK_dOwN wrote:ARGH. JF. THE CLIFFHANGERS. ITS DRIVING ME NUTZ.

lol

Lookie what I found?
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and *drum roll*....
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I'm seeing if they're going to make an Amy one. That would be cool, wouldn't it?

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Ones We Forget - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby incomprehensible » Mon Feb 11, 2013 6:58 am

JF. I know you're online. Write more the next time or maybe NOW or I give you 3 dots. (hint hint >:3)
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