The Advanced Writer's Club

[eden .]

>> guys guys I finished my short story b/c that's the only way I know how to respond to a prompt
>> if you have critique then please feel free to post on the thread so I can see it all the time and know that people actually glance over one or two of my things once in a while ;;

[indebted]

{oh god why are all of you so good at writing poems. i fail at poems.

[eden .]

{oh god why are all of you so good at writing poems. i fail at poems.

holla. .-.
I suck at poems too it's ok we can cry in the corner together /highfive

[team free kick sass]

{oh god why are all of you so good at writing poems. i fail at poems.

holla. .-.
I suck at poems too it's ok we can cry in the corner together /highfive

ugh mine all sound cheesy or choppy.

CHEESYHAHAHA

[wolfie.]

{oh god why are all of you so good at writing poems. i fail at poems.

holla. .-.
I suck at poems too it's ok we can cry in the corner together /highfive

ugh mine all sound cheesy or choppy.

CHEESYHAHAHA

rofl XD

@Azsa: Thank you for the critique! I really appreciate it. <33

[indebted]

i decided to start writing prompts. c:

[eden .]

@journey: yeah np LOOK AT MY STORY NOW A;SLKDJF ;LASDKF

@christine daae: oop I just noticed are you a member b/c I don't see your name at the front like not to be a minimod or anything it's just that you're not allowed to post unless you've been accepted as a member ^^''

[indebted]

oh, i forgot the changed username thing!
i'm silverfrost. C:

Looks like I've changed my username!
Old username: SilverFrost
New username: er, this one.
christine Daae.
Club Number:
13

[CaptiveLegacy]

Well, i'm trying to get back into writing some poems P:
I just wrote this up, it isn't so good sorry xD

I wait for you.
Day by day.
Hoping you'll come back someday.

I see your face,
I see your smile.
Even though you've been gone for awhile.

I try to move on.
I try to carry on.
But you were the one who moved me along.

So as I sit
About to call it quits
I remember the words you last slipped.

"Remember me
Remember us"
And that's when I gave you all my trust.

[indebted]

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please, someone...read!