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ѕιlver and вlυe ғangѕ-pнaтoм claw-Warriors fan-fic.

Postby Silence of Birds » Fri Dec 28, 2012 4:22 pm

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So what do you do when a stanger arrives at your camp? What do you do if they're bloddy and wounded? What do you do if they have a warrior name? Well either you tend to them then kick them out,or kick them our right away. My Clan choose to keep him after he felt like talking. He said he's called Phatomclaw. Every cat in the forset has heard about the rumored phatoms-shadowy cats from the Great Clans,and how they're supposeably wandering the earth for revenge. Some of my Clan think Phatomclaw is a messager from them and others don't know what to think. My leader-Snowstar-took him in because of how he was wounded. But I don't trust him. His eyes are werid...I'm Bluepaw,daughter of Iceclaw,nice to Snowstar and I'm going to tell you my story along with Silverpaw,my sister.

Warrior Fan-Fic! Okay so this si the first in the Waarrio fan-fic called Silver and Blue Fangs. The first one is told by Bluepaw then Silverpaw and so on. First lets get everything done and over with.

Contents:
Main Post-Holds everything about the story and some other things.
Prolouge-Up

The Series
The series is called Silver and Blue Fangs. There will be a few different ones in the series. The first is Phatom's Claw the second might be Ghost Paws, the third might be Walking Ones and the last will be Return of the Great Clans. Bluepaw and Silverpaw will be the main charatcers through out it. All credit for the idea goes to the amazing Erin Hunter(s). You never know when you'll see more fan-fic of mine.

Clans:

IceClan

Leader:Snowstar(sister to Iceclaw)-She-cat that's snow white with a silver dappled pelt.
Deptuy:Ashflight(mate to Redfur)-Tom,ash colored pelt.
Medicne Cat:Mossclaw-Tom,calico.
Warriors(She-cats and toms without kits)
Barktooth-Grumpy she-cat with a bark brown pelt.App.-Silverpaw
Brambleface-senior warrior,tom,bramble tortiseshell with many scars on his face(most likely made by thorns). App.-Scarpaw.
Thornwhisker-younger warrior,tom,a grey tortiseshell with a scared pelt from thorns plus a few battles(Mate to Wolftooth)
Featherclaw-Young warrior,she-cat,a pretty silver pelt with white spots and huge blue eyes(much like Feathertail).App.-Cherrypaw
Iceclaw-She-cat,a white blue pelt with ice blue eyes,mother to Silverpaw and Bluepaw(father unknown).App.-Bluepaw
Appenitences(warriors in training)
Scarpaw-Tom,scars from almost being crayed away by an eagle,fluffy brown pelt. Mentor-Brambleface
Cherrypaw-She-cat,pretty orange-y brown dappled pelt.
Bluepaw-She-cat,blue-grey pelt,green eyes,her mother is Iceclaw,father unknown.
Silverpaw-She-cat,silver pelt,blue-green eyes,her mother is Iceclaw,father unknown(littermates with Bluepaw)
Queens and Kits(listed together)
Wolftooth-she-cat. Four kits-Foxkit(red and white she-cat),Stormkit(grey as a storm tom),Spearowkit(light grey with blue eyes she-cat) and Blackkit(all black tom)
Redfur-red fur,she cat,two kits-Sunkit(a pale red she-cat) and Whitekit(albino,white with red eyes tom).
Elders
Oldclaw-she-cat,oldest cat in Iceclan.

FloodClan
Leader:Reedstar-Tom,mottled brown pelt.Mate to Freshtail.
Deputy:Fishwhisker-Fish silver pelt,tom.
Medince Cat:Riverfish-Tom,silver blue pelt.
Warriors
Birdnest-young she-cat,grey pelt,has a crush on Fishwhisker.App.Birdnest.
Willowtail-Grumpy she-cat,light brown pelt.
Spottedface-Tom,calico.App.Fishpaw.
Appitcnes
Fishpaw-silver tom,mentor-Spottedface.
Vinepaw-she-cat,forset brown,mentor-Birdnest.
Queens and Kits
Freshtail-The color of fresh fall leaves,five kits-Fallkit(like her mother),Newkit(like his father),Greykit( a grey tom),Riverkit(a grey blue river colored she-cat) and Whiskerkit(pale silver tom).
Elders
None.

