End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

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What did you think of the end of this book?

... Oh. My. Gosh. OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH!!!
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7%
WHAT JUST HAPPENED?!
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13%
Oohhh... this just got very interesting.
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THE CLIFF-HANGERS! I LOVE THEM!
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All of the above
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I didn't like it and thought it was stupid. This whole book series is stupid, actually. HATER ALL THE WAY!!
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Total votes : 15

Re: End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby TPDebate » Thu Jan 24, 2013 1:05 pm

I dont have one, sorry. Yay, there shall be more soon! Thank you! By the way, look up, diagraming a sentence.
Three Rings for the Elven-kings under the sky,
Seven for the Dwarf-lords in their halls of stone,
Nine for Mortal Men doomed to die,
One for the Dark Lord on his dark throne
In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.
One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them,
One Ring to bring them all and in the darkness bind them
In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.


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Re: End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Thu Jan 24, 2013 2:54 pm

Guess what, stalkerwans? New entry!















Huh? No way, man! I don't know a Jenette! I told you before, my name is Ariadne!
Nope! That's your disguised name!
... what does that mean?
It means your my ninja butt-kicking sister!
Uh... no.
Yup. Now quit denying it!
Sorry, but you've got the wrong dog.
No I don't! You're Jenette!
I reached my hand out toward "Ariadne" (note the quotations) and touched her arm.
Get away!
Ariadne whacked my arm away and then quickly put an arrow on her bow and shot it at me. It was so fast, so unexpected. It hit me in the shoulder and I yelped in pain and let go of my vine, crashing to the hard ground below. The wind was knocked out of me, and I probably had a broken arm from the fall. That and there was an ARROW IN MY SHOULDER! Ariadne swung down her vine rather gracefully and landed beside me.
If you ever touch me again, I will shoot. And I won't miss next time.
Wait, you MISSED this time?!
Yes. On purpose.
Blood dripped down my shoulder and onto the grassy ground.
You'd better get some help. There's a village if you keep on going straight. Somebody will help you there. Once they get the arrow out, I'll be back for it.
And without another word, Ariadne climbed up her vine and started swinging onto the other vines, making it look like she was almost flying away. I moaned and got to my feet. My shoulder that had the arrow in it hurt like heck, and blood was all over me now. I limped toward forward and walked for around fifteen minutes. I finally exited the woods, and in front of me was a village, just like Ariadne had said. Why had she been so strange? Why didn't she like me to touch her?
I limped into the village and knocked on the first door I saw, unable to take another step forward for fear that I would black out. A small dog opened the door a crack and looked through it at me. I smiled faintly. The little dog's eyes grew large and she shut the door with a thud.
Well, there goes getting help from the village.
I started to turn around just as the door opened all the way. The puppy I had seen looking at me before spoke (her words will be in greyish blue).
Let me help you inside. Just be quiet; you don't want them to hear you.
Who?
Shh! Be quiet!
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Yup, that's her. She dragged me inside (because everything around me was blurry and I couldn't tell which way was straight) and laid me on the ground.
Mama! I got her!
Whasthatmean?
And then everything went black.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby .Fish. » Thu Jan 24, 2013 2:57 pm

OMW YAY NEW ENTRY I LOVE IT JF ITS IS AWESOME. But I want more again, it feels like a CLIFHANGER
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Re: End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby Unashamed » Thu Jan 24, 2013 3:02 pm

I'm loving this story more, and more. I need MOARR!!!! Please?
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Re: End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby incomprehensible » Thu Jan 24, 2013 3:05 pm

OMG. JF. WRITE US A NEW ENTRY. I WISH I HAD READ THE SIDESTORIES FIRST.
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Re: End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Thu Jan 24, 2013 3:35 pm

Rockfire wrote:OMW YAY NEW ENTRY I LOVE IT JF ITS IS AWESOME. But I want more again, it feels like a CLIFHANGER

lol, thank you! :)
Hidden Tears wrote:I'm loving this story more, and more. I need MOARR!!!! Please?

Thanks, Hidden!
BrEaK_dOwN wrote:OMG. JF. WRITE US A NEW ENTRY. I WISH I HAD READ THE SIDESTORIES FIRST.

lol, you mean the Backstories? Yeah, if you read those the story might make a bit more sense. ;)

Sorry guys, but no new entry right now. Still trying to figure out my book...

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby brambletalon98 » Thu Jan 24, 2013 5:03 pm

OMGYESH NEW ENTRY :D

Its fine JF, Hope your publishing book things go well c:
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Re: End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby .Fish. » Thu Jan 24, 2013 11:48 pm

╬JesusFreak╬ wrote:
Rockfire wrote:OMW YAY NEW ENTRY I LOVE IT JF ITS IS AWESOME. But I want more again, it feels like a CLIFHANGER

lol, thank you! :)
Hidden Tears wrote:I'm loving this story more, and more. I need MOARR!!!! Please?

Thanks, Hidden!
BrEaK_dOwN wrote:OMG. JF. WRITE US A NEW ENTRY. I WISH I HAD READ THE SIDESTORIES FIRST.

lol, you mean the Backstories? Yeah, if you read those the story might make a bit more sense. ;)

Sorry guys, but no new entry right now. Still trying to figure out my book...

Your welcomes. Awww OK
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Re: End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby Rebel Faery » Fri Jan 25, 2013 4:55 am

Sorry I haven't been on! I've got a perfectly good excuse- wait nope. I've been reading Harry Potter xD
Anyway, sorry about your book JF! If you wrote it on word there's a function that numbers the pages for you, if that helps?
And AWESOME entry! I cannot await more! And now I know all sorts of curses, jinxes, ect... So write more fast before I go consult my book!
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Re: End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Fri Jan 25, 2013 5:30 am

brambletalon98 wrote:OMGYESH NEW ENTRY :D

Its fine JF, Hope your publishing book things go well c:

lol, thank you Bramble! :)
.:Stardust:. wrote:Sorry I haven't been on! I've got a perfectly good excuse- wait nope. I've been reading Harry Potter xD
Anyway, sorry about your book JF! If you wrote it on word there's a function that numbers the pages for you, if that helps?
And AWESOME entry! I cannot await more! And now I know all sorts of curses, jinxes, ect... So write more fast before I go consult my book!

lol, 'tis okay. I understand how addicting reading can get. Last night I was reading a book my mom suggested to me and I was supposed to be in bed, so I asked her if I could read the book and she was like "only for a little while" so I opened it and began reading... and reading... and reading... and soon I lost track of time. I finally looked up at the clock and was like "O.O" because it had already been over a half an hour. But I didn't want to put the book down right then because it was a cliffhanger! But I had to. -.- Oh well, at least I can stay up late tonight reading. And tomorrow. :twisted:
And I don't write in Word. I write in WordPerfect. I don't know if there's a page numbering option there...
And thank you! :)

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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