Tears

[oakdenugg]

[Exia]

I liked it; personally I love how you made it vague--how you kind of let the reader guess as to what exactly her relationship with her mother is, and then at the end you reveal what happened. I love the...well, the suspense (I guess this is the word I'm looking for), it dragged me in and was really good I couldn't stop reading.



You get three thumbs up

[goldh31]

Wow...that's....no words can describe it. It takes my breath away just reading it. So sad and so believable at the same time, something not many writers can pull off. Goodness knows I've been in that situation, just not with my mom. You captured the emotions and feelings exceptionally well, have you written anything else available online?

[oakdenugg]

@Exia- Thank you very much! <3 Glad you like it!

@Mozzer- No, sadly this is a short story, as I thought the plot would be kind of boring as a novella and/or novel. It would be long and dragged out, so I thpught it would be better in a shorter form. ^-^ But thank you very much for your comment. <3

@goldh31- Thank you so much. That really makes me very happy to hear such positive comments. And I guess the only reason I could pull off the emotions and hurt going on through her mind is because I've felt like that many times before, so it really fuelled me to write about my feelings. <3
I do have some others, but I doubt you'd be impressed by them. xD I just write for fun, but I can PM you some of my other books. I get distracted often, so they are all unfinished, and some I've lost inspiration for some, but I do have one I haven't posted. I've been working on it, and if you really really want me to, I could either PM you it chapter by chapter, or actually post it for more people to read. c:

[goldh31]

I'd love to read the book!

[oakdenugg]

Bump

[Mooncloud4]

Wow. I love this. -speechless- Are you going to make more storys like this?

[oakdenugg]

Thanks! c:

Stories like this only really come when I'm in the mood. It's hard to write a happy story in a depressing mood and vice versa. So I can't really give an exact time.

But thank you for your comment! It means a lot!

[Mooncloud4]

-nods- I get it. And thanks!!!