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::Empty Titles:: [2] Pg. 28 by Syla Delaney

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::Empty Titles:: [2] Pg. 28

Postby Syla Delaney » Mon Dec 10, 2012 11:25 am



I'm sorry everyone.
I had to do this.
The other page was considered 'too gory'. And I had to block it out.
I know what you guys would say if I left it like that. And I can't even think about NOT having that page.
It was far too pivotal.
Too much later in the story hinges on this moment.

Master is clutching his face under the happy smiley.
And you all know what Zane's sword looks like.
Everything else is because of what happened during the livestream.
It all matches with the extreme absurdity of the situation in general.
And everyone knows that I would rather quit the site than let someone delete my art.
Especially when I personally don't think that it's nearly as bad as other pages throughout the site.
Whatever...
If it's not ok, it's not ok.

So here. He's got a big smiley face over him now.
The sword is happy too.
Everyone is happy happy happy.
Party time everyone.

-Endofangryrant-

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Hahhh... Hahhh... Well Zane, looks like you sure came a long way from that kid I took in all those years ago. Good move. Didn't think you had it in yourself to turn and get your old Master. In fact, you used to not even meet the eyes of another person.
To think YOU of all my apprentices... is the true terror.
I don't know what that means.
Hahahahaha.... you will...trust me. You'll figure it out.
TELL ME!
Nahhh... My time here is just about up now. Get rid of Puppetmaster for me. I wouldn't be able to STAND it if they kept on while I fell behind. We never even got to settle things. And gosh, all the earfuls I'm going to get from Gunman and Summoner.
Ahh well. I'm overdue. Goodbye Zane. Well played.
Goodbye, Master. I'm never going to look back again. I'm never going to think about you again. You're going to be forgotten. Just like everyone you left behind like open air. Just like every single splinter you took me to, just to watch fade away. From this moment, I won't live looking behind me for a shadow, or shaking every time I think about you. I'm finished.
You're finished.
And now I'm free.


Well said, Zane.But I'm sorry to say that free is not something that you are.
Please, I have no fight with you. What do you even want? I thought you and the master hated each other! He's gone now. I don't want to bother with you again. I've done nothing wrong.
It's not what you've done, Zane. It's what you WILL do. He told you that you were the TRUE terror, yes? That, is why I must end you now.
BUT I DON'T KNOW WHAT THAT MEANS!
It MEANS, that you will do terrible things. It MEANS that you will bring about anguish, death, destruction... and cut the universe's single thread in two. It MEANS that you will be the end. And you won't be able to help it...
NO! That's not who I am! I can't do all of that... I'm just... I'm just me! I'm not dangerous, or deadly or...
From the angle of an oak seedling, there is no way it could see over a single blade of grass. But years later, it towers over even the human that planted it. You won't have a choice, Zane. So I am giving you one now.
What?
Let me end you here. Quietly, silently. Peacefully. And it will spare the others of this splinter. All of your new friends. Could you imagine hurting them because of your selfishness?
I... I don't understand... I don't know what to say...
It's a simple decision. Run, and die a coward. Or lay down your pride, and die a hero, for the sake of those you care about.
I will. For them, for Alyna... I'll let you.
Please.
I don't want to be a monster.
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Re: ::Empty Titles:: [2] Pg. 28

Postby Syla Delaney » Mon Dec 10, 2012 11:27 am

Also, if there are any specific parts you can remember from the old one, please tell me. And I'll slowly edit the dialogue until perfect.
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Re: ::Empty Titles:: [2] Pg. 28

Postby Keero » Mon Dec 10, 2012 11:32 am


    The dialogue sounds just about right.
    And geez, I laughed pretty hard when I saw the edits.
    Success hat. xD
    Anyhow, I hope you still continue this comic somehow. ;3;
    I don't know if I could live without it.
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Re: ::Empty Titles:: [2] Pg. 28

Postby Raventune » Mon Dec 10, 2012 11:35 am

Lol 'Primgles!' Though it's a shame the origanal was reported...at least I got to see it.
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Re: ::Empty Titles:: [2] Pg. 28

Postby Syla Delaney » Mon Dec 10, 2012 11:44 am

Yeah.
Not sure if I'll go to the trouble of putting up a huge fuss.
And PFFFFT!
I wouldn't quit this comic!
You'd have to ban me before I did that.
I'll keep going on my own path, regardless.
If, however, I start getting reported unfairly, yeah. I'll make a fuss.
Until then, you can count on me continuing.
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Re: ::Empty Titles:: [2] Pg. 28

Postby Syla Delaney » Mon Dec 10, 2012 12:28 pm

Thank you so much for moving this, mods.
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Re: ::Empty Titles:: [2] Pg. 28

Postby jillybean711 » Mon Dec 10, 2012 12:58 pm

XD I like this one a bit better.
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Re: ::Empty Titles:: [2] Pg. 28

Postby jillybean711 » Mon Dec 10, 2012 12:59 pm

Wheres the next page? Dx
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Re: ::Empty Titles:: [2] Pg. 28

Postby SnowStar » Mon Dec 10, 2012 1:02 pm

Heheh, Zafia looks like she is having fun in the background. x3
So full of hate were our eyes
That none of us could see
Our war would yield countless dead
But never victory
So let us cast arms aside
And like discard our wrath
Thou, in faith, will keep us safe
Whilst we find the path

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Re: ::Empty Titles:: [2] Pg. 28

Postby Syla Delaney » Mon Dec 10, 2012 1:14 pm

Thank you guys!
Next page is about half finished.
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