End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

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What did you think of the end of this book?

... Oh. My. Gosh. OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH!!!
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WHAT JUST HAPPENED?!
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Oohhh... this just got very interesting.
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THE CLIFF-HANGERS! I LOVE THEM!
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All of the above
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I didn't like it and thought it was stupid. This whole book series is stupid, actually. HATER ALL THE WAY!!
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Total votes : 15

End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Fri Jan 04, 2013 4:31 pm

This is the fourth book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series! But first, if you aren't caught up, here's the other books in the series:
First series:
First Series:
1st Book: TIAJNAD
2nd Book: Sneaky Times In This Journal
3rd Book: Do Not Read Any Further
4th Book: The Big City And Bob!
5th Book: No Place To Run
6th Book: At Death's Door
7th Book: Life Or Death
8th Book: 'Til The Last Breath
9th Book: Running Out Of Time
10th Book (Finale): War With The World
Back Stories:
~~Jenette: The Call Of The Angels
~-Suzi: Broken
Second series:
1st Book: After Saving The World
2nd Book: Escape From Time
3rd Book: The Banishment Land
And now, without further ado, I give you the beginning of the 4th book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series!















I opened my eyes slowly. I was laying on the hard ground and I heard a ringing noise in my ears. Everything was dizzy and I couldn't see anything. My deafness blindness slowly died down, and I stared into the eyes of my "mom".
You fainted. Are you okay?
I guess.
You blacked out after I told you what happened to the others.
Wait, that was real?!
I'm sorry to say yes.
And you said you were my.... mother?
Yes.
... Great, now I've got three "moms".
Amy, I am your real mom. Don't I look like you? I've got three tails, don't I?
Yes, but Agent Cornelia had three tails too.
But she had blue hair and was brown.
True... wait, where were you all these years then?
I was banished from Earth. You would have been too, if I had not left you on Jenette's doorstep. Well, where Jenette was living at the time, which would be where Linda was.
Wait, why were you banished in the first place?
For... something I did.
What'd you do?
Something bad.
Oooohhh yeah, that's REAL specific.
My "mom" suddenly had a look of fury in her eyes and she charged at me. I covered my head with my hand, awaiting her blow. But it did not come. I slowly moved my arm away from my head and looked up at my "mom"'s eyes. But what had been fury was now replaced with tears.
I'm sorry, Amy. I'm so, so sorry.
What? For what?
Amy, I..... I tried... I succeeded..... and now he's not.... and you're....
Wha?
My "mom" looked up at me, a look of guilt in her eyes now.
Amy, I killed your real father.
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"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby brambletalon98 » Fri Jan 04, 2013 5:13 pm

First Comment!

OHNO

what have you done Amy's Mom?
BAD MOM. BAD MOM.

You never kill your own husband!

*cough cough *

Come on Amy, show your mom some power!
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Re: End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby star star. » Fri Jan 04, 2013 6:58 pm

What next?! Unicorns suddnly pop up from nowhere and start SINGING?! oh i hate tht song...
Seriously though. Moar before i keel Mom with a frying pan. And when she said, "Well, she's brown and has blue hair," I'd've said, "Yeah, well you're the color of fire! So HA!"





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Re: End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby .Fish. » Fri Jan 04, 2013 11:37 pm

OMW OMW OMW AWESOME ♥♥ I LOVE IT JF NOT I LOVE LOVE IT ♥♥
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Postby xxazul63xx » Sat Jan 05, 2013 12:24 am

Well i don't see the resemblance between her and amy :/
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Re: End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby VesVes » Sat Jan 05, 2013 3:04 am

That mom needs to be taught a lesson there. But good entry! And who was Amy's real father?
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Re: End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby Unashamed » Sat Jan 05, 2013 3:10 am

Okay, so I already really hate Amy's "mom." Note: I put mom inside quotation marks.
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Re: End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sat Jan 05, 2013 9:59 am

brambletalon98 wrote:First Comment!

OHNO

what have you done Amy's Mom?
BAD MOM. BAD MOM.

You never kill your own husband!

*cough cough *

Come on Amy, show your mom some power!

No, you can't kill your own husband. It 'tis bad.
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What next?! Unicorns suddnly pop up from nowhere and start SINGING?! oh i hate tht song...
Seriously though. Moar before i keel Mom with a frying pan. And when she said, "Well, she's brown and has blue hair," I'd've said, "Yeah, well you're the color of fire! So HA!"

lol, I love that song. XD
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Thanks!
xxazul63xx wrote:Well i don't see the resemblance between her and amy :/

Yeah, maybe Amy's "mom" is delusional...
Nyota Hyena wrote:That mom needs to be taught a lesson there. But good entry! And who was Amy's real father?

You shall see!!
Hidden Tears wrote:Okay, so I already really hate Amy's "mom." Note: I put mom inside quotation marks.

lol

Sorry, no new entry yet! I've been putting off cleaning my bathroom, so I gotta go do that now. -.- And I still have to dust, too.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby .Fish. » Sat Jan 05, 2013 10:08 am

Your welcomes
Ok
And one thing WHY WOULD HER MOM KILL HER FATHER AND DOES SHE HAVE ANY MORE MOMS i iz done
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Re: End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby Kay the Cat-Fox » Sat Jan 05, 2013 1:45 pm

So, she killed her own husband...
Talk about anger issues!
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