Hogwarts: The Early Years:Harry potter fan fic|chapter 5 up

[HermioneGranger]

This is great! Can't wait to see what happens next!

[Silence of Birds]

I just finshed reading all of it between,swtching windows and friends.
It's soooo good.
I have to admit I don't really have a favoruite character right now,but Remus might be beating all by a little(Except for Snape-I never liked him much as a kid,but in the seventh...okay so current Snape isn't all that bad).
Sad...Remus obly has one vote and thats me...

[Silence of Birds]

You need a hug.

It's SOOOO good to have some new HP stuff to read,even if it is fan-fic. Personally I love Lupin,but I really do like Siruis when he gets older. Peter I'm not a fan of.

Ugg. I want to HP Fam-fic but nothing come to mind.

[Silence of Birds]

Yes. I hate it when you know you have a good idea for a RP and nobody joins or is active.I peronsally sometimes enjoy writing more then Rping-you can have verything go you're way and I find it fun to make characters,act them out,put in danger and stuff-but maybe thats me.

Yes. To hit Peter whould be nice along with a few others. So many others.

I like Sirius too. Really when he's older,as I ssaid,but also as a child. He has to be my second favouite. Lupin is just so...me,he's a lot like me.

I think you got all the younger characters just right. Lupin is ore of the smart one,Sirius is like James,only not good and sports and (too me) as much as a show-off,James is like Harry only more of a show-off and Peter is that whiny,whipy looking thing.

[Silence of Birds]

THorry is pretty awesome. She sounds like afemale Siruis.XD Thats going to be fun. You must've done a ton of extra research on the characters you're using-and it seems you did it well.

[Silence of Birds]

Wow..thats some research. I could spend freetime like that,and for fun. I loove to learn more about HP characters-makes me feel like they're ven more real.XD. Sometime I re-read random passages cause I get bored.

When should chapter four be out?(I'm going to send you a friend request on Pottermore-I'm DreamGhost622)

[scmarshtacky]

I'm definitely following this. ^^ I love the Marauder age so much, and you're doing a really good job of keeping them in character which, I've found, a lot of fan-fics don't do.

[HermioneGranger]

Its looking good!

[HermioneGranger]

I sent you a friend request, I am ScarletProphecy20202. Can't wait for more on your story too!

[scmarshtacky]

Cliffhanger!! No! I need to know what happens! XD