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This is going to influence the outcome of the story. Which do you prefer?

Happy endings
1
9%
Sad endings
10
91%
 
Total votes : 11

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Postby indebted » Wed Jan 02, 2013 11:09 am

I thought it was a bit cliche-y, because, you know, wolves and everything. Everyone seems to be obsessing about the one subject.
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Postby Nellas » Wed Jan 02, 2013 11:20 am

Still, it makes you think there would be a reason so many people are fascinated by and use the subject of wolves, if you see what I mean c:
I, personally, and completely in love with wolves; their majesty and power, and their complex social stuctures, the way their packs are and their life style, and they're just so beautiful <3 I think many wolf stories have been overdone but then there's those couple of things you'll come across and read and say, that's how it's done c:
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Postby spiff » Wed Jan 02, 2013 11:32 am

That's true, especially in the roleplay forums, but I agree with Nellas: there are many overdone wolf story lines, but once in a while you'll find something that just blows your mind.

I'm trying my best to make Umbra unique. <3
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Postby indebted » Wed Jan 02, 2013 11:58 am

{{Beautiful so far. I can't entirely say I haven't fallen prey, since I am writing something about tribal wolves as well. Story plot was developed way before I read Umbra, though, so don't worry. It's different! Yay!
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Postby spiff » Wed Jan 02, 2013 12:24 pm

I'll gladly read your story if it's posted somewhere. C:
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Postby indebted » Wed Jan 02, 2013 12:36 pm

still posting. Have to make it pretty this time! :D
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Postby Akela~ » Fri Jan 04, 2013 1:40 pm

Can't wait for more. ^^
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Postby spiff » Wed Jan 09, 2013 10:22 am

I feel guilty leaving you guys hanging -- although I'm sure you couldn't care less -- so I'm just going to post occasional updates when a chapter is taking more than a week for me to write.

At the moment, Chapter Two is at a whopping total of 238 words.
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Postby Nellas » Wed Jan 09, 2013 11:03 am

Rage. Of course we care- give yourself more credit! You're a fabulous writer!

But take your time c: We don't want you overly stressing out about this when you do have more important things to do. We're just a couple random people from the internet so whatever you're doing in the meantime matters more, of course, than keeping us updated. c:
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Postby spiff » Wed Jan 09, 2013 11:17 am

You're going to spoil me, Nellas! D:

It's more for my own satisfaction than anyone else's because I feel terrible whenever I know someone out there might be waiting for the next chapter, and even though a week without updating most definitely does not mean I've ditched the story, I feel this strange, needy obligation to let you guys know I'm still working on it. Anyway, it barely takes a minute out of my schedule, so it's really no trouble at all. I just have strange tendencies. xD
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