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Should AJ Have a sequel?

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Re: Ash's Journal (AJ)

Postby WhiteKitsune » Fri Dec 14, 2012 8:08 pm

PaintLily wrote:wow really good story! I read all the entries and almost all of the comments, And I only found out about this just today, I did a lot of reading but hey, reading is fun! Nice Job on TINACS aswell, the only reason I found out about this is because I saw TINACS and I saw a few posts about your other story, I wanted to find it, I was going to search for it but then I saw it, anyways enough of m blabering, AWESOME STORY!


Thank you! That really makes my day!

*Blackberry* wrote:I don't know, but you keep bumping this when there is no new entry. Maybe you should stop bumping and when you finally get rid of your WB, then post. Cause bumping it, keeps making me think there is new entry.


I keep bumping it so other people can read it. Not many people look on the second to third page.
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*Blackberry* wrote:I don't know, but you keep bumping this when there is no new entry. Maybe you should stop bumping and when you finally get rid of your WB, then post. Cause bumping it, keeps making me think there is new entry.


White isn't bumping, shes answering questions. Infact, the last person who actually "bumped" was you.


Sometimes I answer questions the other times I bump it.

Just please dont start an arguement on my thread. This is a story, not a debate/ arguement.

School ends soon, hopefully my WB is gone by then.
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Re: Ash's Journal (AJ)

Postby Midnightstars4 » Mon Dec 17, 2012 9:30 pm

*Comes out of suspened stalker animation* Yay, new entry! i really want to find out what happens next. i have been on lately but i have also been getting ready for Christmas and (eating chocolates off of the tree when my family are not looking) :D
POTATO *Chomp*. I await this story's final chapter.
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Re: Ash's Journal (AJ)

Postby Celestial•Fox » Wed Dec 19, 2012 11:35 am

Cant wait to see how this ends White!
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Re: Ash's Journal (AJ)

Postby WhiteKitsune » Thu Dec 20, 2012 11:54 am

Yesh, I changed my username. Its only temorary, but I like it :3 If you see another person around with my old username, its my friend reseving it for me!
You can still call me White... or Sparklez :3

Entry 34

So AJ. I have a plan, its not fool proof, but its a plan. I'm going to get the rest of the Spirits to channel their power into the air. The problem is... Do they know how to? How will I beable to use it?
Right now, my most concerning concern should be trying to avoid Dark Moon. That will be almost impossible. Oh well, I'll still give it a try.
Dark looked at me.
"So, new girl, what will it be. You just standing there and me making you suffer, or you dancing and possibly living?" He snarled.
"I'll take the one with Eternal hell and suffering, thank you very much." I'm such a pessemist.
"Very well then. Star?" he call out, searching the room for Star.
"Yes sir?" Star spoke from behind us, giving only Dark Moon a fright.
"Take this.... thing to a seperate cavern. Torture her till she gives in." And with that Dark Moon walked away, the furious expression clear on his face.
Star gazed after him untill he disapeered. She then turned to me with a smirk on her face.
"You really don't know what you're in for, do you? You should have just obeyed him." She asked cruely.
"I'd rather choose eternal hell and suffering than dance with him." I shrugged.
I'm going to get myself killed one day, with all this pessemism. I'm just great at it. So great I just bought myself into possible years of torture. What an idiot I am.
A tingle in the air made me remember about that brilliant plan of mine. Why am I being an optimist now? Gosh...
Now I just have to wait untill I'm sure that everyone has chanelled there power into the air.
"Come" Star snarled, dragging me from the room by my arm.
"Esh little girl, don't try be mean when you're not, after all, you're just a little version of me. Come to the pesemistic side."
I didn't actually say that to her. I just imagined saying it to her. It was kinda funny though, in my head.
A clear sharp voice spoke throuogh my head, right at the moment when I imagined that.
They have all done what you told me to tell them. Don't reply. Star is dragging you off.
Great, now I jsut need to figure out how to use that power...
Star tugged my arm again, but this time harder.
"Stop messing around and come." She growled.
Oh AJ, the life of a pessemist.


Finally! I managed to finish an entry! Sorry for the horribly misspelled word, pessemist. If you Don't know whhat it is, its the opisite of an optimist.

All underlined and italicised writing together are telepathic conversation.
and just plain underlined is what she imagines saying.

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Re: Ash's Journal (AJ)

Postby WhiteKitsune » Thu Dec 20, 2012 2:34 pm

Will do another entry later today. New entry also on TINACS.
Working on a new book. Not posted yet, but its a different and new idea ;)
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Re: Ash's Journal (AJ)

Postby Celestial•Fox » Fri Dec 21, 2012 12:30 pm

Nooooo White! Why u change username? D:

Ps. Me likey new entry :3
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Re: Ash's Journal (AJ)

Postby WhiteKitsune » Fri Dec 21, 2012 12:32 pm

ForeverLoving99 wrote:Nooooo White! Why u change username? D:

Ps. Me likey new entry :3


hehe thanks Forever <3

I changed it cause I needed change :3
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Re: Ash's Journal (AJ)

Postby star star. » Fri Dec 21, 2012 12:34 pm

CaptainSparklez wrote:
ForeverLoving99 wrote:Nooooo White! Why u change username? D:

Ps. Me likey new entry :3


hehe thanks Forever <3

I changed it cause I needed change :3

*psst* Forever! White has a new nickname! PM me and I shallith tellith youith!!! *evil laugh*





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Re: Ash's Journal (AJ)

Postby WhiteKitsune » Fri Dec 21, 2012 12:45 pm

Noooo Don't tell Forever! She shall mock me online AND offline D:
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Re: Ash's Journal (AJ)

Postby Celestial•Fox » Fri Dec 21, 2012 12:47 pm

L U C K Y W A R wrote:
CaptainSparklez wrote:
ForeverLoving99 wrote:Nooooo White! Why u change username? D:

Ps. Me likey new entry :3


hehe thanks Forever <3

I changed it cause I needed change :3

*psst* Forever! White has a new nickname! PM me and I shallith tellith youith!!! *evil laugh*


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