EarthquakeClan
Leader:Earthstar-Tom,spotted brown pelt.
Deputy:Mudtooth-She-cat,mud colored mate to Hawkclaw,though nobody knows this.
Medicne Cat:Eagletail-Eagle colored tom.
Warriors
Hawkclaw-Handsome tawny tom,sercet mate to Mudtooth.
Redclaw-Tom,bloodstained claws,grey pelt.App.Goosepaw.
Ebonytail-Ebony colored she-cat,with stunning green eyes.
Violetclaw-pretty tortise she-cat.
Hollyear-Black she-cat.
Apptincnes
Goosepaw-albino tom,mentor-Redclaw
Queens:
Lionclaw-lion colored she-cat with three kits-Lionkit(like her mom),leopardkit( leopard spotted she-cat) and Tigerkit(tom that looks an awful lot like a tiger).
Sandtail-Sand colored she-cat,two kits-Dirtkit(dirt colored tom) and Lostkit(a kit that was wounded badly by a hawk,has a lost paw).
Elders:
Onewhisker-just a very old tom.

DarkClan
Leader:Whitestar-white she-cat with stunning amber eyes.
Deputy:Icetooth-Silver she-cat.
Warriors:
Hawkheart-Brave tom,dark brown pelt.
Kerstrelclaw-She-cat,tawny pelt.
Bagerface-a she-cat with a face that looks a lot like a badgers and a spotted black and white pelt.
Treebark-Grumpy tom,dark brown totiseshell.
Blacktooth-Tom,all black except for his muzzle which is grey. Mate to Blackface.
Queens:
Blackface-All white she-cat except for her face which is black. Three kits-Blackit(like his father except that his muzzle is silver),Brownkit(chocolate brown she-cat) and Thunderkit(dark grey tom).
Elders:
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Re: ѕιlver and вlυe ғangѕ-pнaтoм claw-Warriors fan-fic.

Postby Silence of Birds » Sat Dec 29, 2012 5:18 am

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It was raining heavyly. Mossclaw,our in training medceine cat was at the top of a cliff in our terriorty. "Mossclaw? MOSSCLAW!" Russetclaw called. Mossclaw turned around to look at his to-be mate. "Mossclaw I came to see you. You know medceine cats can't have mates. We can't be together."Russetclaw said sadly. "I know,love. I was looking at the Silverpelt. I thought StarClan would gudie me,show me what I am supposed to do. Nothing." Mossclaw said. Russetclaw had paded to the edge of the cliff,her bright pelt barely visable through the rain. She was looking towards the Silverpelt. She said in a kind of trance," The black shadow will come. It will come,as silently as night,as fast as a killing blow. None shall know,none but two. Silver and blue fangs they are,they only have the power to stop the black shadow." Mossclaw looked at her his eyes wide. Russetclaw turned around her eyes as wide as the full moon,as pale as one too. "Ru-Russetclaw...StarClan spoke to you!" Mossclaw gasped. Russetclaw was realsed from the trance. "W-what happened?" She said,staggering slightly. Mossclaw told her. Ruesstclaw sad,"No. No,it can't be. Not him. Not-" But whatever she was going to say was cut short-a cat killed her. A cat as black as night. Mossclaw ran,ran to tell Snowstar. Whoever-or whatever- the black shadow was,it was dangerous. And now the deputy was murdered.
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Re: ѕιlver and вlυe ғangѕ-pнaтoм claw-Warriors fan-fic.

