Undiscovered Worlds- LOOKING FOR CRITIQUE!!! <3

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MACI!!!!
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Jamie
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Dustin
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Other
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Re: Undiscovered Worlds- LOOKING FOR CRITIQUE!!! <3

Postby LuvFinnick123 » Fri Jan 04, 2013 4:32 am

bump!
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"We're all a little broken. Then one day someone shows up with the missing pieces and puts them together. And that's what we call love."
Song of the moment. Waiting for Superman -Daughtry
Catchphrase of the moment. Bless your soul.
TV show/Movie of the moment. Frozen

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I'm currently writing a Fantasy Fiction story called Undiscovered Worlds. It is about three teenagers who are transfered to a school for magic. Evil is arising though, and the teens may be the only ones who can save the school and the world from the peril that arises! Here is the introduction if you're interested! If you want to read more please PM me!!!
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Re: Undiscovered Worlds- LOOKING FOR CRITIQUE!!! <3

Postby LuvFinnick123 » Fri Jan 04, 2013 9:57 am

bump!
Quotes of the moment.
"We're all a little broken. Then one day someone shows up with the missing pieces and puts them together. And that's what we call love."
Song of the moment. Waiting for Superman -Daughtry
Catchphrase of the moment. Bless your soul.
TV show/Movie of the moment. Frozen

.......

I'm currently writing a Fantasy Fiction story called Undiscovered Worlds. It is about three teenagers who are transfered to a school for magic. Evil is arising though, and the teens may be the only ones who can save the school and the world from the peril that arises! Here is the introduction if you're interested! If you want to read more please PM me!!!
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Re: Undiscovered Worlds- LOOKING FOR CRITIQUE!!! <3

Postby LuvFinnick123 » Fri Jan 04, 2013 1:39 pm

bump
Quotes of the moment.
"We're all a little broken. Then one day someone shows up with the missing pieces and puts them together. And that's what we call love."
Song of the moment. Waiting for Superman -Daughtry
Catchphrase of the moment. Bless your soul.
TV show/Movie of the moment. Frozen

.......

I'm currently writing a Fantasy Fiction story called Undiscovered Worlds. It is about three teenagers who are transfered to a school for magic. Evil is arising though, and the teens may be the only ones who can save the school and the world from the peril that arises! Here is the introduction if you're interested! If you want to read more please PM me!!!
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Re: Undiscovered Worlds- LOOKING FOR CRITIQUE!!! <3

Postby LuvFinnick123 » Fri Jan 04, 2013 3:46 pm

bump
Quotes of the moment.
"We're all a little broken. Then one day someone shows up with the missing pieces and puts them together. And that's what we call love."
Song of the moment. Waiting for Superman -Daughtry
Catchphrase of the moment. Bless your soul.
TV show/Movie of the moment. Frozen

.......

I'm currently writing a Fantasy Fiction story called Undiscovered Worlds. It is about three teenagers who are transfered to a school for magic. Evil is arising though, and the teens may be the only ones who can save the school and the world from the peril that arises! Here is the introduction if you're interested! If you want to read more please PM me!!!
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Re: Undiscovered Worlds- LOOKING FOR CRITIQUE!!! <3

Postby suzhay » Fri Jan 04, 2013 5:00 pm

Do you have more of your story you could send?
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Re: Undiscovered Worlds- LOOKING FOR CRITIQUE!!! <3

Postby LuvFinnick123 » Sat Jan 05, 2013 3:43 am

Yeah, I have a little more than what I've already sent. :) I'll try to soon! I'm not on my computer right now, so when I get one I'll send :D
Quotes of the moment.
"We're all a little broken. Then one day someone shows up with the missing pieces and puts them together. And that's what we call love."
Song of the moment. Waiting for Superman -Daughtry
Catchphrase of the moment. Bless your soul.
TV show/Movie of the moment. Frozen

.......

I'm currently writing a Fantasy Fiction story called Undiscovered Worlds. It is about three teenagers who are transfered to a school for magic. Evil is arising though, and the teens may be the only ones who can save the school and the world from the peril that arises! Here is the introduction if you're interested! If you want to read more please PM me!!!
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Re: Undiscovered Worlds- LOOKING FOR CRITIQUE!!! <3

Postby LuvFinnick123 » Sat Jan 05, 2013 11:09 am

bump!
Quotes of the moment.
"We're all a little broken. Then one day someone shows up with the missing pieces and puts them together. And that's what we call love."
Song of the moment. Waiting for Superman -Daughtry
Catchphrase of the moment. Bless your soul.
TV show/Movie of the moment. Frozen

.......

I'm currently writing a Fantasy Fiction story called Undiscovered Worlds. It is about three teenagers who are transfered to a school for magic. Evil is arising though, and the teens may be the only ones who can save the school and the world from the peril that arises! Here is the introduction if you're interested! If you want to read more please PM me!!!
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Re: Undiscovered Worlds- LOOKING FOR CRITIQUE!!! <3

Postby Elvish » Sat Jan 05, 2013 12:34 pm

I'd love to read more.
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Re: Undiscovered Worlds- LOOKING FOR CRITIQUE!!! <3

Postby LuvFinnick123 » Sat Jan 05, 2013 3:12 pm

Awesome! :D I'll send some too you soon! Thanks!
Quotes of the moment.
"We're all a little broken. Then one day someone shows up with the missing pieces and puts them together. And that's what we call love."
Song of the moment. Waiting for Superman -Daughtry
Catchphrase of the moment. Bless your soul.
TV show/Movie of the moment. Frozen

.......

I'm currently writing a Fantasy Fiction story called Undiscovered Worlds. It is about three teenagers who are transfered to a school for magic. Evil is arising though, and the teens may be the only ones who can save the school and the world from the peril that arises! Here is the introduction if you're interested! If you want to read more please PM me!!!
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Re: Undiscovered Worlds- LOOKING FOR CRITIQUE!!! <3

Postby LuvFinnick123 » Sat Jan 05, 2013 4:55 pm

bump!
Quotes of the moment.
"We're all a little broken. Then one day someone shows up with the missing pieces and puts them together. And that's what we call love."
Song of the moment. Waiting for Superman -Daughtry
Catchphrase of the moment. Bless your soul.
TV show/Movie of the moment. Frozen

.......

I'm currently writing a Fantasy Fiction story called Undiscovered Worlds. It is about three teenagers who are transfered to a school for magic. Evil is arising though, and the teens may be the only ones who can save the school and the world from the peril that arises! Here is the introduction if you're interested! If you want to read more please PM me!!!
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