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by JourneyMaster » Thu Feb 28, 2013 4:58 pm
It's a good story line

You could improve it and make the chapters a little bit longer by describing things more. Keep at it!

Hi all! I'm (hopefully) back from a very long absence. So sorry for leaving you all hanging! I won't be online as often as I used to, but I'll be around

It is my goal to collect every butterfly wolf, please send me a trade to help me reach this goal!
Pân i valt law thilia,
Law pain i reviar mistar aen;
Iaur i vell law thinnatha,
O lith naur echuiathar aen,
Calad od dúath thuiatha;
Adamminen i vagol vreithannen,
Pen-thôl ad echannen i aran.
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