Postby Silence of Birds » Tue Jan 01, 2013 11:09 am

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Bluepaw was having a dream. She was in the forset,somewhere. She was hunting a mjouse,stalking it slowly. She was about to pounce when-"BLUEPAW!" Iceclaw screamed. Bluepaw grunted something. Her eyes flitted open and she saw the leaves over head,and the grey dawn sky. "Iceclaw...it's barely morning." Iceclaw padded inside,her silver-blue pelt rippling."Come on,we're starting early. I want to show you the terrtiory." Bluepaw grunted again and got up. She stretched,looking around. Silverpaw-her sister- was still sleeping along with Cherrypaw and Scarpaw,who were two moons aheahd of Bluepaw and Silverpaw. Bluepaw padded put of the den,to see weak dawn light shining on the clearing.
"Bluepaw,come on!" Iceclaw called again. She was at the entrance,a tunnel like thing,with old tree stumps surranding it with brambles over top. Bluepaw trotted after her. Iceclaw was waiting just outside."Here is the entrance,as you know. Beyound,just over that bump is our traning place,the green ferns. See how there's ferns all over it?" Iceclaw asked. Bluepaw nodded. "It lets us train without inguring ourselves too badly. Look,Barktooth and Branbleface are already there preparing." Iceclaw raced to the green ferns,Bluepaw in tow."Hello Barktooth and Branmbleface! Just showing Bluepaw around!" iceclaw newed to them. They nodded and Iceclaw took Bluepaw futher into the terriotry. Soon they stopped by some hegdes. "The red Berry hegdes. Never eat the berries,and this marks where our border's meet DarkClan's." iceclaw siad nodding towards the bushes and brought Bluepaw to a ...ridge. "We call this the High Ridge...climb it and you can see all of our terriotry for it is in a clearing." And so it was. Bluepaw and Iceclaw started the climb up and when they reached the top Bluepaw gasped. The trees had a golden light dancing on them,and the forset was turned into a golden-green tree forset. the High Rigde only rose to about three quaters of the trees nearset to them,but allowed a great view of the forset floor and the murky mashes,ravines and pines beyond and glimmers of white which must be twoleg nests in the distance. Iceclaw sighed and siad,"Is better then seeing a full plie of fresh-kill in the winter,no?" Bluepaw nodded. They went down the other side and came to some rocks. "EarthquakeClan's borders. very rocky up there." Iceclaw said and brought Bluepaw to a rather squishy part of the forset. "FloodClan.." Iceclaw said sniffing. She didn't smell FloodClan's markers..they were at least a moon old and she smelt other scents...IceClan markers and a lonner cat. "Something is wrong! We have to tell Snowstar at once!" Iceclaw yelped and she ran off Bluepaw running right after her.

they arrvied at the camp and Iceclaw went right into Snowstar's den bekoning to Bluepaw to follow. The leader's den was to the side of a large pile of rocks that were silvery at night with a tint of blue-how IceClan got it's name. Bluepaw followed. Snowstar was there,sitting in her nest thinking. "Snowstar! Sister! Snowfall!" Iceclaw mewed. snowstar looked up and siad,"Yes Iceclaw?" And Iceclaw ent into speech about the missing markers and the unfamiler scent. "What if a spy is in their camp...and lead more cats and they raided FloodClan?!" Iceclaw said in a worried tone. Bluepaw didn't see what her mother was getting worked up over. It was another Clan with their own problems. yet she was un-easy too."I will send warriors to see what is wrong. Get me...Thronwhisker,Featherclaw andAshflight." Iceclaw ran off and Snowstar turned to Bluepaw."Get...Scarpaw. You and him will help the warriors. And Silverpaw. yes i think that will do." Snowstar said and Bluepaw hurried off. Blue paw told her sister and Scarpaw. Silverpaw was jumping for joy while Scarpaw looked worried. "Another battle will not help me." he said to himself. But both came and iceclaw had returned as well. Snowstar explained and siad at the end,"You are all to go into their territory and see what is going on. If a patrol chanllges you say you were sent by Snowstar and want to see Reedstar. Alone." All cats nodded. "You should do this...mid-day I should think. Maybe nightfall. Let Mossclaw give you traveling herbs-for the mahses take your engery." Snowstar sent them out and returned to thinking.

