AnneliseMorgan wrote:Rainpelt wrote:@AnneliseMorgan: Please go on, I like it so far
When I get more opinions, I will. ^_^ I'm having fun with this story.
I love it; keep going. ^ ^
AnneliseMorgan wrote:Rainpelt wrote:@AnneliseMorgan: Please go on, I like it so far
When I get more opinions, I will. ^_^ I'm having fun with this story.
EmpireAnts wrote:OHJESUS.
Annelise, please keep going. It's fantastic so far!
Keeps reminding me I need to pick up the story I was working on.... I lost interest and dropped it. xD
WarriorCat33 wrote:AnneliseMorgan wrote:Rainpelt wrote:@AnneliseMorgan: Please go on, I like it so far
When I get more opinions, I will. ^_^ I'm having fun with this story.
I love it; keep going. ^ ^
iBrevity wrote:xxx
[nameless] ♀ xxx Ceres ♀
Those who bathe in blood never get used to the feel of water.
I wander through my artistic portrait like the author I am. My signature is flourishly written everywhere; in the customary way the bodies are propped upside down to drain as much blood as possible, in the way that my clever feet are careful to avoid the cooling puddles and I leave no hints in my wake. I am a perfect killer. I have no weaknesses.
This family was chosen for their gay colors and their vibrant attitudes. It was a close, affection family of members who adored one another, shared their secrets, protected their backs. There had been sixteen of them when I started.
A small groan makes my ear prick and I stop, eyes dialating, a small frown twisting my mouth. It is a sound that specifically comes from a dying human.
I follow the small sounds into the back bedroom, the first place I had begun my rage. My slaughtering was always so messy in the beginning; the mother had been torn to pieces, arms flung across the stained bed, head lolling on the lamp shade like some obscene ornament. The foolish woman had sought to protect her daughter from me.
I paused, looking at the half-closed closet, and cursed myself. I had ripped her throat out and left her gasping for air, and I tsked myself when I realized I never checked to make certain she had died. Damn.
Pushing open the hinged doors, I look down at the girl that is sucking in her last breaths. Her eyes are huge. She looks up at me and I suspect to watch hate color her gaze, and a scream to tear out of her ravaged throat. I wait twenty seconds. It ticks by on the traditional clock behind me. After a minute, I crouch down in front of her and quirk a brow at her. Her expression contains no hate. If anything, there is a deep, everlasting pity in her dying eyes.
For some reason, the emotion annoys me. I grab her beneath her chin and yank her up against the wall. I notice absently that she might only be a year or two younger then me. I must have mistaken her age earlier, judging by the vibrant pink walls of her childish room and the lace that adorned practically everything.
"What's your name, kid?" I know it probably confuses her to be called kid by a woman who looks to be her same age, but I am immortal. I haven't changed by appearance in sixty years.
She opens her mouth like a fish with its gills cut and spits out, "Ceres." The light dims from her eyes. She falls limp in my hands, but I can still detect the barely thrumming pulse in her throat. It is not too late to save her.
I growl to myself, toss the young woman over my shoulder, and turn to leave.
I have just broken the oldest rule of my knighthood, yet I can find little regret in my soul.
{I'm planning on continuing this. <:3}
RedBlueGreen wrote:
Refrained Graffiti(Fita)+Beguiling Charms(Will)+Treasured Spice(Cin)
I love you Kim xD
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I love you too Banas! -throws you against building-
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*is stuck to a building and is all bloody* oh yes Kim this is love
Wendigo wrote:You know what I thought of as soon as I saw the android dogs? If you thought "creepy Pygmalion syndrome" you're correct!![]()
FUEGO001 (male) x Dr. Cheri Fontaine (female)
Both are anthro in this story.
(From the notes of Dr. Cheri Fontaine.)
They cut off my funding.
They used fancy words like "unethical" and "narcissistic." Half describing my experiment and half describing myself. But what do they know? The board of research for the university medical program is made up of lobbyists and fools, bureaucratic morons who only care about money and getting their names published and their egos stroked.
What's wrong with creating the perfect creature? Considering how stupid the general populous has become, I do not see this being a bad thing. How can one not fall in love with something so powerful and raw? So perfect in every way. Smart, beautiful, strong... all of which I made. ME. I am nothing short of a god, granted with the power to give life and take it away.
Narcissistic... what's so vain about creating a perfect version of yourself and loving the end product? They don't understand the genius and work it took to get this far. They think they can stop me by waving a checkbook in my face and telling me I can't have any. They're wrong, I don't value money, money is worthless to me. I value science, and the science I put into this synthetic being.
I have named him FUEGO001. He is the first of a series of artificial intelligence. Half wolf, half machine, all mine. He calls me "master" as well he should. I have found many uses for him thus far, but until one of those lobbyists finally pushes me over the edge, FUEGO001 will remain a lover, not a fighter.
Hm, now that I think about it, a mad scientist using her creation for revenge is tacky and overdone. Perhaps a new method of revenge is in order.
- Dr. Cheri Fontaine
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