SECRETS- Under Two Grounds~ Prologue Critique

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Re: SECRETS- Under Two Grounds~ Prologue Critique

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Re: SECRETS- Under Two Grounds~ Prologue Critique

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Re: SECRETS- Under Two Grounds~ Prologue Critique

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Re: SECRETS- Under Two Grounds~ Prologue Critique

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Re: SECRETS- Under Two Grounds~ Prologue Critique

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Re: SECRETS- Under Two Grounds~ Prologue Critique

Postby Blargh-Pc » Mon Jan 07, 2013 2:27 am

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Re: SECRETS- Under Two Grounds~ Prologue Critique

Postby dragonewe » Mon Jan 07, 2013 6:03 am

I think it's fantastic! Keep going!
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Re: SECRETS- Under Two Grounds~ Prologue Critique

Postby Blargh-Pc » Mon Jan 07, 2013 6:08 am

Thank you Bump
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Re: SECRETS- Under Two Grounds~ Prologue Critique

Postby dragonewe » Mon Jan 07, 2013 6:11 am

Lol, wait a second what's your plot? Tell me more about your story :)
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Re: SECRETS- Under Two Grounds~ Prologue Critique

Postby Blargh-Pc » Mon Jan 07, 2013 6:17 am

Im not really good with explaining >.> I added more to it if you wanna read the rest. I added 2 more typed pages
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