At mid-day the cats set out. Ashflight was in the lead and was leading towards the mashy parts of the forset. Soon they reached them and Bluepaw wrinkled her nose at the squishing of the ground. Ashflight lead on without a sign of slowing. Thornwhisker was muttering something about dry land. Featherclaw was stepping lightly while trying to cheer Thornwhisker up. Silver paw was beside Bluepaw. Iceclaw was in the back,making sure the others didn't get lost and such. Scarpaw was muttered something about mash wattter didn't mix with his scars. Soon they came to a very mashy part,and Ashflight halted. "One more tail-length and it is FloodClans territory. Any cat wishing to go back,should do so now." No cat moved and they went on,over the border. The sky was darking and soon all Bluepaw could see was grey shapes ahead of her which were cats. Ashflight went on towards the heart of the mashes. Soon every cat's paws were soaked and Bluepaw's tail was dripping and Thronwhisker's stiff whiskers were like a small waterfall. Rain had started pouring when the stars came out,but Ashflight went on. Willows soon appered. It was a long hike in the mashes-they had to try and stay dry and not to step in any of the pools. Soon they had reached the heart of the mahses and came upon what Bluepaw thought was the way to the camp. It was a wide path between many pools with smaller,narrower paths leading off of it. Many pools showed signs of being dammed with rocks. Ashflight went on the wide path and did not stray from it until he came to what Bluepaw belived was a dead end. There was a huge pool infront and pools around and no other path to be found. Ashflight looked across the pool and then suddenly steped to the left of it. A splash came and Ashflight waded to aboutt he middle of the shore-side and siad,"It's shallow enough to cross here." And bekoned for the rest to follow. After getting out of the water Bluepaw wasn't the only cat shivering. The water was freezing and the rain was drenching them even more. Ashflight went on,but he too was shivering. Soon they came to the very entrance of the camp. There was pools on either side and the camp was surronded by willows. "Ermm...would a cat come and greet me?" He mewed into the darkness. Suddenly a cat appered. It was a tom with a silver plet and looked to be slightly older then Bluepaw. "Y-yes? What is it that you want?" He stuttered. he too was shivering. "Snowstar has sent us to see Reedstar." Asflight said. the tom nodded and said,"I am Fishpaw. I will take you to our leader. Follow me." And with that the tom was off with a bound. They all followed him. He lead them to a large fallen tree trunk.There was a spae under it that was dry and the glint of amber eyes was seen in it's depth. Fishpaw slipped in and Reed star's voice cmae out,"Come guests." The cats crawled inside and Fishpaw slipped ut. A tom was lieing in a nest. His pelt was mottled and brown and he looked at the cats with thoughtful amber eyes. "So Snowstar has sent you? Why?" Iceclaw told Reedstar everything. He looked at her with longing,as if she was a long lost love. "Ah. So you too have smelt the Black Shadow...or so our Clan calls the cat. The cat attacked my border patrol a few days ago when they went over there. A cat in training and three warriors were killed...but how nobody knows for the only cat to come back from the patrol was Fishpaw and he is...unstable." Iceclaw's eyes went as big as moons. Bluepaw gasped a bit and Silverpaw's tail wraped around Bluepaw's leg. "That's horrible!" Ashflight mewed. Bluepaw shook Silverpaw's tail off as Reedstar said,"The cat can kill with a blow and un-honorably. We do not know the name or looks of this cat unless it is his red-amber eyes and swiftness. The cat is like a shadow-that's why we have called it Black Shadow. Black Shadow has no scent of another Clan,but a few cats report a faint trace of DarkClan. i am scared for my Clan. No cat wishes to go to your boreders again." Asflight stepped forward. "I am the deputy of Snowstar to be leader