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by nivans.piers » Tue Dec 25, 2012 11:28 am
m i s t y p e l t wrote:Haha, I don't think so. His hairs kinda like his trade mark I guess. But Jared will show up a lot now.
oh yay! good trade mark. It suites him. Jared Jared Jared! i don't know why, i just like Jared for some reason.

" I did it for the B S A A... for the f u t u r e "
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"H a r d to find a good s t e a k around here.
Not like b a c k h o m e "
-piers nivans
" I... I don't think I'm r e a d y for that "
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" I'm the best d r i v e r the B S A A got! "
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" If you hadn't been blinded by
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some of those d e a t h s "
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by nivans.piers » Tue Dec 25, 2012 5:03 pm
hm.... interesting.... One question. Why did he pick on Astella so much? earlier in the book.

" I did it for the B S A A... for the f u t u r e "
-piers nivans
"H a r d to find a good s t e a k around here.
Not like b a c k h o m e "
-piers nivans
" I... I don't think I'm r e a d y for that "
-piers nivans
" I'm the best d r i v e r the B S A A got! "
-piers nivans
" If you hadn't been blinded by
v e n g e a n c e, we could have prevented
some of those d e a t h s "
-piers nivans
to P I E R S N I V A N S, the t r u e h e r o
of the B S A A.
I'M OPEN TO ALL PIERS NIVANS, JAKE
MULLER/SHERRY BIRKEN, PEIRS/CHRIS,
PIERS/OTHERCHARACTER RPs.
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by nivans.piers » Tue Dec 25, 2012 5:14 pm
Derek. Yep! that guy. Omg! big realization.... what if there is a love triangle between Jared, Derek, and Astella?

" I did it for the B S A A... for the f u t u r e "
-piers nivans
"H a r d to find a good s t e a k around here.
Not like b a c k h o m e "
-piers nivans
" I... I don't think I'm r e a d y for that "
-piers nivans
" I'm the best d r i v e r the B S A A got! "
-piers nivans
" If you hadn't been blinded by
v e n g e a n c e, we could have prevented
some of those d e a t h s "
-piers nivans
to P I E R S N I V A N S, the t r u e h e r o
of the B S A A.
I'M OPEN TO ALL PIERS NIVANS, JAKE
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PIERS/OTHERCHARACTER RPs.
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by natures-daughter » Tue Dec 25, 2012 5:20 pm
Yea somewhat, but it doesn't revolve around that. Just something added in there, haha. And Derek was being a jerk: 1. Because that's how he is sometimes 2. Because he didn't want to believe that the fourth hybrid was his friend. He would know if she actually reacted at his words and by the impact of the hit or what she did. Make sense?
NATURE'S DAUGHTER
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by nivans.piers » Tue Dec 25, 2012 5:24 pm
Nice extra, adds spice to the story!^^ ah, i understand now. It was like, really random. But now it's all cleared up. Thank you!
When's the next chapter coming out? sorry, i just love this a lot.

" I did it for the B S A A... for the f u t u r e "
-piers nivans
"H a r d to find a good s t e a k around here.
Not like b a c k h o m e "
-piers nivans
" I... I don't think I'm r e a d y for that "
-piers nivans
" I'm the best d r i v e r the B S A A got! "
-piers nivans
" If you hadn't been blinded by
v e n g e a n c e, we could have prevented
some of those d e a t h s "
-piers nivans
to P I E R S N I V A N S, the t r u e h e r o
of the B S A A.
I'M OPEN TO ALL PIERS NIVANS, JAKE
MULLER/SHERRY BIRKEN, PEIRS/CHRIS,
PIERS/OTHERCHARACTER RPs.
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