of IceClan. I say that you should at least go and check with your deputy and a finest warrior. I would do the same for my Clan,no matter the cosat. If a rouge happens to get by un-noticed by IceClan they will see your boreder as a wak spot and hunt here." He said in a stren voice and suddendly looked like a warrior of one of the old Clans. Reedstar did not coward under his gaze but stood and rose his head high. "I will decide what is best for my Clan-not another Clan's deptuy. I will bring Black Shadow up at the Gathering and see what other Clans have to say about this." Scarpaw slunk forward and asked in a quiet voice,"WE only wanted to make sure your camp was not raided and none were killed. It is sad to hear that a whole patrol was killed,but I would suggest keeping at least two to three cats in the camp at all times so you do not get raided." Reedstar looked down at the scared tom. He looked ready to snalr at him but only nodded and said,"If...if Iceclan would be willing to help us that would be great. Ever since Black shadow came there has been a lack of hunting. If IceClan would give a bit of there fresh-kill that would ensure our Clan's survival and the kits too." Ashflight nodded and said,"I will ask my leader. Good-bye Reedstar and could a cat lead us out of here?" Redstar nodded and called for a warrior. A grumpy light brown she-cat came and lead them out.
~
The next day Bluepaw woke early. It was barely sun-high but she slid out of her nest. She heard Ashflight and Snowstar speaking and then the sounds of a cat hurring off. Bluepaw came out with a yawn and was greeted by Snowstar,"Morning Bluepaw. Iceclaw isn't awake yet,but....today you will be training with me. Iceclaw is helping Ashflight with FloodClan's fresh-kill shortage. Today I think we will do...fighting tactics." They went out, a rather jumpy Snowstar and a rather tried Bluepaw hiked to the green ferns. Silverpaw and her netor were already there. Silverpaw waved her tail in greeting and old Barktooth came over after her. "Bluepaw! Snowstar's training you?" Silverpaw asked cocking her head to one side. Bluepaw explianed quickly- and just in time. Snowstar beckoned her over. Soon Snowtsra was showing her moves - everything from belly roll to simple paw attacks. They halted for a break. Bluepaw flopped down panting,next to Silverpaw. Mossclaw came walking into the green ferns,looked and alughed. "You've been training them hard!" He mewed. He put down the herbs in his mouth and padded over to Snowstar. They spoke in hushed voices and Snowstar sent them off to hunt. Silverpaw bounced off to hunt alone. Bluepaw padded through out the forset sniffing,but her eyes kept straying. There was a shadow in her sight. She stood still and waited. Then she ducked into some ferns with much nosie. Soon the shadow came into her clear veiw-it was a pitch black cat. It's underside was a slightly lighter black and the spots on it's back was like a leopards and a silghty lighter shade oif black. When the cat's head turned she saw the strangest eyes- amber-red with shots of silver blended into them. Then Bluepaw noticed the cuts. All over it's body cuts and wounds were bleeding. It's flank,legs and parts of it's face were stained red. It limbed silghtly. Bluepaw knew she should help this cat but the scent was unfamilar and a dark sense of forbidding pervented here. The cat passed hissing under it's breath something foul. Bulepaw got on with her hunting but only came back with two mice. She was uneasy and couldn't rip her thoughts from the strange cat. That night her dreams were filled with black,loeparded spotted,odd eyed wounded cats calling out to her to help, and the strange cat,fully healed looking her in the eye and laughing,saying,asking mockingly 'wouldn't you help them?'.
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Re: ѕιlver and вlυe ғangѕ-pнaтoм claw-Warriors fan-fic.

Postby Silence of Birds » Wed Feb 13, 2013 2:09 pm

Chapter Two:The Vistor

The next WIP
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